Chapter 39: The Unmodified Ending
Wang Fan designated the publishing house as the Xia Ke Publishing House.
After specifying the publishing house, the principal hung up the phone.
After hanging up the phone, Wang Fan chatted with Li Ningxue for a while, chatting about the world.
While chatting, Wang Fan and Li Ningxue found that they both have the identity of novel fans, they both like to eat barbecue food, and they don't like a creature in the sea "crayfish"
Knowing that the other party has a lot in common with himself, the relationship between the two people is much closer. From acquaintance, it has initially reached the stage of chatting with friends at will.
At seven o'clock in the evening, when she was full of wine and food, Li Ningxue got up and prepared to go back to school.
Wang Fan, who was sitting in the position and massaging his head with his hands, looked at Li Ningxue, who had already stood up, and gave Li Ningxue a thumbs up: "Qiang, you are the girl with the best amount of alcohol I have ever seen." ”
"Each other, each other." After Li Ningxue said this, she wanted to pay for it.
Wang Fan, who was massaging his head, immediately stood up when he saw Li Ningxue's action of taking out the money, hurriedly walked in front of the barbecue restaurant owner and took out the money loudly, and turned to Li Ningxue: "The first time I invited a girl out to eat, can I make the girl pay!" ”
After shouting this, Wang Fan asked the barbecue restaurant owner how much this meal was.
And Li Ningxue looked at the figure who was paying, and a charming smile was hooked on the cherry mouth, is it the first time to ask a girl to smile? Did you know that this is also the first time I have been invited to dinner by a boy?
With a smile, Li Ningxue turned around and went back to school. And after Wang Fan paid for the barbecue restaurant, he also stopped a taxi and returned home.
At home, I didn't turn on the computer, I just fell asleep.
Lie in bed. I fell asleep in barely a few minutes. The snoring sounded... A few hours later, Wang Fan entered a deep sleep and unconsciously said a sentence, today's Li Ningxue will be so beautiful!
After saying this, the snoring resounded in the room again.
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At noon the next day, Wang Fan got up from the bed with his head pressed, and when he got up, Wang Fan only felt that his head seemed to have been cut by a knife, and it was extremely painful.
, this feeling is really a dog! After Wang Fan finished washing, he went out with his head and went to a pharmacy not far away to buy medicine. After buying medicine and eating it at home, Wang Fan felt a little better.
Feeling a little better, Wang Fan turned on the computer. Wang Fan remembered that today was the day of the finale for the first intimate contact, and Wang Fan wanted to see if his ** had been bombarded by fans.
When he opened **, Wang Fan found that he had been @ nearly 10,000 times, and many fans' comments asked Tianfan to modify the first intimate ending.
"Miserable, so miserable. It turns out that it speaks on BBS:
I danced softly, in the middle of the crowd.
You cast a strange look at you.
Be surprised or admired.
It didn't mess up my dance steps.
For it is not your gaze that makes me fly.
It's my young heart.
The light dance of this poem turns out to be a beautiful girl with hereditary lupus erythematosus.
This beautiful girl at the end of her life, she didn't even see the ruffian Cai, the two people who loved each other didn't meet at the end of their lives, I admit that Tianfan you succeeded, you successfully wrote a tragedy, I can only say you here! Good! Vicious.
I'm here to complain about the light dance Feiyang, she is such a beautiful girl, why do you want her to suffer from hereditary lupus erythematosus. I beg you Tianfan to revise the final ending, so that the ruffian Cai can see him one last time.
Tianfan I tell you that the last chapter of the first intimate encounter you wrote, and the poems in that last letter really touched me.
"If I had one more day to live, I would be your girlfriend that day.
Do I have one more day to live? No.
So, it's a pity. I'm still not your girlfriend in this life.
If I had wings, I would fly down from heaven to see you.
Do I have wings? No.
So, it's a pity. I will never see you again.
If I pour out the water of the entire bathtub, I can't extinguish the flame of my love for you.
Can you pour out all the water in the entire bathtub? OK.
So, yes. I love you. ”
This poem illustrates the regret of dancing lightly, regretting that there is no life to live again, regretting that I can't be the girlfriend of the ruffian Cai again, and regretting that I can't see the ruffian Cai again... However, there are so many regrets, and I didn't regret Qingwu Feiyang, and I didn't regret meeting the ruffian Cai. At the end of her life, she still likes the ruffian Cai, and his love for the ruffian Cai has never disappeared.
I'm @天凡 again, it's really enough, this kind of ending, you're cheating on tears, if you still want me to continue reading your next novel, then you can modify this miserable and sad ending for me, it's a completely cheating ending of tears.
Wang Fan looked at the scolding **, and opened the martial arts forum to take a look, and found that there were many posts in the martial arts forum that were condemning him.
It seems that readers can't accept this tragic ending. Wang Fan thought so, touched his chin and thought about it, and finally decided not to change the ending.
Because if the ending is modified, Wang Fan is not confident that he will be able to write a more classic ending than this ending. Wang Fan felt that the first intimate contact could become a classic on another earth, which was also the reason why there was this ending like the finishing touch.
However, if you don't modify the ending, it doesn't mean that you won't explain it to the reader. Wang Fan decided to write an explanation by himself to explain why he wanted such an ending.
This is the end of the story of the ruffian Cai and the light dance, and many readers are not happy with this ending, but I am not going to revise it, because I think this ending is the best, the most suitable for the first intimate encounter.
Dancing Flyie suffers from hereditary erythema, which has been set for a long time. If Qingwu Feiyang does not have this disease, everyone thinks that Qingwu Feiyang will write on BBS:
"I danced softly, in the midst of the crowd,
You cast a strange look at you.
Surprised or admired,
It didn't mess up my dance steps.
For it is not your gaze that makes me fly,
It's my young heart. ”
Such exciting verses? If she hadn't been sick, wouldn't she have been invisible? If she hadn't been sick, would she still have this character? If she wasn't sick, she would still be dating online, would she still fall in love with the ruffian Cai?
The answer is no!!
If she is not sick, she is an ordinary person, she can't write this kind of throbbing poetry, she will be unexpected, she will not be this kind of character, she will not be online dating, she will not know the ruffian Cai, and she will not have the first intimate contact with this novel.