The farthest distance in the world

It is the distance between the bird and the fish

One soars in the sky, the other dives deep into the sea

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I don't know why, in the warm applause, there is an indescribable sadness brewing in everyone's hearts. The description of the last stanza of the poem made them unable to let go.

The distance between the bird and the fish has become the farthest distance in the world, and this metaphor, this image, and this artistic conception have suddenly become an indelible impression in the hearts of everyone.

"This poem ......" The sea finger and the island look at each other, and only feel that this poem has an inexplicable feeling.

Ten thousand of them disagree with the structure or imagery of this poem, and even Haizhi has to criticize the first two stanzas for being a little too bland, which is no different from saliva.

Even some of the images written later, such as trees, branches, and the tracks of the stars, can only be said to be very general images, and they have nothing to do with Gao Ming.

However, it is such a simple text, and in the end, as soon as the birds and fish come out, people have nothing to say.

"Love is a word ......" Haizhi suddenly remembered the paragraph written by Su Wen "I don't know what to do, go deep", isn't it in line with today's poem.

The farthest distance in the world is that I love you, but you don't know it!

Very simple words, very simple truths, but all the feelings of love!

"This poem is very graphic." Shima sighed and said, "This guy has incorporated some of the structure of the film into the poem. ”

"How?" Hai Zhi was a little puzzled.

Haidao explained: "When you come up, you can say 'the farthest distance in the world', which is the structure of Xu Huan, but in the beginning, Su Wen's text is more attractive. 'The farthest distance in the world / Not the distance between life and death / But I stand before you and you don't know that I love you'. Such an opening suddenly pulled the hearts of readers and listeners. Can't help but want to read his following. Aren't some sci-fi films in the movie all teasing the audience like this? Let's start with a very intense opening that attracts everyone, then start telling the story, and finally have a climax. Su Wen's poem is such a structure, and it has such a charm. No wonder listeners love it. Just look at the reactions of these students. ”

Haizhi acquiesced, and the students on the scene were about to go crazy, and they kept shouting Su Wen's name.

"So his writing, though simple, is likable." The island concluded.

"But ......," said Haizhi, "this poetry is not very good. ”

"It's just wonderful, isn't it?" Haidao laughed, "No one can guarantee that the poems written are excellent, and there are always some poems that are below the standard." Besides, poetry is the thing. What you want is emotional resonance. Xu Huan's "The World's Farthest Distance" does this, and Su Wen's "The World's Farthest Distance" does it. That's fine, isn't it? ”

Hai Zhi was silent and stopped talking.

Xu Huan's poems are really good, but Su Wen's looks even better, look at the words shouted by those students:

"Su Wen, your "The Furthest Distance in the World" has exhausted our thoughts on love, I ...... I love this poem so much. ”

"It's not a simple adaptation. This is simply a transcendence of Xu Huan! I don't see anything similar in the content other than the title of the poem. Even the text of Su Wen is more charming and likable. ”

"It's not an adaptation, it's an original! And this originality is not out of the thematic category of Xu Huan's creation, Su Wen wrote better poems than him within the framework of Xu Huan! The first talent of the younger generation is really worthy of his reputation, and he can't accept it! ”

In a chorus of praise. Xu Huan's face became darker and darker.

Of course, he could see whose poetry was more popular, and he had the pain of lifting bricks and smashing them to his toes!

It was he who created the framework for "The Furthest Distance in the World", and it was he who wrote these kinds of poems in the style of "The Furthest Distance in the World", "It's not", "But".

He thought that he was very lingering and helpless in writing about love, and he racked his brains to use various metaphors and imagery to express his views on love.

He was successful, and young people loved his poetry. The cheers just now mean everything.

However, he is again a failure compared to Su Wen, because Su Wen is more successful than him!

As the president of the Poetry Association of Huaxia Academy of Literature, Xu Huan is a talented person who is good at writing poetry, so it is impossible not to distinguish the quality of a poem.

He has to admit that Su Wen's "The Farthest Distance in the World" is better than he writes.

From the first stanza, Su Wen used the simplest I love you but you don't know to attract the audience, and finally used the most imaginative birds and fish as imagery, writing a picture of flying in the air and a diving under the sea, which is used to set off the distance!

It is indeed very far away, two different spaces, representing a distance that can never be touched, and it is too appropriate to use this image as a metaphor for the love that cannot be together.

The language of this poem is simple, but it contains deep feelings, regret, helplessness, pity, and pity, which resonate, especially for those young people who have just experienced love or have reverence for love, and they cannot resist the charm of this language.

So, they cheered, they shouted, they complimented Suwen, praised Suwen!

If he simply loses in words and language, Xu Huandu will not be as depressed as he is now, what he cares about is that Su Wen's "The Farthest Distance in the World" has nothing to do with him. It's too far-fetched to say that it's an adaptation, and it's completely original.

In other words, Su Wen can publish "The Farthest Distance in the World" on his own, without his consent, let alone any copyright disputes. It's like the poem "Missing" that he translated in Su Wen with an ancient poem, because there is no textual similarity, and no one says anything if it is original.

And the "Ten Commandments Poem" that he tinkered with is different, the first four sentences are completely in the original text of Su Wen, which can only be said to be a game work, and I dare not say that it is completely original.

In addition to this gap, Xu Huan is more discouraged by the Suwen version of "The Farthest Distance", which is not only superior in content except for the similar form. Even the things he wrote seemed to have a relationship with his original text of Xu Huan, but Xu Huan did not write it, but what Su Wen wrote seemed to be able to connect with his original text.

It's so devastating!

You must know that this poem was read out for the first time on the spot, and Su Wen only listened to it for a few minutes, and then he came up with a poem with the same form and better content - such a speed. With such a poetic talent and such a talent, what could be more shocking than this?

Xu Huan's revision of Su Wen's "Missing" took a long time and took a lot of effort, on the other hand, Su Wen hit a backhand in an instant, understatement, and was at ease.

This gap. It's too big, so people can't have the courage to discuss poetry in front of Su Wen!

At the scene, not only did Xu Huan lose the courage to compete with Su Wen, but the other students had no intention of resisting, and even Yi Youran, who had always been praised as a talented woman, was full of frustration and loneliness at the moment.

Looking at Su Wen on the stage, the lights were shining, Su Wen's image was so clear and tall, Yi Youran could only think bitterly: "Could it be that this guy is a sea finger again?" In the past, my grandfather, Venerable Donglian, lamented that when he met the sea finger when he was young. There is a feeling that the back waves of the Yangtze River push the front waves, and I feel that I am old. It's time for the sea to point out. Right now...... Hai Zhi values Su Wen so much, is it the same feeling as my grandfather back then? So...... Is the poetry world going to become the era of Su Wen? ”

Yi thought leisurely, and there was unwillingness in the bitterness: "If there is only one person's dazzling light in the whole era, covering everyone's brilliance, then wouldn't we be too unlucky?" So what poems do we write, and what do we need to do? I ......"

Yi leisurely wanted to raise the courage to compete with Su Wen. But with just one song "The Furthest Distance in the World", she felt that the poem she prepared today could not be defeated, and it was just a shame to go up.

"Today can only make him proud." Yi Youran smiled helplessly, and then thought, "Could it be that I really want to do poetry research with peace of mind." Don't be delusional about becoming a great poet? I...... Both Shengyu and He Shengliang! Hey, it seems that it's more difficult to wrap around today, right? ”

Thinking about it, Yi leisurely glanced at Xu Huan and found that his face was full of unsafe color, and there was a little gray look.

On the stage, Su Wen raised his hand and pressed down to silence the students at the scene.

Glancing around, Su Wen smiled and said, "It seems that everyone is still very supportive of Su someone, which makes me a little excited." But it can be seen that everyone likes "The Furthest Distance in the World" very much, right? ”

"Yes!"

"Su Wen, we like you the most!"

"Su Wen ......"

"Haha!" Su Wen laughed, nodded, and shook his head again, "Thank you for liking, but I'm still not very satisfied with "The Farthest Distance in the World". No matter how well it is written, it is just picking up people's teeth, after all, this format was created by President Xu. ”

The people at the scene were a little surprised.

"Not satisfied? Picking up people's teeth? Xu Huan's face turned red and white when he heard this, thinking that Su Wen said this on purpose, just to lose face and retaliate against him for changing his Su Wen's poem.

"Why are you not satisfied?" Su Wen said since ancient times, "I know that some people are strange, but I am telling the truth, and I am really not modest." In addition to saying that the format was created by others, I always feel that it is not appropriate for the text, because this is too straightforward and tasteless for poetry, especially for modern poetry, if it is too straightforward, it will only make people think that I can write such a poem casually! Right? ”

The people at the scene didn't speak, but Hai Zhi nodded, thinking that Su Wen was still a little pursuing.

"Why should I deny myself?" Su Wen continued, "That's because I still have a poem to give to everyone. Since all the poems that have been taken out so far tonight are love poems, the next thing I will be tinkering with is love poems. I'm going to show you a poem that is not straightforward and obscure. I hope you understand! ”

"What?" Someone was not very satisfied with Su Wen's words, and almost jumped up and shouted, "This Su Wen is too underestimated!" Do you even say that we don't understand his poetry and treat us as ignorant children? It is so deceitful that it is simply unreasonable! (To be continued......)