Chapter 85 The correct use of the Enter key
Tang poetry is divided into realism and romanticism, Song poetry also has the difference between bold and graceful, and new poetry is naturally no exception, and there are more factions. Xu Zhimo is one of the representatives of the Crescent School, and in addition to this, there are also Lakeside Sects, Symbolist Sects, and so on.
As a literary and artistic youth, Zhang Qiuxi has a thorough understanding of Tang poetry and Song poetry, and can at least understand what faction a poem belongs to, while the faction of modern poetry is completely confused, and he doesn't know how to distinguish at all.
Although he doesn't know much about modern poetry, Zhang Qiuxi is also a person who has memorized a lot of modern poems, such as facing the sea and spring flowers, and he can recite them word for word without going through welfare. Some knowledge of modern poetry schools and the like, she also came into contact with it.
"I've been ready for you a long time ago." Ye Qingqing suddenly put a collection of Yang Hua's poems in front of Zhang Qiuxi, looking at the brand-new cover, it was obvious that it didn't take long to buy it back, and Ye Qingqing probably hadn't opened it yet.
"You're a god, you knew I needed this?" Zhang Qiuxi was very surprised, but Ye Qingqing smiled and said nothing, her face was unfathomable.
"I'm going to pass you by, the name of this poetry book is kind of interesting." When Zhang Qiuxi opened the book, the first preface written by other writers was that she read: "Yang Hua is the most directional and exploratory poet at the moment, and she has an extraordinary grasp and understanding in exploring the sensibility and intellectuality of poetry, the inner complexity and the tangential point of the external simple form. ”
Red Bean leaned over and said, "I don't understand it, but it seems to be very powerful." ”
Zhang Qiuxi said: "It's not over yet, there are still behind." Yang Hua's writing posture is casual and free, without pretentiousness, sometimes calm, sometimes calm, sometimes bold, forward, and free. ”
Shangguan Jin said: "Everyone is engaged in publishing, you still don't know that this kind of preface is just to sell a few more copies, isn't it a compliment that can be printed in a book?" ”
"That's true, but I'm embarrassed to be so hyped without two brushes, right? Looking at Yang Hua's watch, Xiàn is also very conceited about his works. Zhang Qiuxi said and opened the text, and then his eyes widened and he was stunned.
A person walks on the road of dreams
I'm convinced
I am the whole world
The one who is most eager to make his dreams come true
I will definitely succeed
"Nima, what is this?" Hongdou couldn't help but burst into a foul mouth, the first poem in this collection of poems "I'm going to pass by you" made her messy in the wind.
"This sense of immediacy ......" Zhang Qiuxi frowned and flipped back, and said: "Although I can't tell what this thing is, this type of poem can be given a name, Yang Huati." ”
"You laymen can't understand it, I'll give you an appreciation." Ye Qingqing said: "The topic of walking alone on the road of dreams points out the loneliness of the poet's dedication to pursuing his dreams. Dreams are holy, but the road to dreams is lonely, you can only walk alone, and no one can be with you. ”
"The whole poem begins with the sentence 'I firmly believe', and the short three words express the poet's belief, and the sentence is sonorous and powerful. Under the absolute belief is the poet's recognition of himself, the most eager person in the world to realize his dreams, which further points out the persistence of dreams and shows the arrogance of others. ”
"I will definitely succeed, and the same powerful finish, showing a calm and resolute attitude, is a poet's unwavering display of dreams. Although this poem is only four lines, it vividly expresses the poet's indomitable and unwavering expression. The whole poem echoes from beginning to end, connecting with nature, and every reader can see the poet's courage......"
"You cow." Zhang Qiuxi, Hongdou and Shangguan Jin gave a thumbs up at the same time, and Hongdou said: "You don't say that I really don't know that this poem expresses so many things. Qingqing, you are too condescending to be a painter in our magazine, you should be a professional book reviewer. ”
Ye Qingqing smiled and said, "Don't you think it's very tall when you look at it like this?" Unfortunately, this is not what I said, but the comment of a well-known scholar, and I am just paraphrasing it. ”
"Sure enough, no matter where the brick family is called a beast, it is unreliable." Zhang Qiuxi sighed and said, "But this kind of thing seems to be a lot easier." ”
A soldier's combat effectiveness comes from training and equipment, so as a writer, combat effectiveness should come from works, since Yang Hua's poems are like this, it is not difficult for Zhang Qiuxi to fight her at all.
Throwing aside the so-called poetry book, Zhang Qiuxi opened the Weibo, Ye Qingqing came over and glanced at it, and immediately returned to his position. Needless to say, this girl is ready to watch the excitement.
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In recent days, a lady named Yang Hua has posted a series of articles criticizing myself and my works as useless, and even directly attacking my life. As a junior who is humble and willing to learn, he has never dared to argue anything, but has a sincere and admiring attitude to understand Yang Hua and his works.
Director of the Celestial Dynasty Poetry Association and member of the Writers Association. Ms. Yang Hua opened Ms. Yang's poetry collection "I Will Pass by You" with a pilgrimage mentality, hoping to make up for the shortcomings and become a well-behaved junior who can be recognized by Ms. Yang both in his works and in himself.
After reading it, I was so excited that I couldn't calm down for a long time, and my admiration for Ms. Yang was like a surging river, and like the Yellow River flooding out of control. Ms. Yang has such a good grasp of the enter key, how can she not be admired.
Needless to say, I am now an accomplished writer, fortunate enough to be loved by readers, and have sold tens of millions of copies. But even so, I have always admired poetry, and I am confident that I can write good novels, but I never think that I can write good poems.
Like everyone else, I am no stranger to poetry, and I can recite "Silent Moon Thoughts" in kindergarten. From elementary school to the present, I have been in contact with a lot of Chinese students, whether it is Tang poetry and Song Ci or Yuanqu Han Yuefu, but the more I understand, the more small I feel, and poetry has always been an untouchable temple in my heart.
Today, I was fortunate to see Ms. Yang's poems, which immediately made my thoughts clear, as if I opened the second pulse of Ren Du in an instant. It turns out that I have always regarded poetry as too sacred, and writing poetry is far from being as difficult as I imagined, and the only threshold is only whether I am familiar with the enter key or not.
Thinking of this, I can't help but write a poem-
Originally
Not me
Uneducated
but
There is no mastery of the tricks
From now on
Me too
A poet
Thank you, Ms. Yang, for helping me open the door to the world of poetry, and for telling me how simple it is to write poetry. Although you have been abusing me and lashing out at me, I still sincerely thank you for teaching me the correct way to use the car return.
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When the blog was released, Hongdou and Shangguan Jin couldn't help laughing, and Zhang Qiuxi shouted: "Little sister Ye Qingqing, I know you've been watching the excitement, so why don't you go and comment on my poem." ”
Joining in the fun has always been Ye Qingqing's favorite, and she will muddy the waters without Zhang Qiuxi's explanation, and she can't help but want to participate in Zhang Qiuxi's interesting writing. So after forwarding it, Ye Qingqing first copied "that poem", and then wrote down an appreciation-
"This poem begins with the poet's trance, and the word 'original' is used very cleverly, that is, it expresses the poet's confusion in the past, and at the same time reflects the mood of seeing the clouds after the trance. All kinds of doubts in the past were completely run away by two short words, and the poet began to be reborn from this moment. ”
Because of doubts, the poet became less confident, so he thought that he could not write poetry because of his low cultural attainment. It is worth mentioning that, combined with the first sentence of 'original', this kind of unconfidence is not directly expressed, but is vaguely revealed after a trance and regaining confidence in oneself. In such a way of phrasing, the poet simultaneously reveals two contradictory messages to the reader, one of the most common techniques in formal poetry. ”
Immediately afterwards, the psalmist gives the source of faith. I used the same technique as before, and while I felt that I had not found the skill before, I also said that I had mastered the skill now, and this is the source of confidence. In the end, the poet completely let go of his heart, and from now on he will also be a poet, and we can see between the lines the joy of the poet who has regained his faith. ”
Although it is not directly expressed in words, a new situation has been unfolded in front of the reader. The reader seems to be able to see the poet's smiling face, because it is a joy to find oneself again and to be affirmed one's own values. And the poet did not use words to express his joy, which also shows the poet's calmness and calmness, as well as the sadness of not being able to communicate with outsiders in the past. We can be sure that the poet's mood at this time must have been complicated, mixed with joy and sorrow. ”
After reading it, Hongdou sent it for a while before saying, "Qingqing, this time my sister really admires you so much." What is it necessary to see such a profound connotation from the inexplicable few lines? ”
"Sister Hongdou, are you scolding me?" Ye Qingqing rolled her eyes at the red bean, then grinned and said, "It's a pity that I'm not an expert, otherwise the comment would look more weighty." But it's also quite interesting, I'll also write a song, Sister Hongdou, you can help me comment on it. ”
"It seems to be really interesting, and I'll be involved too." Shangguan Jin also began to "write poems" with great interest, and Hongdou said: "Shangguan, don't get excited, you can relay me." ”
Ye Qingqing forwarded Zhang Qiuxi's comments and then wrote them herself, Hongdou commented on Ye Qingqing's, and Shangguan Jin commented on Hongdou's. With such a relay, a movement to write poems and comment on poems kicked off vigorously on Weibo.