Chapter 15: Song Renxia's Righteous Record?

Happy Music Association.

Mo Yu, Shen Mengyao, Zhou Lin, Zhou Qian, Xu Zijian, Wang Lun, six people are here, and they will go to play in the evening.

When we are together, we are just chatting and talking about music.

And Mo Yu just didn't want to go home, so he would come over and make trouble when the time came, so he simply stayed here.

Together, Xu Zijian couldn't help but sigh with emotion: "We art students, to be honest, can have a few who can survive and be favored by the signing company, if one day I can be favored by the signing company, how good it would be." ”

Xu Zijian said this, full of emotion.

"Yes, once you are favored by the signing company, the status is different, but if you want to be favored by the signing company, one in a million, we still have to think about it, how to deal with the assessment of professional singers."

A few people said this, but Mo Yu heard a little unusual taste.

Professional Singer Assessment?

The so-called professional singer, in Mo Yu's memory, is actually a singer who can be on the stage, and he is still assessed?

In your original world, professional singers really don't need any assessments, as long as you are famous, you are almost a professional singer, at most, you just walked out of a school that specializes in training music.

There is no need for any assessment at all.

Thinking of this, Mo Yu couldn't help but pay some attention, of course Mo Yu didn't ask, it's very simple, this kind of thing should be a little different from his original world, but for people here, the assessment of professional singers is not a very unusual thing.

It's not good to ask yourself questions and arouse some suspicions.

In addition, we have been together for more than half a year, so wouldn't it be cost-effective if I was mistaken for neuropathy.

All in all, Mo Yu is still a little cautious, but nothing else.

After chatting until half past one in the afternoon, almost everyone was tired, at this time, Zhou Lin picked up a volume of newspaper from the bookshelf on the side, and then said with joy on his face: "Oh, what a coincidence, I forgot to read this issue of the newspaper two days ago, but I didn't expect you to have it here, Mengyao, you are so good." ”

Zhou Lin said with a smile.

Shen Mengyao glanced at Zhou Lin, not knowing what he was excited about, but soon Shen Mengyao understood what the other party meant, and immediately said: "Yongping's big novel is indeed very exciting, and I am also watching it." ”

As soon as he said this, Zhou Lin was taken aback, and then looked at Shen Mengyao and couldn't help but say, "Tsk, I really didn't find out, our beauty guild leader actually reads novels." ”

"What's this, I liked to read it when I was in middle school, I don't like to read any kind of twisted martial arts emotional novels, but I prefer to read this kind of simple and direct martial arts novels, besides, Yongping is big, and it also has a little romance, and the characters portrayed are very good, and I like to read it and it's not a big deal."

Shen Mengyao replied casually.

"Yo he, I've been together for so long, I really don't know that everyone likes to read novels, do you know, Yongping Da said on his personal scarf, and he is about to enter a high-cost plot, Song Ren is currently abolished and chased to the cliff by his uncle, and in the end Song Ren would rather die than hand over the peerless exercises to Uncle Vicious, so he jumped directly into the cliff, and now we are waiting for the next plot, I don't know how exciting the plot will be written, but it's a pity that Yongping Da only updates one chapter a week, alas, it's not cool to watch."

Xu Zijian found a topic and said so.

"Isn't it, but I have to say, Song Ren's chivalrous record, this book is simply too exciting, my uncle, who has been careful for more than ten years, didn't expect it to be a foreshadowing laid by the Demon Sect in the righteous path, and directly became the Demon Sect Qinglong Envoy, and the protagonist Song Ren obtained the Righteous Lost Sixty Years, Ziyang Heart Method, which is a highlight."

Wang Lun said.

Then the topic immediately changed to discussing the novel, and Mo Yu seemed a little curious.

What kind of novel can make them feel so good?

So Mo Yu couldn't help but interject and said, "Uh, what kind of novel is it?" Can you show me? It's best to start with the first episode. ”

Today, Mo Yu won glory for the Happy Music Association, and everyone naturally attached more importance to Mo Yu, as soon as she said this, Shen Mengyao immediately stood up and said: "Count yourself lucky, the newspapers I read have not been sold, you wait for me to find you." ”

"Good!"

Mo Yu nodded and smiled.

A little, Xu Zijian, Zhou Lin and Wang Lun, and even Zhou Qian began to join the discussion.

About four or five minutes later, Shen Mengyao came out with a relatively thick newspaper.

Soon all of them were placed in front of Mo Yu.

Each one is a column with a large line written on it.

[Master Yongping's latest masterpiece, the first episode of Song Renxia's righteous record].

After getting the newspaper novel, Mo Yu couldn't help but smile at Shen Mengyao and said, "Thank you." ”

"It's fine." Shen Mengyao smiled back, and then Mo Yu concentrated on reading the novel by himself.

The first thing to look at is the personal introduction.

Master Yongping, six years ago, broke into the world with a Shaolin long stick martial arts novel, and became famous in one fell swoop, and then in the next, he created zào, laughing proud of the world, gentleman's long sword, second in the world, love chivalry and other novels.

Each novel is sold overseas and domestically in the form of physical publishing, the pinnacle of love, and the sales of a single book have reached 850,000, with a total circulation of more than 10 million, and he is a martial arts master!

After the end of the profile, Mo Yu read the novel.

First paragraph.

"The empty surroundings seem very silent, as if it is a wild place, there are no animals around, and there is a lack of some life, this is the land of wild beasts, no wild beasts can live here, because it is too hot, let alone ordinary people, the land of wild beasts that are generally invisible, and an uninvited guest has come today......"

There is no literary narrative at the beginning, it is completely straightforward to write a story.

It seems really good, Mo Yu can still have an appetite for reading.

A newspaper only serializes one chapter, and a chapter is about 7,000 to 10,000 words, mainly depending on how well Master Yongping writes.

The first chapter is in the words of Mo Ling's professional, the main thing is to throw out a map that ordinary people dare not come, and then release a mysterious person, walking here with a baby, and finally being ambushed, the baby was almost killed, but at this time, a certain elder of the righteous path, who was strong, was desperately injured and took the baby away.

In the first chapter alone, a few characters are written, and most of them are still highlighted, with the help of maps and character dialogues, and expressions to highlight how awesome the characters are.

Take this paragraph, for example.

The man in black with a purple scimitar looked at each other with a jealous expression, and a look of hesitation flashed in his eyes, not knowing what to do.

If you really want to talk about dry goods, there are really not many.

"This guy can really water."

Originally, Mo Yu still took it seriously, but he found that most of the plot was in the water, and the water scared people.

Not to mention anything else, this writing is okay, but this plot storyline, not to mention some clichés, and writing novels is really skillful.

For example, a certain Internet platinum god with an annual salary of more than 100 million yuan in his previous life, some senior editors-in-chief, and editors-in-chief agree on a thing.

Three Golden Chapters!

Therefore, the golden three chapters do not mean that you must write amazing feelings, but let you unfold the story in three chapters.

First write a map of the world background, so that readers can understand what kind of world this is, and then unfold the story, at this time the protagonist will appear, through a small thing, to portray the character of the protagonist.

Let everyone know what kind of person this protagonist is, is it an optimist or a melancholy?

Just sketch it out.

Then the third chapter is the golden finger, the so-called golden finger, which is a kind of plug-in, whether it is a peerless mental method or an evolution artifact, it can be a thing.

But this Song Renxia Record, the first chapter is more than 10,000 words, and 7,000 words are nonsense!

Although Mo Yu can still read it, he has no interest in reading.

However, in order to understand the novels of this world, Mo Yu still read it hard.

Chapter 2 is extremely boring.

Chapter 3 continues to be extremely boring.

In the fourth chapter, the abuse began, the protagonist Song Ren was looked down upon by all sides, and the abuse was still dead abuse, he liked a girl, but he was slapped in the face by the girl's endless ridicule.

Chapter 5, Continued Abuse.

Chapter 6, Repeated Abuse.

Chapter 7: Torture Again.

Chapter 8: There is a senior uncle, who is good to the protagonist in all aspects, and is a little less abusive.

Chapter 9: A piece of nonsense, about a demon cult preparing to attack the right path.

Chapter 10: Getting Started.

Chapter 11: The Beginning of the Hack.

Chapter 12: The Purple Yang Mind Method, which had been lost for sixty years, appeared.

Chapter 13: It turned out that the person who protected the protagonist at the beginning had dredged all the laws of the Ziyang Heart Method to his body.

Chapter 14: The miracle has been accomplished, slap your face back!

Chapter 15: Uncle Shi guessed what the mind was.

Chapter 16: That is, the latest chapter, the protagonist is tricked out by his uncle, and then he is hunted down, and finally the protagonist grits his teeth and jumps into the cliff.

And then it's gone.

Four hours!

Mo Yu read it for four hours, he really wanted to abandon this book again and again, not to mention anything else, just inject water into it, why is it so abusive?

And the plot is old-fashioned, let's not talk about it.

There are too many things that need to be explained in all aspects, you don't need to explain at all, you can also explain, the plot you see, Mo Yu can write ten chapters, and one chapter is up to 3,000 words.

30,000 words can solve a novel of 160,000 words!

It can be seen that the water of this book has reached what Cheng dù.

After reading it, Zhou Lin suddenly came over and said with a smile on his face: "Don't you think it's exciting?" Cannot help doing something? Look at your anxious look, do you want to wait for an update? It's safe, Yongping has a great character guarantee, although the update is slow, but it will definitely not be written. ”

Seeing Zhou Lin's slightly chubby face, with that shallow smile, Mo Yu could only laugh dryly!

"What's so good-looking?"

"Is that also called being unstoppable?"

Mo Yu really dared to confidently say that even if he didn't copy the novels of his previous life, he would definitely be able to write a novel ten times more wonderful than this one just by writing it himself.

But!

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