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Hearing the knock on the door, Xiao Jian couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief, got up from the bed with some weakness, wiped the sweat from his forehead, and walked towards the door.

There are only five primary skills, but it took Xiao Jian most of the day, and when he came back, it was still empty, but now it was all red sky.

However, fortunately, although the last four skills still made Xiao Jian suffer, with the increase of primary skills, the capacity of the brain will also increase a lot, and the pain when fighting huàn will be reduced.

Of course, the pain is reduced, and the benefits such as increased memory are also reduced a lot, which can be said to be good and bad.

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Opening the door and looking at the slim Zhou Huimin in front of him, Xiao Jian couldn't help but be stunned, and asked in surprise, "Huh?" So soon, are you already out of school? ”

&Ugh. Zhou Huimin walked into the room with a smile: "Brother Xiao, why are you sweating, what are you doing at home?" ”

Closing the door, Xiao Jian said with a smile: "I exercised my body for a while just now. ”

There are some things that can only be known by himself, and it is impossible to sue sù to others, and Xiao Jian has never thought of suing sù anyone.

didn't want to talk about these things, Xiao Jian changed the topic and said, "Amin, is the comic drawn again, show it to me." ”

& This is what I have revised in the past few days according to your opinion, Brother Xiao, how about you take a look? Zhou Huimin handed Xiao Jian a stack of sketches in her hand, her pretty face full of anticipation.

It's been more than half a month since the last time I decided to draw "Dragon Ball" together, and during this time, she also drew the first word four times, but unfortunately she was beaten back by Xiao Jian with a "no" and asked her to redraw, this is the fifth time.

didn't look at Zhou Huimin, Xiao Jian took the sketch to the side of the sofa and sat down, and read it carefully.

As soon as he opened the first page, Xiao Jian's brows couldn't help frowning, and he sighed secretly, the picture is very beautiful, both the characters and the scenery are very beautiful, but, this is a kind of estrangement from the bloody battle comics, in his opinion, it looks like a girl manga more than a bloody battle comics.

However, Xiao Jian didn't blame Zhou Huimin, he himself knew that he was too embarrassed for this girl.

Comics can't be compared with novels, not only are they troublesome to draw, but the difficulty is also much higher than novels, and Zhou Huimin is only good at drawing, and it only takes less than a month to get in touch with comics, even if he writes scripts, but it is impossible for him to draw comics comparable to Akira Toriyama in such a short period of time.

Thinking of this, Xiao Jian couldn't help but sigh secretly: "Maybe my requirements are too high." ”

& Dragon Ball is a classic and a masterpiece in his heart, so he doesn't want to ruin this comic, and it is precisely because of this that he threw the comic back over and over again and asked Zhou Huimin to redraw it.

Looking at the frowning Xiao Jian, the expectation on Zhou Huimin's white and pretty face slowly receded, replaced by loss, she knew that she had not had it this time.

But the loss is only a moment, the stubborn Zhou Huimin quickly cheered up, although she didn't like the comics very much, but, since she had promised Xiao Jian, she would not allow herself to retreat, five times if it doesn't work, then draw it fifty times, fifty times it won't work, then draw it five hundred times, and draw it until the behavior.

Xiao Jian, who was peeking at Zhou Huimin, couldn't help but secretly breathe a sigh of relief when he saw this, and the thoughts in his heart couldn't help but shake again, and his thoughts drifted a little and looked at the sketch in his hand.

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With a sigh of surprise, Xiao Jian's face showed a look of surprise, closed it again, and looked at it from the beginning again, this time from beginning to end, without pausing in the middle, and no longer looking at it with a faulty eye, but as a comic book fan.

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Closing the comic, Xiao Jian's face couldn't help but show a smile, closed his eyes, and slowly recalled.

Although the general plot of the original book has been forgotten, Akira Toriyama's style still remains in his memory, and he has always wanted Zhou Huimin to draw Akira Toriyama's style, which is the so-called 'bloody battle comics' in his imagination.

However, just now, Xiao Jian found that his point of view was wrong, Zhou Huimin was Zhou Huimin, she could not become Toriyama Ming, and naturally it was impossible for Toriyama Ming to draw cartoons, and she could only draw cartoons of him Xiao Jian and Zhou Huimin.

What's more, I abandoned the idea of finding faults, and as a pure reader, the comic in my hand is not necessarily worse than the original book.

Xiao Jian admits that the comic in his hand is a little worse than the original in terms of blood, but with his script, it is not much worse, and with Zhou Huimin's excellent painting skills and the unique delicacy of women, the comic drawn is not bad in terms of viewing Cheng Dù, as well as the details of processing, and even the portrayal of battles, but is very good.

Put aside the inherent ideas in his heart, just look at the comics in his hand now, it is definitely a classic, no worse than the original book, as for the poor bit of blood, as long as he thinks more about the script in the future, he can still make up for it.

What's more, "Dragon Ball" was originally drawn in a hurry by Akira Toriyama, and it is not without flaws, but the classics of "Dragon Ball" cover them up, but he is standing on the basis of the original work, although he is not sure that the painting is better than Akira Toriyama, but, coupled with Zhou Huimin's excellent painting skills, Xiao Jian believes that the "Dragon Ball" drawn will definitely not be worse than the original work.

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Xiao Jian slapped the sketch in his hand vigorously, and said excitedly: "Amin, okay, let's go, let's go and submit." ”

Zhou Huimin habitually said: "I know, Brother Xiao, this time I will draw > well."

&haha"

Looking at Zhou Huimin with a surprised face, Xiao Jian couldn't help laughing, grabbed Zhou Huimin's hand, and ran outside: "Let's go, let's go and submit." ”

& Draft?! Zhou Huimin still couldn't get back, and followed Xiao Jian and left home: "Can you contribute?" That means that the cartoons I drew satisfied Brother Xiao. ”

&Hooray! Banzai! That's great! Hahaha"

Looking at Zhou Huimin, who was jumping up happily, the smile on Xiao Jian's face couldn't help but become thicker. The female head ignored it, and this girl is just a girl who is about to be sixteen years old.

After the excitement subsided, Zhou Huimin couldn't help but ask expectantly, "Brother Xiao, let's contribute to that comic weekly?" Is it the Jade Dynasty? ”

&Yes"

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