Chapter 053: Master Rebirth Stream
In the afternoon, Zhao Yan and Xiao Mengyue's date had ended, and in the villa by the river, on the second floor, in Xiao Mengyue's room, Xiao Mengyue was sitting at the desk looking at the "Full Moon Scimitar" sample book that Zhao Yan gave her.
For Zhao Yan's work, Xiao Mengyue is very curious, curious about his writing? What kind of story is written.
Time passed little by little, the book in Xiao Mengyue's hand turned page by page, and as she looked down a little bit, Xiao Mengyue's expression also changed from time to time, changing with the change of the plot.
If this book is the work of Long Yin or Guan Ying, Xiao Mengyue's evaluation will only give 5 or 6 points at most, because this book has indeed changed too much in terms of writing and style, especially after the fourteenth chapter, there is more and more nonsense in the text, and many places of origin and transition are not done well.
But this is Zhao Yan's first work, a newcomer can write a work of this level, Xiao Mengyue also noticed the advantages of this book when she found the shortcomings of this book.
The overall plot is exciting! The extraterrestrial meteors, the full moon scimitar, the Zixia Gong, the sword spectrum to ward off evil spirits, and even the sunflower treasure book and the flying swordsmanship of the qi practitioner all made Xiao Mengyue feel bright, and the novelty of the story made her forget the time unconsciously, and when she finished reading the whole book, she was shocked to realize that it was dusk.
Closing the sample book in her hand, Xiao Mengyue looked at the river scenery outside the window, and smiled, Zhao Yan's debut is much better than she imagined, although there are all kinds of shortcomings, but the flaws are not hidden, the writing can be practiced slowly, but the unbridled talent is innate!
In fact, in another time and space, Sima Ziyan's continuation of Gu Long's work, although it is considered by many people to be a relatively successful continuation work, has a mixed reputation.
The reason, in the final analysis, is that Gu Long and Sima Ziyan are too famous, and although the quality of "Full Moon Scimitar" is not bad, it will inevitably disappoint some readers when it comes to Gu Long's name.
However, such a work is definitely a highlight under the name of Zhao Yan, a pure newcomer! Even if Zhao Yan's sequel is definitely not as good as Sima Ziyan in terms of writing, the novelty of the plot and martial arts is enough to impress many readers.
This is also the main reason why "Full Moon Scimitar" has become the best-selling work among newcomers and new works in the same period on the official website of the Inscription Book Society.
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That night, Zhao Yan turned on the computer and saw the message sent to him by Xiao Mengyue on Lianxun.
Mengyue: "I've finished reading your new book, it's very well written!" Come on! I'm looking forward to your next new book, and when you write it, remember to make me your first reader! ”
Seeing Xiao Mengyue's message, Zhao Yan was naturally in a good mood, originally after coming back from today's date, he was still a little apprehensive in his heart, and he didn't know if his performance today disappointed Xiao Mengyue.
After all, in the cinema today, so many people were moved to cry by the "Snowflake Dance", but he was completely indifferent, and when he came back, he felt as if he was a little cold-blooded when he thought about it, and the hero and heroine died at the end of the movie, and he didn't feel it at all.
Xiao Mengyue's encouragement gave Zhao Yan motivation.
After replying to Xiao Mengyue's message, he began to create a new document on the computer and began to write the outline of "Dacheng Sword".
The outline that I had been thinking was difficult to write a few days ago, with Xiao Mengyue's encouragement, Zhao Yan seemed to be like a divine helper, and there was an endless stream of inspiration in his head, not only connecting the inspiration accumulated some time ago, but also adding a lot of new inspiration to it.
In less than two hours, the outline of "Dacheng Sword" was completed.
It's just that this outline still looks a little thin, the story background setting is not detailed enough, the main story line seems to be a bit simple, and the branch lines of the story are not listed.
"Looks like something else should be added?"
In the dead of night, Zhao Yan looked at the outline that had been written, frowned, and whispered to himself.
So Zhao Yan continued to improve this outline little by little, but his age was still too young! At the age of 17, even though he had read a lot of novels and had a lot of inspiration in his dreams, he still couldn't satisfy him with the outline he had written until 12 o'clock in the evening.
A little disappointed, but also a little frustrated, with these negative emotions, Zhao Yan turned off the computer, washed up briefly, and went to bed.
I don't know how long I fell asleep, Zhao Yan suddenly found that he had fallen into a dream again.
In the dream, Lu Yang was reading a book called "Sword Proud Rebirth" on his mobile phone, and after waking up from the dream the next day, Zhao Yan's mind was still immersed in the story, lying on the bed with his eyes open, looking at the ceiling in the attic in a daze.
Like all previous dreams, he only read the first part of the chapters of "Sword Proud Rebirth" in the dream, and what is even more embarrassing is that Lu Yang only read the first six or seven chapters, and then put down his mobile phone and went to class.
In other words, Zhao Yan only saw the first six or seven chapters of this book, but even so, this book opened up a whole new world for him.
Rebirth!
Can a martial arts master be reborn after death?
It seems completely impossible, but the novel is originally chasing novelty, at least Zhao Yan knew that he was attracted when he saw the beginning of the book.
If I write "Dacheng Sword" as a novel about the rebirth of a master, will it be a headset?
The result of Zhao Yan's self-questioning was heartbeat.
Although Daming's martial arts novels are full of flowers and have many innovations and breakthroughs, Zhao Yan has never heard of the rebirth of martial arts masters.
A new idea that is sure to attract a lot of attention! There must be a head!
The more Zhao Yan thought about it, the more excited he became, so he immediately got up from the bed, turned on the computer, and rewrote another outline under the outline of "Dacheng Sword".
He uses the outline that he has written last night as the protagonist's life before rebirth, and the newly written outline is the life trajectory of the protagonist after he is reborn.
Anyone who has written about the theme of rebirth knows that there are too many plots that can be written in works with the theme of rebirth, and the outline is very easy to write in the early stage.
In addition, this master must have great regrets in his previous life, otherwise there is no strong obsession in the heart of the master after he is reborn, and the master after rebirth has no reason to work hard, and the storyline will be pretending to be forced and enjoyed, so as to fall into the inferior. For example, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, soaking a girl or something.
Of course, in any work of rebirth of a master, the protagonist will definitely need to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger after being reborn, and a girl will be needed, but if these are used as the main line of the story, the conflict of the plot will definitely not be intense enough, and the reader's sense of expectation will not be so strong because of this.
In the process of writing the new outline, Zhao Yan is also constantly revising the previous outline, modifying the protagonist's previous life enough, but there is enough tragedy, framing his villainous characters, peerless beauties, magic skills, etc., must be needed.
Zhao Yan, who entered a state of excitement, became more and more hilarious the more he wrote, and unconsciously, the speed of typing slowly became a lot faster.
(Thanks to Mingyue for the reward of 100 starting coins, thanks to the handsome Wen Hao for rewarding 300 starting coins, and thanks to Lin Fusheng and Li Dujun for rewarding 1888 starting coins.) )