From the very beginning of this book, I have already thought about the ending, the hole to be dug in the main line and how to fill it, but unfortunately, it was written in the middle. (Actually, I thought my main story setting was okay)

After finishing this book, summarize the lessons:

1. What is the style at the beginning, it must be strictly continued, and you can't blindly change the style because you are afraid of using the old routine.

I just think that the players are too scattered to write about this book, and it's not interesting to repeat the funny stalks, so I think about turning to traditional fantasy in the middle, and the summoned player is a golden finger. Now it seems that I am still too young. It's better to start from the beginning.

2. Character design, especially the protagonist's personality.

In fact, at the beginning, the main characters of my book were set up, such as children, such as dog gods, such as Brother Ba, these important characters, I designed their own way of speaking and doing things, but I only forgot the protagonist, because I only wanted the protagonist to be a tool man from the beginning, so all his actions were for the fun plot service, resulting in the protagonist's changing personality and three views are not correct (in fact, there are some places where I wrote this on purpose, because he is not full of soul and wants to dig a pit, but the reader doesn't know, digging and digging they won't read it.) 。 ）

There are also some small problems, so I won't go into details, after all, there are still a lot to gain from the first book.

I'm a little confused about what to open next, and I have two thoughts in my mind:

The first idea is an anti-routine entertainment text, similar to this book, the protagonist is in a city in parallel time and space, through a weird website, summoning some trainees (players) from the earth, these trainees regard the world where the protagonist is located as a star game, so they are not afraid of heaven and earth, and they also transplant songs and movies on the earth, so the protagonist's entertainment company is getting more and more popular, bigger and stronger.

The second idea is that the Dihua type fantasy, the protagonist has crossed with the [Skin Mall], and this system can't give the protagonist any substantial help, and the protagonist can only draw skins in this system. For example, when testing talent, he drew a super genius skin, and after equipping this skin, the protagonist's talent is still rubbish, but others think he's a genius. In the same way, there is also a high-strength skin.,His strength hasn't changed.,But others think he's a master.;In the middle stage, there may be a little skin that changes the character.,The protagonist will become another person after equipping it.。

Readers who are fortunate enough to see here, you can leave a message to help me make a choice, like the first idea of the deduction 1, like the second idea of the deduction 2, both do not like the deduction 0. Thank you!

Also, don't ask me why I finished the book so quickly, if I ask, I am poor, I am dying of hunger!