Based on a person who has received training as an orthodox professional screenwriter, no matter how much she likes the male protagonist Su Zhihao, she can't cover her conscience and say that this drama is not thunderous......

All right! If there is a college in the world that wants to publish a textbook specially used to complain, then this script must definitely include excerpts as a demonstration, all the imaginable hypocrisy, artificiality, inexplicable, all gathered in this script, the beginning of the story itself is not bad, some creative love sketches, but the first episode is not crooked, but the second episode inexplicably adds a suspense style, not to mention the third episode, which suddenly seems to have received food advertising fees, with a sense of rigid implantation of the restaurant tour.

If she didn't like Su Zhihao so much, she would definitely spray it worse than those netizens on the Internet, this whole script would never look like this, and many dialogues would have been added at a glance in order to increase Jin Suyuan's role during post-filming.

While drinking sweet soda, sprinkled with joy, Huang Zhener marked the differences between the script and the TV series, and crossed out the problematic plots and dialogues in the TV series and the script, and wrote on it how to change it would be more appropriate, and I was happy to write it, the script was densely covered with Huang Zhener's handwriting, as if the teacher was correcting an unqualified homework, but she had no intention of stopping at all, and the more she wrote, the more addicted she became, and then near the end of the third episode, her eyes began to be misty, and she felt a little dizzy, The cat next to him was warm again, and he fell asleep as soon as his eyelids were closed.

I slept until eleven o'clock at night.

Su Zhihao filmed for a day, he was tired from his heart to his physiology, and the emotional drama that was close to the end required a lot of emotional accumulation to achieve the most perfect explosive effect, and he went out to get the car this morning, and then went to meet with the advertising company, and worked almost non-stop all the way to just now.

"Zhen'er...... Goldie? Zhan Zhan? When he opened the door, Su Zhihao couldn't help frowning. It's strange, why didn't the two baby daughters who usually go to the door to greet them home when they heard the sound of the key didn't show up?

Taking off his leather shoes, changing into indoor shoes and walking into the living room, Su Zhihao didn't know where he should start.

Not to mention the scripts scattered all over the place, there are empty snack bags on the ground, and the most important thing is that Huang Zhener fell asleep with an unfinished drink in her hand, and then scattered it all over the ground, even if these Su Zhihao didn't care about her, seeing Xiao Tangerine, who should be isolated in the upstairs room, also appeared on the sofa, this was really unbearable.

"What are you doing here? Huang Zhen'er, are you lawless? Su Zhihao walked to Huang Zhen'er angrily, his volume was quite loud, Xiao Jin and Zhan Zhan woke up immediately, jumped on the sofa lightly, and coquettishly played with Su Zhihao, and Xiao Tang also opened his eyes slightly, stuck out his tongue, and began to comb the hair on his body.

But those who shouldn't wake up are awake, and the most awake ones are still sleeping soundly, without the warmth of the cat, Huang Zhen'er shrunk his body, but he just didn't plan to wake up.

How long did she sleep today? Look at the clothes on her body are the same as the ones I saw when I went to her room to leave a note this morning, could it be that she slept all day, playing chess with Zhou Gong and playing an extended match?

Su Zhihao picked up the drink she had drunk halfway through, and almost fainted after looking at it, could she have drunk this fruit wine as a soda? The last time he went abroad for a tour handshake party, some fans said that this is a local specialty, different from ordinary fruit beer, this wine has a higher alcohol concentration, but it still has the fragrance of fruit, he saw that there were two empty cans next to him, plus half of the unfinished drink in his hand, if Huang Zhener drank this as a drink, then she should not be asleep now, but drunk.

A burst of anger came up, he was running outside for a day, and the assistant was drunk at home and dreaming of death, is this like words?

slapped the sofa twice, Huang Zhener didn't wake up, turned over, gestured in the air with both hands, and muttered in his mouth: "What kind of third-rate script is this, my eyes hurt when I read it......"

"Have you made enough trouble, hurry up!" The raging anger burned, and he didn't dare to make it too loud, for fear of scaring the cat next to him, he picked up the script scattered on the ground and held it in his hand, eager to knock it on Huang Zhen'er's head, but on the forehead where the hair was scattered, a large bruise from falling yesterday attracted his attention, Su Zhihao had something more in his heart, he snorted, and decided to look at it for yesterday's sake, and today he didn't see this picture.

Out of sight is clean, took the script to the kitchen, first opened the refrigerator and took out a pot of Caesar salad with cheese sauce, and opened a bottle of red wine, while waiting for the time to decant the wine, he pulled a chair with a backrest, took out a special red wine glass, and gently poured half a glass of red wine, shaking the glass, the aroma of grapes filled the air.

The taste of cheese neutralized the slightly astringent taste of this wine, Su Zhihao finally felt that the nerves that had been tense for a day were relaxed, he held his head, put down the wine glass and rubbed his temples, he turned his head and saw the small words with lead marks on the script that fell on the ground.

Let's see what it looks like, shall we? Thinking that this was also Huang Zhen'er messing around, he turned the first side, with the mentality of reading leisure books, and re-watched the revised script.

As if opening Pandora's box, Su Zhihao had unconsciously drunk the first glass of wine, he continued to read page by page, occasionally stopping to simulate the scenes and lines inside, trying in different tones, without the slightest intention of stopping.

It's been a long time since I've been fascinated by the script and the role, a good script can resonate with the actors, before moving the audience, let the actor enter the role, I didn't expect to just modify a few actions, a few lines, this rotten unwatchable play, can have such a big change, it originally seemed to be an abrupt place, but after polishing, it became just the right spiritual turn.

After watching the first episode, Su Zhihao immediately picked up the second book, but before that, he went to the living room first, regardless of the three-seven-twenty-one shaking Huang Zhen'er's shoulder.

"Wake up! Wake up! ”

Still couldn't wake up, he simply squatted in front of Huang Zhen'er and helped her into a sitting posture.

"What's the matter, I'm sleeping......" Huang Zhen'er barely opened her eyes, and half of her drunkenness did not subside, she kicked her feet up and down in protest.

"Let me ask you, did you change the script?"

Before the wine woke up, Huang Zhen'er replied quickly, "Of course I changed it, what a bad script, I have to change it once from beginning to end, change it once...... They don't have any pretension for your character at all......"

"When are you going to write a script?" Su Zhihao asked.

Unable to wait for an answer, Huang Zhen'er leaned forward, rested her head on Su Zhihao's shoulder, and fell asleep again in a gesture close to hugging.