Chapter 808: A Child's Composition

Seeing the two posted articles, Chu Jiaqiang was a little surprised. The only thing that is not surprising is that both are girls' works. He knows that boys have a headache for writing. I have to say that girls will have an advantage in this regard, and the writing will be more delicate and touching.

Essays in primary school are not as difficult as argumentative essays, they are all narrative essays, like a short story, expressing some small truths, you can get a relatively high score.

"If you boys don't work hard, our men's face will be lost to you." Chen Wu and the others taught those boys a lesson again.

In fact, in terms of active thinking, girls generally can't keep up with boys. But as the old saying goes: diligence makes up for clumsiness! Girls play less, often stay at home to review and so on, unlike boys, when they get home and throw away their schoolbags, they immediately go to play in groups, and their hearts are not learning, how can they learn well?

"Not to mention, I just went to look at the results. Girls generally have higher grades than boys. Li Quan said.

"What's so strange about that? In elementary school, girls usually take the lead, but in junior high school, the strengths of their male classmates will gradually show, especially in science, far ahead of girls. This is the difference between surnames, male surnames are generally surnames, and female surnames are more sensitive, except for a few female academic tyrants, male classmates will not lose to female students. Chu Jiaqiang said.

This phenomenon was discovered when he was studying, and he later analyzed it himself. In terms of IQ, girls are usually a little behind boys, which may also be the reason why female surnames often need to be cared for by male surnames.

Of course, Chu Jiaqiang didn't mean anything else, and he didn't have any idea of discriminating against female surnames. On the contrary, I think that female surnames are a type of people who are more balanced in self-regulation, and they can often handle it well intellectually and emotionally.

The others nodded, "That's true." ”

"It is a fact that the emotions of female surnames are more precocious." Someone said.

The emotions mentioned here refer not only to love, but also to other emotions. From these two articles, we can know that they are both about the love of their families for themselves.

One of the accounts is about the mother who bought a watermelon and gave it all to her brothers and sisters to eat, and told them that she didn't like to eat watermelons, but the protagonist accidentally saw her mother eating the melon flesh that her brother and sister didn't eat, reflecting the theme of maternal love. This kind of touching text is difficult for a boy of this age to express. It is no wonder that this article has been favored and recommended by teachers.

The other does not directly write about his father's love for himself, but expresses his father's love from the side, which seems to be not easy. It is about a time when the younger brother went to cause big trouble again, and was beaten and scolded by his father, but at night, when the younger brother fell asleep, he carefully went over to rub the potion on the child. This wordless fatherly love is also touching.

"Well, if it were us, maybe we wouldn't be able to write it." Zhou Furong said.

"Of course I can't write it! We're all so old, and we still write this, isn't the meat numb? Tang Liye said immediately.

Chu Jiaqiang listened to the discussions of these big men, and was speechless for a moment.

"Forget it, don't look at it. If you want to read it, go to those boys' compositions, that's good. Zhou Furong and others said. What they like most is to read the essays of these elementary school students, especially the boys, who are more strange than the other, and can laugh at the dead.

"Uh-huh! Check it out. As soon as this suggestion came out, it was immediately supported by many people.

A group of people began to sneak inside, looking for the teacher to look through the little ones' essays.

"This little guy must have made up the number of words." Chen Wu specially picked a male classmate. That font is really flattering, and it's really hard for those teachers who revise the papers. How much thought and effort does it take to read this oracle-like article? Anyway, he felt dizzy after watching it for a while.

In addition, the content in it is also, and it is so far away from the ends of the world. Obviously, I was writing about my grandfather, but I couldn't find five sentences about my grandfather's account in it, so I immediately turned my thinking to another irrelevant topic, and then I made two more sentences, and then it turned again, like an autobiography.

The male teacher present also couldn't cry or laugh, he endured a headache and recognized the article word by word, read it dizzily, and finally gave more than ten points symbolically, and the composition of forty points was a failure.

"Alas! This little guy is even more powerful, with more punctuation than text. Wu Li picked up one.

I saw that the ellipsis was used at every turn, and each point occupied a grid. This is definitely an artifact for making up the number of words, right? In addition to ellipsis, there is also a lot of use of dashes.

In the end, the teacher's comment was: Classmate, your punctuation marks are so good that the teacher looks up to the mountains! Not to mention that the teacher feels that the mountains are upright, even Wu Li feels that he is out of reach.

The score can actually be qualified, but people do not write off topic, the theme is clear, and the only thing that makes people vomit blood is those "easy" punctuation marks.

"Hmmm! This kid is more realistic. Zhou Furong said, and then couldn't help laughing.

Everyone leaned over to take a look, and they were also thundered.

I saw that the article was only half written, and the number of words was seriously insufficient, but the classmate hurriedly wrote a few sentences in the back, and that was the classic: Teacher, I'm sorry! I don't have enough time this time, can I owe the remaining words first? Double up next time!

It is estimated that the marking teacher was also disgraced, and directly wrote a comment: Then I will double the score for you next time!

"Ahem! This sentence is too sharp. Li Quan said.

Chu Jiaqiang smiled lightly, looked at the scroll in his hand, and also remembered the compositions of his friends when he was a child.

The article in his hand is quite decent, written about his grandmother, mainly describing his grandmother's nagging. However, he often repeats the phrase "Grandma is so nagging." By writing about the nagging of the elderly, he shows his love for himself.

Finally, the teacher commented: Classmate, is this your grandmother's nagging, or are you nagging? And then next to it was the expression of a waterfall Khan.

An article is only three or four hundred words, but his sentence "Grandma is so nagging" accounts for one-third, which is a bit too much to look at. However, you can't say that he is off topic, on the contrary, repeatedly reminding this sentence to make the theme more distinct, just to make the reader feel very painful.

Subsequently, there were several "strange articles", and after enjoying them together, they were all happy.

"Boys' essays are the most troublesome, and they don't follow the rules one by one." The teacher told everyone.

Everyone present laughed understandingly, and after reading these articles, no one dared to say good things about those little guys. (To be continued.) )