"Looking at Romeo and Juliet again, I don't see anything good about it except for the shoddy production. Why? This is not a typical Chinese drama, there are too many lines and dialogues, and it is obvious that it is learning from the Western drama model. This is a very bad place, we are a big country of drama, there are a lot of excellent nutrients to absorb, there is no need to learn Western creative methods. This is also the bad atmosphere brought about by some new literary people recently--they like Western things, promote Western things, and always think that our country is old and should be discarded, but they don't know that our huge historical and cultural heritage is our real wealth! To use the language on the Internet, this kind of person is a yellow-skinned and white-hearted banana man! Luo Zhu's play made me see the trick of the banana man, not in the middle, not outside, very awkward! ”

The above is a passage from Mark River's review of the content of "Romeo and Juliet", and every word is a heart-wrenching word!

He occupies the commanding heights of the country's righteousness, and initiates a kind of contempt for Su Wen, saying that he is a banana man, obviously criticizing the current literary circle to imitate the Western trend, but the implication is that he admires the foreign and flatters the foreigner.

This is a kind of scolding Huai, which will arouse the disgust of many patriots, making them feel that supporting "Romeo and Juliet" is an unpatriotic way. Chinese people are more xenophobic, and I have to say that Mark He grabbed a weakness of Su Wen!

Although Luo Zhu's play has been adapted by him and imitated Guo Moruo's "Qu Yuan", the writing is more suitable for Chinese people to read, but there are many places that he feels should be retained, and he has kept them.

The greatest charm of Shakespeare's plays is language, rich in philosophy and beautiful language! These long paragraphs of neurotic lines do seem a bit verbose, and they are not suitable for reading at the moment.

But Su Wen just wanted to keep something more classic, but he didn't expect to give Mark River a line, referring to the deer as a horse.

"This guy has such a strong ability to reverse right and wrong!" Su Wen had a headache, and he didn't know why he provoked this guy.

After criticizing the creative model, Mark River made another comment on the content, which is even more of a good thing.

Throughout the article, it is said that Luo Zhu's drama has a lot of hard wounds, what kind of love is naïve, the characters in the play have no common feelings for anyone, and the final plot of going to death is even more death-for-death, very blunt, not natural at all.

"Tragedy can produce a kind of power, a touching resonance. If it is handled well, it can sublimate people's minds and face life more positively. However, Luo Zhu's play is about love and love, which has nothing to do with the country's righteousness, just the entanglement of children. In the end, the plot that is arranged to die is very important, and it will teach the children at the moment. It doesn't make any sense, once someone imitates it, how much harm and tragedy it will cause. Therefore, it is not an exaggeration to say that this play is a literary poison! And the person who created this play is naturally a literary poisonous weed!

"Poison and poisonous weeds can harm people, and they are both things that should be abandoned! We, the readers, should stay away from poisons and poisonous weeds. And poison and poisonous weeds should also consciously keep a distance from readers, so as not to harm others and themselves! Readers, for the sake of your health, you should not support such plays and authors. Voting for such a work, have you ever thought that this will poison your friends and descendants? As a cultural person, I have an obligation to resist such works. We should also unite and call on all readers not to be fooled, not to approach, not to support, so as to stay away from poisonous weeds and poisons! ”

At the end of Mark River's comments, he tore the cloak of impartiality more and more, revealing his purpose, which was to stay away from Romeo and Juliet, let alone vote for it!

He called on readers to unite to boycott, which seems to make people laugh, but this guy has been working for twenty or thirty years, has countless readers, and has a large number of die-hard fans, and many people look up to him.

No, as soon as this comment came out, the entire forum of the drama writing contest became lively, and thousands of readers shouted for Fangyuan Culture Company to disqualify "Romeo and Juliet":

"Such poisonous weeds and poisons, not only must they be kept away, but they must also be locked in a small black room, so that they will never see the light of day!"

"Is Luo Zhu really such a story? I heard it was good, I wanted to see it, but I didn't expect it to be like this, but fortunately, there was a reminder from Mr. Ma, otherwise I would really be fooled! Teacher Ma has spoken, so you can only boycott! ”

"Luo Zhu is poison, poisoning teenagers! It's shameless that someone writes such a thing that harms others and oneself in a grand manner! ”

"Down with Roju! Down with Suwen! ”

“……”

Many of these comments were posted to the comment area of Su Wen's drama, and soon the entire comment area was occupied, and it was useless to explain it to his book friends who had already read the work and thought it was good.

Mark River has a certain power and great lethality, and Su Wen can already foresee the next scene of all kinds of negative information occupying his comment area.

For Romeo and Juliet, that's a lot of damage!

Don't think that readers from the "Yuezhou Evening News" will definitely support his plays, these people like his poems, love the house and Wuxia, and they may take the initiative to vote for you if they think it is good.

But readers have a herd mentality, and if a person says that the work is not good, they can not believe it. The two of them say so, and they can also ignore it. But what about the three of them?

Throw plenty of dirt and some will be sure to stick!

What's more, this is thousands of negative information!

Readers who came from the evening newspaper, even if they liked him Su Wen no matter how much they read it, after reading such comments, they probably didn't dare to read this play carefully. I haven't even read it, let alone expect to vote for anything!

"Mark River, this is going to ruin the rhythm of my Romeo and Juliet!" Su Wen frowned, he wanted to fight back, but there was really nothing he could do.

In the theater world, he is a newcomer, and his status cannot be compared with that of Mark River.

"Let's go and see, even the author of "Ode to Youth" has made a comment on Luo Zhu, which is also a criticism!"

"Not to mention "Ode to Youth", even the author of "Luoshen" has issued righteous words!"

Soon, the forum was lively again.

Su Wen then took a look, and sure enough, in addition to Mark River, the top ten people in the drama competition for the time being jumped out and two more jumped out to attack Su Wen.

The author of "Ode to Youth" is Xie Tianxing, this guy is as eager to be famous as Su Wen, and his pen name is directly used under his real name. He attacked Su Wen from his behavior, saying that he was arrogant and unlearned; As for what "Roselle" is, it is ranked sixth for the time being, and the words are not good!

At this point, Su Wenming came over in vain, and the people came at him, obviously deliberately targeting him!

Organized! There are steps!

"This is Liang Feng's next resort?" Su Wen smiled bitterly again and again, as soon as this villain offended, it was really difficult to accept.

I have to say that Liang Feng's energy is indeed not small, and he immediately encouraged three top ten writers to criticize him Su Wen.

The effect is leveraged!

Look at the various comments now, all of them say that they want to defeat him Su Wen! Only at this time did Su Wen truly appreciate the majesty of the deputy editor-in-chief of Fangyuan Culture Company.

It's a giant company, just a small high-level company, and it can instruct some well-known writers to come out and attack others!

What can Su Wen do to deal with this?

He only hoped that this matter would pass quickly, and after everyone had stopped, things would naturally go uneasy. The readers who supported him were not those on the website, but from the "Yuezhou Evening News", and as long as the matter calmed down, they could be restored to their original state.

However, Suwen's strategy seemed too naïve.

For three days in a row, the comments of Mark He and others were hung high on the homepage of the competition, and the criticism of Su Wen not only did not stop, but intensified.

Originally, only the top ten writers posted articles criticizing, but in the past three days, some authors behind the top ten have also joined in, indiscriminately talking about Luo Zhu as poison, and Su Wen as a poisonous weed.

In a word, if you don't smear Su Wen, you will never stop!

The impact of this method is very bad, even if there is a poem published in the "Yuezhou Evening News" for three days in a row, those readers who come over are affected by this and dare not support Su Wen's drama.

Many people expressed their disappointment, saying that they had originally come to support Su Wen, but they didn't expect his drama to be so bad, so they could only return in disappointment.

After three days, "Romeo and Juliet" only received more than 500 votes, and it could not enter the top 500.

This is much worse than the previous average of more than 1,000 votes a day!

If it goes on like this, in the last ten days, let alone squeezing into the top ten, thank God for being able to enter the top 300.

"No, I can't sit still!"

Su Wen couldn't sit still and planned to fight back.