Xiao Mengyue really became the first reader of Zhao Yan's new book, since she told Zhao Yan on Lianxun that she was applying for Nanjing Hanlin College, the two would chat a few words on Lianxun every day, although they were just chatting on the Internet, but Zhao Yan was happy enough, so that his daily boring writing became less boring.

is also because the two will talk on the joint news every day, so Zhao Yan wrote the outline of the new book, Xiao Mengyue knew it for the first time, Zhao Yan wrote the first chapter of the new book, and Xiao Mengyue also knew it for the first time.

Naturally, she became the first reader of Zhao Yan's new book.

Zhao Yan sent the first two chapters he had written to her on Lianxun, and a few minutes later, Xiao Mengyue sent a smiling face expression.

Zhao Yan showed a smile, although he had expected Xiao Mengyue to praise him, he still sent a sentence expectantly.

"How? Is this beginning okay? ”

Mengyue: "Do you want to hear the truth or lie?" ”

Xiao Mengyue's question is a bit interesting.

Yan Zaixicheng: "Let's tell a lie first!" ”

Zhao Yan smiled and wanted to listen to two good sentences first.

Mengyue: "The lie is very good! ”

Yan Zaixicheng: "What about the truth?" ”

Zhao Yan was already mentally prepared, although he was very satisfied with the beginning of the book, but looking at Xiao Mengyue's tone, she seemed to have found a lot of faults. Maybe she doesn't think there's anything exciting about the master's rebirth?

Mengyue: "The truth is that the idea of this book is very novel! However, you still need to practice your writing, some sentences have grammatical errors, one idiom is inappropriate, and there are several typos in these two chapters. ”

At the end of this sentence, Xiao Mengyue also made an expression of covering her mouth and snickering.

Zhao Yan's face is a little feverish, and the grammar is wrong? Is there an idiom that is used incorrectly? And how many typos?

This is Zhao Yan's shortcomings, his Chinese studies grades can only be regarded as average, this situation often occurs in previous writing essays, compared to him Zhao Yan, Xiao Mengyue's academic performance has always been very good, since she said that he has grammatical errors in some sentences, as well as idioms and typos, Zhao Yan immediately believed it, and was discovered by the girl he liked, no matter how thick-skinned Zhao Yan was, he would inevitably feel ashamed.

However, ashamed, Zhao Yan rolled his eyes, and suddenly thought of a way to enhance the relationship between the two.

Yan Zaixicheng: "Hehe, essay pen, I'm definitely not as good as you!" Otherwise, how about you help me revise my manuscript when my manuscript is written in the future? ”

In the villa by the river in Xicheng, Xiao Mengyue saw the message sent by Zhao Yan, pursed her lips and smiled, two shallow pear vortices appeared, hesitated for a moment, and then replied: "Help you revise the manuscript, what good do I have?" ”

In the attic, when Zhao Yan saw Xiao Mengyue replying like this, she knew that she had actually agreed in her heart.

Yan Zaixi City: "What benefits do you want?" Whatever I can give you, I can! ”

In the riverside villa, Xiao Mengyue thought about it with a smile and replied: "Forget it, for the sake of your sincerity, I will be merciful and help you revise it in the future!" But you have to write well! It's not well written, I won't help you change it! ”

In the attic, seeing Xiao Mengyue reply like this, Zhao Yan's heart was full of joy, and the smile on his face was very bright.

So, from this day on, Zhao Yan has one more royal reviser, and every day the manuscript is written, Zhao Yan will send it to Xiao Mengyue as soon as possible, and Xiao Mengyue will not modify his storyline, only help him delete some useless nonsense, and correct some grammatical errors and typos.

Although Xiao Mengyue didn't change much, every time she sent the revised manuscript back, Zhao Yan found that the quality of the manuscript had improved a lot, and it was much more comfortable to read.

The improvement of the quality of the manuscript is secondary, Zhao Yan is most happy that Xiao Mengyue is willing to participate in his creation, every time he thinks of the manuscript he has written, Xiao Mengyue is the first reader, when Zhao Yan writes, he will be much more serious, he wants Xiao Mengyue to see his talent, not Xiao Mengyue After reading his manuscript, he feels that he is not very good.

As a result, unconsciously, the quality of Zhao Yan's new book has improved a lot compared to the previous "Full Moon Scimitar", and at the same time, the number of words written every day is gradually increasing, Zhao Yan wants to perform in front of Xiao Mengyue! Nature wanted her to see not only his talent, but also his efforts.

Writing as many words as possible every day is also the direction of Zhao Yan's efforts.

Love is a double-edged sword, it can ruin a person, or it can make a person forge ahead, Xiao Mengyue's existence has become a source of motivation for Zhao Yan to forge ahead.

……

When Zhao Yan's new book was written to almost 50,000 words, the results of this year's college entrance examination came out.

Zhao Yan did not take the college entrance examination, he had already received the notice of delivery from Hallym College a few days ago, it stands to reason that the day when the college entrance examination results came out was meaningless to him, but in fact, he still paid attention to the results of the college entrance examination.

For example, how many points did Xiao Mengyue score? Can I get into Hallym College?

How many points did Lou Wenhao score? Did Lin Langtian copy the answers he copied during the college entrance examination? Will he be able to go to a good university?

And how did the rest of the class and school students do in the exams? Zhao Yan is also curious.

Yan in Xicheng: "I heard that the results of the college entrance examination are out!" ”

Zhao Yan sent Xiao Mengyue this sentence on Lianxun, and he believed that Xiao Mengyue knew what he meant by saying this.

Maybe Xiao Mengyue was not next to the computer, and it took almost half an hour before Xiao Mengyue gave a reply.

Mengyue: "Well, it's out!" ”

There was a smiling expression at the end of Xiao Mengyue's reply, seeing this expression, Zhao Yan's heart was steady, it seems that Xiao Mengyue's score is no problem with Hanlin College, before today, Zhao Yan is also confident in Xiao Mengyue's results, but there will always be accidents in the college entrance examination, every year there are so many students who usually have good academic performance but have abnormal performance in the college entrance examination, Zhao Yan has been a little worried about Xiao Mengyue's abnormal performance in the college entrance examination in recent days.

Yan Zaixi City: "How many points do you have?" It's okay to go to Hallym Academy, right? ”

Although Zhao Yan guessed in his heart, he still wanted to see Xiao Mengyue give him an exact reply.

In the villa by the river, Xiao Mengyue smiled and replied: "416 points, don't worry!" It's no problem to go to Hallym Academy. ”

416 points, which doesn't seem like much, is actually an out-and-out high score! Because of the college entrance examination system of the Ming Dynasty, most candidates only need to take two or three courses, although the total score of a single Chinese culture has 300 points, but it is extremely difficult to score more than 400 points in two or three courses.

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Not only did Xiao Mengyue come here with good news, but Zhao Yan called to ask Lou Wenhao, and he also heard the good news he wanted to hear.

"Ah Yan! I scored 307 points! Ha ha! I scored 307 points! I should be able to get my first choice! Although we can't be at the same university in the future, we are both in Nanjing, how about it? That's good news, right? Let's report it together! ”

Lou Wenhao was very excited on the phone, when he filled in the college entrance examination, because he knew that the university where Zhao Yan was escorted was in Nanjing, so he also filled in a university in Nanjing as his first choice, and he didn't have any hope, but he didn't expect that during the college entrance examination, Lin Langtian, a student in class 1, sat in front of him, and made a deal with him to let him copy the Chinese culture test paper.

A total score of 300 in a Chinese culture, this course alone will bring Lou Wenhao more than 200 points, Lou Wenhao's first choice is Nanjing Business School, and the total score of 307 should be nine out of ten in Nanjing Business School.

Zhao Yan was naturally happy for him.

However, the good news that Zhao Yan heard only stopped there. There was no accident in Fan Long and Ji Yichun's college entrance examination results, Fan Long only scored 114 points, Ji Yichun was even lower, only 93 points, when Zhao Yan called them separately, Fan Long had already said on the phone that he was going to go out to work, his tone was a little gloomy, and he was a little envious of Zhao Yan and Lou Wenhao, especially Lou Wenhao.

Ji Yichun's tone on the phone was still so heartless, he was very grinning, and he didn't care about his college entrance examination results, but there was a sentence he said on the phone that made Zhao Yan smile.

Ji Yichun said casually on the phone: "My old man heard that I only scored 93 points, and he asked me if I was mentally retarded?" ”

(Thanks to Yu He, Gong Xuan Han, October Aquarius, Kunlun Luanyu, Shen Yuanzhi for rewarding 100 starting coins, 200 starting coins for Mingyue Leisurely that year, 300 starting coins for the handsome Wen Hao and Mingyue Guanlou, and thanks to Lin Fusheng for rewarding 1888 starting coins again.) ）