Saturday, December 3, morning, Nanjing, sunny.

The calendar shows that this day is the Xia Yuan Festival, however, Zhao Yan is not clear about what the Xia Yuan Festival is, and no one in the school seems to have this festival, what should everyone do.

On this morning, Zhao Yan took a pen and paper into the classroom of the computer class of the No. 3 teaching building, and sat alone in the back row of the classroom by the window, squinting at the campus outside the window, but thinking about the script of "Full Moon Scimitar" and what other places to modify.

Three days ago, the adaptation plan he proposed was approved by Lin Fusheng, and he signed an adaptation contract of 500,000 yuan on the spot, two days ago, Xiao Mengyue returned to Xicheng, saying that it was not good for him to always ask for leave to accompany her, and he needed time to hurry up and write the script of "Full Moon Scimitar" to Lin Fusheng, and she also wanted to go back to accompany her mother as soon as possible.

In two days, Zhao Yan had already written the script of "Full Moon Scimitar", the format was searched from the Internet, and according to the script format searched on the Internet, the script that had been adapted was written, and it was written in the notebook in front of him, not a laptop.

Cause?

It is more convenient to write novels on the computer, but for something as elaborate as writing a script, Zhao Yan still feels that a paper notebook is more convenient.

He can easily draw a character relationship diagram on paper, and when he is interested, he can design a sword that he thinks is cooler on the paper, swordsmanship moves, and even a character image He can also sketch a general image by his temperament, hehe, his talent for painting doesn't seem to be very good, and the people he draws are too abstract, and he can't always draw what he imagines in his mind, but when he is interested, he is still happy to do it.

This script was divided into seven parts by Zhao Yan.

The first part is Ding Peng's challenge to Qingping sword master Shi Ding; the second part challenges the big disciple of the Huashan faction, "Chasing the Wind Sword" Ge Qi; The third part challenges Guo Zhengping, the head of the Iron Sword Gate "Songyang Swordsman"; The fourth part is Yanagi Wakamatsu; The fifth part is the sword god Xie Xiaofeng; Part VI: The Marquis of Purple Clothes.

Of these six parts, the first five games were all actively challenged by Ding Peng, and the sixth part was like the book "Full Moon Scimitar" published by Zhao Yan, it was the purple marquis who found Ding Peng.

The active and passive challenges are different, but the result is the same, six sword matches. The result was all won by Ding Peng.

The seventh part of the script is the high/climactic part of the movie, the duel between Ding Peng and Sword Fairy.

In this script, there are two duels in the seventh part, one time Ding Peng used an extraterrestrial meteor to face off against the Sword Immortal, but because of the beauty scheme, he was ruined and was knocked down to the cliff of the Immortal Mountain where the Sword Immortal lived in seclusion. This leads to the plot of Ding Peng's cultivation of the full moon scimitar, as well as the appearance of the real heroine Qingqing.

The final showdown in the seventh part is the final high/climax of the whole movie.

Lin Fusheng is very satisfied with such an overall plot, and Zhao Yan also feels that there is no problem, and now the script has been written. But he suddenly felt that this kind of plot was still a little thinner! Especially in the first six showdowns, if it is just a sideways push over without suspense, it seems that in addition to fighting is fighting, such a plot may be very enjoyable for martial arts fans, but for non-martial arts fans, it seems to be a little boring.

What elements to add?

Or, what kind of plot can be added to make people like the character of Ding Peng more?

As far as Zhao Yan saw the front part of the original version of "Full Moon Scimitar". Ding Peng's character image setting is not very pleasing, first, Ding Peng, who has just entered the rivers and lakes, is too simple, except for a meteor outside the sky, no one can stop him, his personality is dull and silent, and he has almost no scheming at all. Liu Ruosong's procrastination and beauty tricks, he can't see through them, and he can simply make readers feel aggrieved to death.

Although the script that has been adapted now, the beauty trick is no longer performed by Liu Ruosong. But Ding Peng, who only challenges everywhere to get ahead, is still difficult to like.

So, how about adding a character to his side? A profit-hungry character instigated Ding Peng to challenge everywhere. Borrowing Ding Peng's swordsmanship to make money everywhere?

Thinking in his heart, Zhao Yan began to build the character on the manuscript paper, and at the same time, imagined in his mind the role of the added character in the seven-part plot, as well as the final fate.

Zhao Yan lowered his head and wrote hundreds of words in one breath, suddenly frowned, thought about it, and crossed out all the words he had just written with a pen.

He suddenly felt that adding one more character would add a lot to the plot of the movie, and these extra plots would make the first six parts of the movie seem loose, without the momentum of the sword out of the sheath and moving forward.

Ding Peng has a stunt, he has just entered the rivers and lakes, and he wants to become famous everywhere, he should have a sharp sword out of the sheath and an indomitable momentum, weakening this momentum, and when he faces off with the sword fairy in the seventh part, he will not be sharp enough, and when he is calculated by the beauty of the sword fairy and ruined, he will not have the huge sense of loss caused by the sudden break of the strings.

Right! That's how it feels!

Ding Peng's first six battles, the opponent is getting stronger and stronger, just like a heart-pounding, can't help yourself piano song, brilliant like the Yangtze River rushing down, and the sword fairy duel, because the beauty is ruined, then like the middle of the rushing Yangtze River suddenly collapsed down hundreds of meters, Ding Peng's life is like falling sharply from above the waterfall, and finally fell into the bottom of the pool, and after he was rescued by Qingqing, his life suddenly entered a calm and sweet period, such as entering the paradise, where he learned the full moon scimitar.

The last duel with the Sword Immortal was like a huge wave suddenly rising thousands of feet high on the surface of the lake, when the huge wave fell, it meant that the last battle was over, and the lake returned to calm, symbolizing that Ding Peng's life had truly entered a beautiful period of calm from now on.

That's what you want!

Zhao Yan was about to set the style for the various swordsmanship in the script when the mobile phone in his pocket suddenly rang.

On Saturday, there were also more than a dozen people in this classroom who were studying on their own, and the mobile phone rang suddenly, not only Zhao Yan frowned, but several people in the classroom looked back at Zhao Yan dissatisfied.

When Zhao Yan saw it, he quickly folded his hands and apologized to these alumni with a smile, and after the students retracted their gaze, Zhao Yan quickly took out his mobile phone, and when he saw an unfamiliar number on the screen, his brows furrowed again.

Hurriedly got up and walked to the corridor outside the classroom, and Zhao Yan answered the phone.

"Hello? Hello! Are you Mr. Zhao Yan? ”

The voice of a middle-aged woman on the phone, Zhao Yan was sure that he had never heard this voice.

"I am! Who are you? ”

"Huh! Hello Mr. Zhao Yan! I'm Wu Xuan's agent! We Xuan Xuan like the songs you wrote very much, and I would like to ask you to help her write a few songs, the price is easy to say, I don't know if Mr. Zhao Yan has been inconvenient recently? ”

It's about singing again!

Zhao Yan pursed his lips helplessly and replied, "I'm sorry! I don't have time or feeling lately, so you can find someone else! ”

"Huh? Mr. Zhao Yan, don't be in a hurry to refuse! The price is really good to say! Look at our ......"

"I'm sorry!"

Zhao Yan hung up the call without waiting for her to finish, it's not that he is too cold and doesn't know how to be a person, but a similar call, since Yu Qiluo released a new album and successfully broke through a platinum sales, and the sales volume is still growing, there are more and more big and small singers calling his mobile phone to make songs, almost every day there are several such calls, at the peak, Zhao Yan received more than 20 such calls a day, at the beginning, Zhao Yan also refused in line with the idea of not offending people, but after a long time, there are too many similar calls, He was in no mood to perfunctory these people.

It looks like the mobile phone number is going to be changed! I don't know how these people are so powerful, they all got his number, I don't know who leaked it, or he didn't delete it after he advertised and sold songs on the Internet some time ago.

In fact, his recent life is not only harassment by phone, like today, if he doesn't walk into the classroom of the computing class randomly, whether he stays in the dormitory, or in the classroom of the writing class, it is difficult for him to get clean, Zhang Peng, Li Yan, Xu Ping, Xie Dengyun, Nian Xiaobai, these classmates who are usually close to him will chat with him without mentioning it, and some classmates in this class and other classes may also come to him at any time, some simply want to make friends with him, some want to publish works in Youjian Qi, and want to get a recommendation from him. There are also some girls who pride themselves on their beauty and want to hook up with him.

Like Emily and Blaise who found him in the cafeteria, this world is like this! Some boys who are bent on finding a girlfriend can't find it, and it's not uncommon for girls to have a meal; Giving flowers and gifts may also be thrown into the trash by girls; Some boys even follow the example of foreign devils, kneeling in front of girls with flowers, and they still refuse to be rejected by girls because of their dignity and face.

And for other boys, there is no need to pursue, and beautiful girls will automatically paste upside down.

For example, handsome, rich, and backgrounded......

Like Zuo Xiaoxian in Zhao Yan's class, because his family has money and a generous hand, since he entered school, there has always been no shortage of girls around him, like Min Changming, Li Chuan and others, there are also girls who are willing to get close to them.

What about Zhao Yan? When he first entered the school, he was inconspicuous in the 44th writing class, he was not the most handsome, the richest was not him, his family background was not to mention, and he was still not the most valued by teachers and wanted to focus on cultivating.

In addition, Zhao Yan was cold at that time, which made people feel difficult to get close to, and he had been sitting in the back row of the classroom, so no girls had paid attention to him.

But it's different recently, first he sold songs and sold millions of copyright fees, which was enough to attract many girls, and then many people heard that the novels he wrote were also selling well, and then bought the sword qi novel network, and a good kung fu, when the girls looked at him again, they found that this kid was actually very attractive, the more he looked at it, the more handsome he became, he had money and talent to play, and he was a little handsome.

Of course, among all the girls who chased him, Li Liya was the most beautiful and famous. Although in fact, it was a misunderstanding that Li Liya chased Zhao Yan backwards, but Li Liya did not explain, and Zhao Yan did not explain, so everyone thought that Li Liya really chased Zhao Yan backwards.

ps: Friend's new book "Star Notes", seedlings need to be cared for! Eggs/Friends who hurt can go and check it out! Hehe. (To be continued......)

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