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His common name is Wen Xiu, and even after entering the immortal gate, he still maintains his common name, so he already knew that he would not be able to become an immortal. He will enter the immortal gate for the sake of his relatives in the world, so dusty, how can he become an immortal?
He is the eldest son in the family, and there are two younger sisters and a younger brother, the youngest of whom is born insufficient, and has been sick in bed for many years, which is a pain in the hearts of his parents. He is seven years older than his youngest sister, and when his little sister Wenlan was born, he was already sensible, so he always kept the matter of taking care of his little sister in his heart.
If he hadn't met that person in his life, maybe everything would have been different, and he couldn't imagine what would have become of him.
When he was eleven years old, he heard that on a mountain in a neighboring county, there was a god who applied medicine to cure some incurable diseases of people who sought medicine.
When he reached the bottom of the mountain, he looked up at the unknown mountain, and suddenly saw a huge white bird flying by, and he seemed to see someone above. He rubbed his eyes and looked again, and there was nothing in the sky. Thinking that he was tired from all the way, he found a secluded place to sit down and rest.
He did not think that he would fall asleep against a tree as soon as he sat down, and when he woke up it was already sunset, and the noise in the woods did not stop, and there were many footsteps on the road where there were few people during the day.
He regretted that he had fallen asleep and made a mistake, so he hurriedly stood up and returned to the road, and sure enough, he saw that there were many people walking on the road one after another, men, women and children, but although there were many people, no one paid attention to anyone, and no one responded when he took the initiative to greet people.
He felt a little strange, but he went up the mountain with the men. He thought that it was almost night, the mountains were dark, and it was more reassuring to have more people.
He followed the flow of people for a long time, because he was almost too tired to eat, and was about to stop and rest for a while. Suddenly, a golden light was released in the air, as if the sun had fallen to the ground, and for a moment the mountains and forests were like daylight, and then the golden light weakened, and the source of the light seemed to be on the top of the mountain, and he felt that the people around him suddenly walked faster and faster.
"What are you doing so fast?" he didn't quite understand, but no one answered when he asked, and seeing that others were doing fast, he felt that he couldn't be left behind, so he hurriedly followed.
The further he went to the top of the mountain, the closer the light became, until he reached the top of the mountain, his legs were almost trembling, and a golden palace appeared in front of him, majestic and magnificent, like a fairy palace.
He watched as many people poured into the palace, but he couldn't climb any longer, so he stopped to rest on the carved railing. At this moment, a white shadow flickered in front of his eyes, and his eyes couldn't help but light up.
He looked at the white shadow, saw the back of a woman, and saw that she was also heading towards a few golden palaces, and he lifted his breath and followed.
"Girl—girl—"
He called twice, and the woman seemed to hear him, reacted, and turned around.
"You called me?"
He had never seen anyone more beautiful than the woman in front of him, but she was cold, not smiling or expressionless, without a trace of affinity, and he almost felt that he should not call her. But he remembered that he had asked many people before, and that no one had paid attention to him, that this was the only one who would respond to him, and that he couldn't help but rejoice.
"Finally someone pays attention to me!" he couldn't help but say what was in his heart, and said a little embarrassed after finding out, "I'm sorry, no one paid attention to me when I talked to them before, so I'm a little happy to meet the girl!"
"You're also the only one talking to me. She was still expressionless, and spoke coldly.
If it was normal, he wouldn't dare to talk to such a woman, even if she was as beautiful as a fairy, but now he could only tell her.
"Girl, what are you doing here?" he asked curiously.
"Didn't you come too? What do you not know?"
"I heard that there is a medicine from the gods here, so I came to take a look. ”
"Do you want to live forever or be free from all diseases?"
"No! I'm because of my sister. My sister was born deficient and couldn't be cured! I just wanted to try it!"
"Rare!"
"What about you, girl?"
"What do you think?"
"Is the girl for herself or for her family?"
"For my master. ”
"Is the girl's master sick?"
"He's fine!"
Then why come? Before he could ask, the girl added, "If you don't get in soon, maybe the medicine will be gone!"
"Yes, let's hurry!"
"Go first! I'm not in a hurry. ”
"Oh!" he looked at the girl a little strangely, "then I'll come out and talk to her later!" and then he hurried towards the main hall.
When he entered the temple, he found that the temple was very empty and bright, there was no lamp in the hall, but the walls and floor were glowing with golden light, and there was a statue of a god in the center of the temple, which was also golden, and all the people consciously lined up in a queue and walked towards the statue in turn. He looked curiously, and found that there were not as many people in the temple as he had seen before, and he observed for a while, and then he realized that everyone had gone to the statue and received a bowl of water to drink, and then seemed to have left behind the statue.
He finally approached the statue, only to see a child-like child sitting in front of the statue, hanging in the air, and the golden god behind him was very harmoniously integrated, and he conjured a bowl out of thin air for each person, and the bowl seemed to be a bowl of water, and each bowl was the same amount of water.
Is he an immortal? Wen Xiu was a little skeptical, but he was full of anticipation.
When he stood in front of the boy, the boy did not bring him a bowl of water out of thin air, as the people before him did.
"Are you new?" the boy asked him, his voice childlike.
"Yes!" the boy looked very petite, and he saw that he thought of his little sister inexplicably.
"What do you want?"
"I want to ask for medicine to cure my sister's illness. ”
The boy looked at him for a long time, and then said, "There is no such thing as a world that is unearned, do you understand?"
"Of course I understand?" but this made him wonder, could he be a liar? But even if he is a liar, he obviously has some skills.
"Immortal Venerable has medicine that can cure all diseases, but whether you can find the medicine depends on your sincerity and creation!"
"I see. ”
"What is that cure?" I'm curious!" Suddenly a voice interjected.
Wen Xiu looked back and saw the girl in white he had seen before.
The boy glanced at the girl, ignored her, changed a bowl of water and stretched out his hand to hand it to him, and the bowl of water seemed to be no different from the previous person.
"People are born with bad luck, and drinking it can purify your body, so that you can go to see Immortal Venerable!"
"Good!" he took the bowl with both hands.
"Give me a bowl too!" the girl in white suddenly approached.
"If the girl is sincere, please do it tomorrow!"
Wen Xiu, who was holding the water, looked at the girl in white who was looking at her on the side, "Girl, ...... you"
"Drink! I'm looking at you!"
He hesitated for a long time, and finally handed the bowl to the girl in white and said, "Girl, if you need it more......
The girl stretched out her hand and held the bowl, looked at him and said, "You are here for your sister's illness, if you give it to me, what will your sister do?"
"The immortal just said that as long as you are sincere, you can come again tomorrow. I can wait!" He withdrew his hand, and glanced at it with obvious reluctance.
"Tomorrow...... There's no chance!"
"Why?"
"Drink!" the girl handed him the bowl, "I don't like the taste." ”
He felt that this girl was a little strange, she had obviously asked the boy for it before, but now she didn't want it, and she didn't like it, and she didn't like the taste. But how did she know it tasted if she didn't drink it? If she said that she smelled it, he didn't smell anything either!
He took the bowl with doubts, and sniffed it again, but there was indeed no smell.
"Drink it with confidence!"
The girl in white suddenly slapped him on the chest, causing his eyes to widen in fright.
He stepped back, narrowed the distance between him and the girl, and drank the water from the bowl, which felt like white water, and tasteless at all. However, the body seems to have really been washed, and the whole body feels comfortable, and the previous fatigue has disappeared.
When he had finished drinking, he realized that the girl was gone, and he wanted to put down the bowl, but in an instant the bowl disappeared, as if it had never existed.
Is this an immortal method? He had a little more hope in his heart for curing his sister's illness.
By this time, there was no longer half a figure in the hall except him, he no longer hesitated, and went around behind the statue according to the behavior of those people before, and found that there was a door behind the statue, he carefully pushed the door open, and there was nothing to see in the black hole in the door, and suddenly he felt as if something was pushing behind him, so he planted his head forward—
He seemed to have fallen to the ground, and he screamed twice in pain, and when he opened his eyes and looked around, he saw a strange scene - the brilliant galaxy seemed to be within reach of his body, and the ground where he was lying was also a group of stars.
"Is this?" he stood up with some excitement, filled with emotion at the sight.
"Boy, you're the only one here, so you're my destined person!"
"Who?" he heard, but no one was in sight.
Suddenly, a golden light rushed to his feet like a sweep, and he felt that he should be allowed to walk along the golden light, so he walked forward without hesitation.
The golden light path spread straight forward, he didn't know the end, he kept walking, and he didn't know how far he went, and the starlight was still shining around him, as if he had stopped in place.
"How long is it left?" he asked himself, continuing to walk.
After a while, he saw that a sun seemed to appear in mid-air, shining with golden light, and he couldn't help but quicken his pace, and the golden light gradually enlarged as he approached, and he saw that it was not a sun, but a person sitting cross-legged. The old man in white clothes, white hair and white beard, the golden light he saw was emitted from his body, and it looked like this person really looked like a fairy.
"You're here?"
He heard the voice again, but he didn't see the fairy-like old man speak, he was a little suspicious, "Is that you?
"It's me!"
"Are you an immortal?" he asked again.
The old man did not answer his question, but said, "Are you willing to be my apprentice?"
"Apprentice, I'm just here to ask for medicine!"
"Asking for medicine? right...... You want to cure your sister's illness. ”
"Yes. He bowed down respectfully and said earnestly, "The boy said that you have a miraculous medicine that can cure all diseases, and I beg you to give me one." ”
"Anything, you get it, you need to give!"
"I can give you whatever you want, as long as you can give me medicine so that I can cure my little sister!"
"You don't want to be my apprentice?"
"I can't thank the immortals enough for their kindness, but I only want to cure my little sister this time, as for whether to be an apprentice of the immortals, I haven't considered it for the time being!"
"I've been waiting for you for a long time, and I won't let you leave!"
"What?"
Wen Xiu was a little confused, and suddenly a golden light came, and he didn't know how to react. But suddenly a golden light flew out of his chest, and he directly installed the golden light mask, smashing the golden light mask to pieces!
"Who's making trouble?" the voice that spoke to him before scolded.
"Aren't you the troublemaker?"
This voice, Wen Xiu was impressed, and before he could think about it, he heard a crackling sound that seemed to be broken, and the galaxy suddenly cracked a big hole, and then the mouth continued to spread into countless cracks, and the galaxy turned into countless pieces as if the mirror was shattered, and then turned into debris and disappeared, and a white shadow floated down from above.