"What a great writing skill!"

Just after reading Su Wen's three paragraphs, Xiao Kewen and Li Daoming looked at each other in shock, and they could see a trace of shock in each other's eyes.

"This is the beginning of a top-notch novel!"

Both of them have this understanding.

"5 pieces, 6 cents and 7" is a simple number at the beginning, but it has a huge attraction and makes you have an urge to read on.

The wedding anniversary is here, but there is not much money. This beginning is so amazing that it makes people wonder what the protagonist will do next.

They didn't know that this matter of money had been adapted, and the original text was a lot of money, and it was even less than that. In addition, Christmas is changed to a wedding anniversary, although it is less grand, but for couples, love is more important.

After the beginning was amazing, Xiao Kewen felt that this might be a literary classic, and it was because the third paragraph moved him.

"Life is all about crying, sobbing and smiling, and sobbing reigns supreme."

These words seem simple, but they contain profound philosophies, which are the experience of life, the reproduction of life, and the sublimation of life.

Just such a sentence, people like Dean Xiao, who have read countless words, feel touched, and he is even more looking forward to the words below Su Wen!

With Xiao Kewen's eyesight, he can naturally see the general plot of this story, which is nothing more than because of poverty, and the protagonist is very embarrassed to prepare a gift for his wedding anniversary.

However, how the novel is structured and arranged depends on the individual's skill.

The attraction prompted the two to read in silence, and sure enough, the text below introduced the identity of Maggie and her husband Jimu, who were slum dwellers who lived at the bottom of the social ladder and lived on a daily wage.

Going on to go on again, it is mentioned that each of them had a proud thing, and that Jimu had an ancestral gold watch, which the article describes as follows: "If the basement had been full of gold and silver treasures, and the owner of the jewel had been a gatekeeper, whenever Jimu passed by, he would have found a gold watch, so that the owner of the jewel would be so jealous that he would blow his beard and stare at him." ”

Maggie, on the other hand, has a head of hair, which is depicted as follows: "If the Queen also lives in the apartment across the patio, one day the Maggie will have her hair scattered and out of the window to dry, which will eclipse the pearl baby in the Queen's crown." ”

For such a description, Xiao Kewen only had one word to praise: "Good! ”

It's really wonderful, and this kind of contrasting description can very well reflect the author's writing skills.

Xiao Kewen dared to say that he hadn't seen such an amazing text for many years, and the young man in front of him was really not simple!

Looking at Su Wen, who was struggling to write, although his immature face was calm, it exuded a divine brilliance, which almost made Xiao Kewen's eyes shine.

In the next plot, in order to prepare a gift for her husband, Maggie sells her hair that has been kept for many years - the article describes it like this:

"Are you going to buy my hair?" Maggie asked.

"I buy hair." Mrs. Maifa said. "Take off your hat and show me what the hair looks like."

The black waterfall spilled down.

"Twenty dollars," said Madame, grabbing her hair knowingly.

"Give me the money!" Maggie said.

Oh, the next two hours flew by happily like wings. Please ignore this nonsense. She is thoroughly searching the shops to buy gifts for Jimu.

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This description is also very skillful, Maggie did not hesitate to regret it, and decisively sold her hair to show her deep affection for her husband.

For the sake of her husband, she gave up.

Selling his hair, the next thing is to choose a gift for his husband, seeing this, Xiao Kewen couldn't help but want to watch the ending, but after all, he was over seventy years old, and his body did not allow him to stand up.

After standing for a long time, his legs were a little numb, and his body shook.

Seeing this, Li Daoming hurriedly supported him and said, "Teacher Xiao, let's find a place to sit." ”

As soon as Li Daoming spoke, Su Wen woke up, stopped his pen, raised his head suddenly, and looked at the two of them.

In fact, he noticed that someone was coming over just now, but he was so immersed in the great cause of "re-creation" that he thought it was the inspectors coming to take a look, but he didn't pay attention to it, so he ignored it.

Now I found out that it was an old man and a middle-aged man, and looking at their state, it seemed that they had been standing next to him for a while.

I wanted to say something, but the old man waved his hand to stop Su Wen, smiled and said kindly: "Classmate, don't pay attention to us, you continue to write your article." Xiao Li, let's sit in front for a while. ”

Xiao Kewen was referring to the few chairs in front of the classroom, where the invigilators were seated.

Li Daoming nodded, glanced at Su Wen, and signaled him to be calm.

Su Wen buried himself in "creating", but he didn't know that this was Li Daoming, the vice president of the Guangdong Writers Association who had protected him several times, and he was just an ordinary invigilator.

This is really a meeting on the other side!

The reason why Xiao Kewen was reluctant to leave the classroom was naturally attracted by Su Wen's "Maggie's Gift", and he couldn't wait to see the ending.

After reading half of the article, he automatically added a lot of endings in his mind, some happy and some tragic, but he was not satisfied in his heart, and he always felt that it was too ordinary to correspond to the amazing opening chapter.

Therefore, he wanted to see how Su Wen came to such an end.

"This child's literary attainments are really profound, no wonder he can write poems of 'who has not died since ancient times'. The poetry is wonderful, and now when it comes to writing a novel, at least the first half is also excellent! After taking a deep look at Su Wen, Xiao Kewen, with the support of Li Daoming, planned to sit in front and rest for a while.

However, just as he wanted to turn around, Xiao Kewen's body paused again, and his eyes were attracted by a piece of paper under Su Wen's manuscript paper, with some words on it, and the words "eyes" were vaguely seen.

"Is that the outline of the first question, 'Eyes'?" Xiao Kewen was puzzled, and couldn't help but reach out and pull out the manuscript paper.

Su Wen couldn't stop it, so he could only smile helplessly, it was the "Generation" he had just written, but he didn't plan to compete with this poem, let him read it if anyone wanted to read it.

Shaking his head, Su Wen shook his somewhat sour hand, sighed, and continued to adapt O. Henry's novel.

He didn't notice that Xiao Kewen's whole body trembled when his eyes fell on the two lines of poetry on the manuscript paper!

First his eyes froze, then his mouth opened wide, then his whole body stiffened, and finally he trembled from his hands to his body--Xiao Kewen's whole head was blank, he couldn't think of anything, and a lightning bolt struck in his mind, shining only two sentences:

"The night gave me black eyes,

"But I use it to find light."

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"Teacher Xiao, what's wrong with you?" Xiao Kewen came to his senses under Li Daoming's panicked shout, and turned his head to find Li Daoming's nervous and concerned gaze.

"Teacher Xiao, ...... you" Li Daoming wanted to say something, but Xiao Kewen stuffed the paper in his hand into Li Daoming's hand and asked him to read the words on it.

"The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to find the light." Li Daoming read it lightly, and there was a bang in his chest, as if he had been blown up by something, and the whole person was shocked.

There are not many words, only two sentences, but he dares to swear that this is the most shocking, moving and speechless poem he has seen in the words describing the eyes of many literary masters!

The night gives people black eyes, and they don't do anything with it, but only to find the light!

Is there an article more appropriate to the theme of "eyes"?

Li Daoming gently pressed the manuscript with "Generation" back under Su Wen's manuscript paper.

He and Xiao Kewen glanced at each other, and this time no expression could reflect the expression of Su Wen's senses.

Their eyes finally fell on Su Wen, who was immersed in hard writing, full of infinite brilliance, as if they had found the brightest and brightest star in the boundless starry sky!

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