Luo Xiaoxu read Tong Yan's manuscript over and over again, and had to admit that he was worthy of being a god who could publish a book, and when he read it in one breath, he felt different from the student's work.

Although this article Tong Yan is written in one go, but how to write, from what angle, what technique, he has thought a lot, at first he planned to use the perspective of rhubarb, new concepts, aimed at advocating new thinking, breaking the shackles of old concepts and old norms, this way of writing is indeed quite new, but in fact, think about it, there are so many students in the country, there must be not a few students who can think of changing perspectives, saying novelty, in fact, that's it.

Later, Tong Yan thought of the first pot of gold earned for him "Fateful War: Cats vs Wang Xingren", although this article is not very popular, but the names of cats and Wang Xingren are well known, Tong Yan thought about following the idea of this article, shaping Rhubarb into a high-IQ life individual, in order to increase the interest and readability of the article, and later he was also vetoed, he didn't want to write a crying eulogy, but he didn't want to write a comic article, although this is a bit new, and he is also good at it.

Participating in the new concept, Tong Yan's first thought is how to write new ideas, but he forgot that the new form is only a superficial thing, the important thing is whether the core wrapped inside is unconventional, the slogan of the new concept is "new thinking", "new expression" and "true experience", she asked the contestants to break the rigidity and conservatism, unrestrained, use their own language full of personality, oppose clichés, oppose the face of a thousand people, the word of the people, and most importantly, real, sincere, sincere, sincere concern, feeling, and experience life.

All the "new" will eventually fall on a "truth", so Tong Yan decided to return to the basics, using relatively restrained emotions and a slightly relaxed tone to depict the life and death of an old cat and the growth of a child, the child is actually a combination of Tong Yan and Shanshan.

"Cats are inherently dead. It is heavier than braised pork ribs, or lighter than stick noodle porridge, and these are all rhubarb's favorite ......"

The New Concept Essay Contest is jointly organized by Sprout Magazine and more than a dozen top universities across the country, and they invited the country's top writers, editors and humanities scholars to serve as judges. This year, he was invited to serve as a judge of the 9th New Concept Essay Competition, responsible for the review of the qualifications for the preliminary round, if those articles can't even get into his eyes, he will not be eligible to participate in the later semi-finals.

And this "Lao Huang and the Child" undoubtedly made his eyes shine, at first glance he thought it was about family affection, but when he saw the first sentence, it turned out to be about cats. And it's about a cat that's dead, but throughout the whole article, I don't see the author's sorrow and sadness, and the beginning lays a relaxed and plain tone.

A real master of words can hide his power under peace, and only people who are not up to the level will work rhetoric, frequently using rare words, making the article seem to have depth. In Liang Xian's opinion. The vocabulary used by this young author is not ornate, but it is very precise. And the details are well done, and at a glance, you can see that he has indeed had a cat, making rhubarb, a very ordinary domestic cat, so vivid, and jumping on the paper, people can't help but like it.

Liang Xian also has cats. If he was asked to write such a cat article, he felt that he could write so well, but he was a professional writer who had been engaged in writing for more than ten years, and the other party was just a high school student. Experience and experience can't be compared to my own at all, but it is really rare to write so well.

Liang Xian's admiration for this article is not only the portrayal of cats, but also the structure of the article, just more than 2,000 words of the article, intercepted several typical cases of old cats and children, one slowly getting old, the other gradually growing up, properly arranged, the narrative is compact, the transition is smooth, every word and sentence have something to say, and it pierces people's hearts.

At the beginning, Tong Yan did bring some habits of writing online novels into this article, so there will be some cumbersome and unnutritious words, and the online text should not be too tight, but when checking, Tong Yan refined it and removed the chaff, so that the reading effect of this text is better.

In fact, Liang Xian appreciates the author's attitude and grasp of feelings, the author has not said a word about how much he loves rhubarb, how reluctant he is to leave, how heartbreaking it is after it leaves, but after reading the whole article, anyone can feel the deep relationship between the child and Lao Huang for more than ten years, and will feel sorry for the departure of such an old guy. Although the words are beautifully written, and the words and sentences are also very elegant, the meaning of saying sorrow for the new words is too obvious, and it is a very old-fashioned high school student youth crush story, which makes people really unmotivated.

After reading it again, Liang Xian wrote a comment and put the article in the first file of Group A of Tong Guò.

The New Concept Essay Contest is divided into three groups, Group A is for the junior and sophomore high school students, Group B is for the first year of high school and junior high school students, and Group C is for young people under the age of 30 except for middle school students.

After mailing the entries to the magic capital, Tong Yan didn't care about the competition anymore, only Luo Xiaoxu asked all day long if he had received the news of Tong Guò.

Tong Yan's current energy is mainly focused on the new book, and now the book review area of "Furious Thunder", the post of "Emperor Immortal" and two reader groups are asked every day, when will the new book be released, Tong Yan has already finished writing the three traditional manuscripts, but he also wants to sort out and revise the three manuscripts for the last time, and finally can't stand the enthusiasm of readers, Tong Yan revealed that he will release a new book in the early morning of the 28th, and he is going to the capital that day, whether there is a revision or not, the book will definitely be issued that day.

As soon as this news came out, readers finally gave birth to a little peace, and there were still a few days, just a few days before they could see Tong Yan Wuji's new book, and I always heard Taiwanese readers say how good this book is, and now it's okay, they are finally about to see it.

Lao Song is also paying attention to the dynamics of Tong Yan Wuji on the Internet www.biquge.info Biquge, so he also knows that he is going to write a new book, but he is not very interested in the new book, but is very curious about Tong Yan's participation in the new concept, that day Duan Hou's Chinese teacher looked for Lao Song to talk about things, during which he talked about their class Duan Hou's participation in this year's new concept essay contest, he read the article, and said that it was very good, and the possibility of passing the guò preliminary round was very high, and he also said that if it was really successful, there would be half of Lao Song in the merit medal, after all, Duan Hou's language in high school was taught by Lao Song.

At this time, Luo Xiaoxu happened to come to the office to get the papers, and when he heard the two teachers talk about the new concept, he interjected, "Actually, Tong Yan also participated." ”

Then Lao Song called Tong Yan over and commented on his article, "This is the article that is really written with heart, you see the essays you have written in the last few times, it is obviously foolish." ”

Tong Yan humbly accepted, as for how to prepare for the semi-finals if Tong Yan passed the preliminary round, Lao Song just briefly said some of his opinions, and did not talk about it in depth, what he is good at is the college entrance examination essay under the exam-oriented education, which is very different from the new concept composition, he is afraid that his construction will affect Tong Yan's free play, he is a writer who has written more than one million words of novels, he should have his own judgment and ideas.

"There is also going to the capital in two days, pay attention to safety, and help me see how Rao Rao is doing, she refuses to come back, in fact, she just wants to force me to go to the capital to see her, I understand her careful thinking, but it must be impossible, even if the mirror is reunited, there are cracks, and now I can only stalemate with her." Old Song sighed.

Regarding the relationship problems of the elders, Tong Yan is not easy to express his opinions, he can only promise, "When the time comes, I will try to persuade Rao Rao to come back on the weekend." ”

After 12 o'clock in the morning on the day of the holiday, Tong Yan uploaded the first chapter of his new book "Emperor Immortal", waited for review, and then went to school.

On the 28th, Tong Yan Wuji's new book was released, and his readers basically knew that the post 'bar, book review area, and readership had been announced several times, and when he woke up early in the morning, people had not seen one more book under Tong Yan Wuji's name, so he had to continue to wait, and the more idle readers refreshed the page every three or five times.

At ten o'clock at eight, the very idle reader Lion Cake finally saw in Tong Yan Wuji's personal space that there was an extra Xianxia novel "Emperor Immortal" under his name, generally a new book has to wait for a while to search after being reviewed by guò, and if you want to read the book, you can click on the author's name to find it.

Lion Cake has long heard some introductions to this book, and some Taiwanese readers have even typed some excerpts of the article, which has long aroused the curiosity of mainland readers.

Seeing the word emperor immortal, the lion cake immediately clicked in, the first thing to see is both fairy and atmospheric cover, the cover is a man and a woman chasing in the air on the lake, ink painting style, although you can't see the details of the characters clearly, but there is a very ethereal feeling, as early as a few days ago, Tong Yan even posted 'bar in the group to ask for the cover, he can't do it himself, so he has to ask readers for help.

His readership base is large, the two readerships are almost full, and there are tens of thousands of people in the "Emperor Immortal" sticker, there are many people, and the probability of appearing capable people is also large, so Tong Yan's words, in a short period of time, there are more than a dozen covers of different styles for him to choose from, none of these people who make the cover know this story better than Tong Yan, but how much from the mouth of Taiwanese readers know some plots, the original "Rage Thunder" cover provider Xiao Yuer made this cover according to these plots, and was selected by Tong Yan Wuji in one fell swoop, she said proudly, In the future, she will cover the cover of the novel of Tong Yan Wuji! (To be continued......)

ps: [ps: If you haven't changed it at half past eleven, let's wait for tomorrow to change it together, I'm not in a good state when I write this chapter, and I'm delaying time~]