"Why?" Wang Luo looked at Yang Yihu in surprise and asked.

There are no problems with Shunyo's script at all, except for a small part of the historical background that has been modified, and the rest of the script almost completely follows the script of that world.

As for the revised part, it is mainly based on the history of this era.

In terms of plot, Wang Luo didn't think there was anything wrong.

"There is no big problem, only one point, the character of the protagonist is too prominent, repeatedly disobeying military orders, and it does not conform to the main theme of the moment." Yang Yihu said helplessly.

"...... Wang Luo was speechless for a moment, and then continued: "Don't worry about them, let's prepare the crew to start filming." ”

"This ...... Is it slightly modified to wait for the GA to approve the start of filming? Yang Yihu was a little hesitant.

"No, they have their principles, we have ours. This question is not a problem at all, you can shoot how you want, and find someone to find out about the situation during this time. Wang Luo waved his hand and decided directly.

"Okay, I'll go to the contact, and the filming will start in about a month at the earliest." Yang Yihu nodded in agreement.

Wang Luo is the boss, he can do whatever he wants, Yang Yihu's job is to shoot the scene well, and don't worry about the rest.

As for Wang Luo's side, naturally he will not revise the script.

The General Administration of this world is almost the same as that world, it is all the same nonsense.

Ordinary scripts do not need to be submitted to the General Administration for review before filming starts, and war dramas are sensitive subjects, and scripts are generally submitted for review before filming starts.

After the review is passed, I am preparing to start filming, although it seems to be a little troublesome. But in fact, it has reduced a lot of trouble.

Like what. If there is no pre-start review. Once the finished product is submitted to the GAD for review. It didn't pass over there.

At that time, the whole work will be troublesome, not only will it need to be revised according to the requirements of the General Administration, but the actors will also have to be called back for reshooting.

And after the shooting, the review will continue, so that over and over again, at least two months have passed.

Wang Luo understands the meaning of the General Administration, which is nothing more than that the protagonist of Jue has a strong personality and repeatedly disobeys orders, and the protagonist is too prominent. It is easy to cause a bad influence on people.

And the character of the spearhead is arrogant, and everyone has a different personality.

In the current army, for these real talents, the superiors are also very troublesome.

Everyone likes the docile war horse, where to fight, let you do whatever you want, and will never do something you don't want to see.

But this kind of war horse actually doesn't have much development potential, so it's okay for them to be ordinary war horses.

But if you want to train them to be top soldiers, it is a little unrealistic.

Of course, there are no absolutes.

Now there are also some soldiers in the army who are very honest. They also came up step by step and became the elite force of the army.

But one thing is undeniable. The most prominent is the special forces.

Most of the soldiers in this group were when they first joined the army, and it was difficult to discipline.

In fact, this group of soldiers also gave their instructors a headache, but fortunately, they were all domesticated in the end, so that they could become the elite force they are now.

In fact, the point of the GAO's negative opinion is not that the protagonist's personality is too prominent.

After all, there are so many people in the army, who can guarantee that everyone is obedient? Not even a spearhead.

So, what the GA really means is that point at the end of the script.

The protagonist can have a character and can disobey military orders. It's a problem on the table, everybody can see it, and they don't want to cover it up.

The only problem is that at the end, the protagonist still disobeys military orders, which ultimately leads to his own sacrifice.

It stands to reason that there is nothing wrong with this ending, the protagonist disobeys military orders and ends up paying with his own life. This ending also tells everyone not to easily disobey military orders, even if there is a deep hatred.

But another level also revealed a piece of news, the commander of the sixth division, who is commensurate with the protagonist as a brother, has not been able to domesticate the fiery horse from the first episode until the last episode.

This is also what Wang Luo feels most nonsense, they ignore the words that Shun said before he went to take revenge.

'The revenge of the nation is over, and now it is time to take revenge on me. ’

In fact, if the protagonist doesn't care about the overall situation, then he is fully capable of preventing it from happening at the time, but in the end, in order to complete the mission, he watched his only relative be killed.

The person who reviewed the script may only see what is on the surface and does not see some meaning inside, so they give a reply of refusal.

However, Wang Luo didn't plan to change it according to their requirements, not only did he not change it, but compared with that world, Wang Luo also made some changes to the setting in the script.

For example, the question of the combat effectiveness of the Japanese army. As much as possible, we should restore the reality of this drama, and no longer do those TV series that are entertained for the sake of entertainment.

Perhaps, it is precisely this setting that made the General Administration give a reply of refusal.

But these are no longer important, anyway, Wang Luo will definitely not revise the script.

If it can't pass the review of the General Administration at that time, it will be broadcast on the website.

Anyway, there is no problem with the website not being reviewed, because the review power here is in the hands of the website itself, as long as it is not vulgar content, there is no problem with too violent content.

'Knock Knock~~~'

There was a knock on the office door, and immediately, a head poked in, looked at Wang Luo and Yang Yihu with a smile, and said, "I didn't bother you, right?" ”

"Why are you here? What about a surprise attack, isn't it? Wang Luo said with a smile.

"No, how dare I make a surprise attack with you." Zhang Shilin looked at Wang Luo with an innocent expression.

"Hey, last time you said that if I came, I would be treated the same as Baolan, does this still count?" Zhang Shilin then asked.

"Of course it counts, but only if you come out of the army." Wang Luo smiled and joked.

With Zhang Shilin's identity, how could he possibly come out of the army? Moreover. Even if he wants to come out. The family may not agree.

Although I don't know Zhang Shilin's true identity. But the General Political Department has been registered, will it be an ordinary person?

Although Wang Luo's words were a bit of a joke, if Zhang Shilin really came out of the army, let alone five million, even if it was ten million, he would dare to sign.

And Zhang Shilin hasn't been in contact with Wang Luo for almost two months, and Wang Luo has long forgotten about it.

"Then I'll be relieved." Zhang Shilin breathed a sigh of relief, and then took out a red notebook from his pocket and handed it to Wang Luo.

'Retirement certificate? Wang Luo looked at the words on the red notebook and couldn't help but be shocked.

"You're retired?" Wang Luo looked at Zhang Shilin in surprise. I can't believe this book in my hand.

"Yes, the art troupe, if you die, you will be the head of the troupe, and there is no big development prospect. It's better to develop it outside, maybe it can become popular and let me have a good time being a star. Zhang Shilin showed a cheap smile, looked at Wang Luo's expression, and couldn't help but quip: "You shouldn't be reluctant to give me such a high base salary, right?" Why don't we discuss it? ”

"No, I just can't believe it." Wang Luo held the retirement certificate in his hand, and still couldn't believe it and asked, "Do you really want to sign?" ”

"Of course. It took me a lot of effort to retire, if you don't sign me. Don't you have to be beaten to death by my dad when you go home? Zhang Shilin joked.

"Okay, sign!" Wang Luo took out a contract from the drawer, which was exactly the same as Wang Baolan's contract.

It is a basic salary of 5 million, and all items are divided into 55 points in the first year, 46 points in the second year, and 37 points in the third year and beyond.

This contract is already a relatively good contract in various companies, even if some of them are four or six points in the first year, they will definitely not become three or seven points in the second year.

Unless a new contract is signed, there is absolutely no such floating clause.

Zhang Shilin waved his hand and signed his name at the beginning of the contract, and Wang Luo also signed his name below, as long as the company's official seal was stamped on it, the contract would officially take effect.

Until the official seal was printed on the contract, Wang Luo still couldn't believe it. This signed Zhang Shilin? Isn't that too simple?

"Mr. Wang, this contract has also been signed, we can't get our salary for nothing, right? Baolan has been sent to study in school by you, do you want to find me something to do? Zhang Shilin took his contract and said with a smile, obviously during this time, he had a lot of contact with Wang Baolan and other other actors in the soldier crew.

"Well, there is a new TV series in preparation, and it is estimated that it will start filming in a month or two. This time you've risen in rank, Divisional Commander. Wang Luo responded with a smile.

"Commander of the military division? Can't you be a creep? Zhang Shilin said a little depressed.

It's not easy to get out of the army, but I didn't expect that the first drama after leaving the army was a military drama, could it be that I couldn't live or die without the army?

"Yes, now I'm thinking about the next drama, and there is a character in it that suits you very well, that is, a little soldier, I promise to satisfy you." Wang Luo said with a wicked smile.

Then Wang Luo handed a copy of the script to Zhang Shilin and asked, "You should be from a military family, right?" ”

"Yes!" Zhang Shilin suddenly nodded with a dark face and admitted, but obviously didn't want to mention his family background.

"Okay, it just so happens that I'm too lazy to find someone to verify it, and I'm still not sure about some of the settings about the Japanese army in the script. Since you are from a military family, there must be old people in the family who have participated in the Anti-Japanese War, go back and help me ask, see if the settings in the script are correct, and give some suggestions for revision. Otherwise, the old men of the General Administration will call back all day long to revise the script, and this scene will not be filmed in two years. Wang Luo said with a serious face.

But the last seemingly casual sentence was tantamount to digging a big hole for Zhang Shilin.

Of course, it's not a pit, in the final analysis, Wang Luo still plans to use Zhang Shilin's background to put pressure on the General Administration to pass the review of this drama.

As for asking for opinions, if you really give an opinion, it doesn't hurt to modify it appropriately, anyway, the setting about the Japanese army will not affect the whole play. (To be continued......)