Ni Kuang helped him write "Tianlong Babu" during Jin Yong's exchange abroad, ensuring that the serialization in Ming Pao was not interrupted, although he blinded Ah Zi's eyes by his own initiative, but he was later rescued by Jin Daxia through the hand of Xuzhu, this behind-the-scenes story is also passed on as a good story in the literary world, but Tomato is dissatisfied, "Why do you compare yourself to Jin Yong, but I have become Ni Kuang, and I am damaged!" ”

"Brother Eggplant, of course I didn't mean that, what I want to say is that my novel, if you can continue to write, you have this ability in this world, this is a great compliment!"

"Are you really relieved to let me write it?" Tomato said uncertainly, this kind of thing has hardly happened in the online literature circle, especially among the gods.

"You can write without worry, I won't read it after writing, you can just upload it directly," Tong Yan expressed his absolute trust, "Of course, you have to write according to my outline, and you can't deviate." ”

"That, that's it, I'll try it, you continue to be sentimental."

Tong Yan turned on the computer, opened the monstrous folder, and let Tomato study how to write by himself, "I'll sleep first, you're busy, I'll treat you to a big dinner tomorrow." ”

With the current value of tomatoes, a thousand words must be more than 1,000 yuan, and helping Tong Yan write a chapter of 3,000 words is a few thousand yuan, and this lover Tong Yan can only pay it back by inviting guests to dinner.

At first, it may be a little resistant, but now Tomato is also eager to try, this is the first time in his creative career, a little expectation, looking forward to writing a chapter, immediately a childlike reader came out to applaud, saying that this chapter is better than before, and it feels cool to think about it.

In order to write as little as stiff as possible, Tomato read the first ten chapters of the monstrous world again, and then he started to do it.

Now that the plot is developing, Jian Liushuang has obtained a body from her original world and returned to the main speaker Nie Tian. And the little princess Yi Shuilan also completely regained the body that had been occupied by Jian Liushuang, and also was by Nie Tian's side, although Nie Tian loved Jian Liushuang's soul, but it was indeed Yi Shuilan's body that had a relationship with him at the beginning, and Yi Shuilan's body was still used by Jian Liushuang at that time, and Yi Shuilan gradually felt for Nie Tian.

Tong Yan Wuji has identified that there are two heroines in this book. This is his first time, because the two heroines have used too much pen and ink, and no one can give it up, and the readers are divided into two evenly matched camps for the sake of the two heroines, if you give up one of them, I'm afraid half of the readers will rebel, anyway, this is not a realistic novel, and it is not illegal to marry two wives, and it is on these two heroines. Tong Yan poured his love for An Luwei and Jing Yan, although in reality it has been separated, but he hopes that the novel can be complete, he used to watch movies and TV series, he hated the kind of drama that was not a happy ending, and he didn't want to become the person he once hated.

However, in order to let the novel win with the plot, and in order to avoid the attacks of the pure love flow guardians, Tong Yan did not until the end of the novel. The pattern of two heroines was determined, in order to allow the two heroines to be accepted by each other's fan groups. In addition to promoting the plot during this time, Tong Yan spent most of his pen and ink on the emotional interaction between the two heroines and the male protagonist, so as to enhance the favorability of the two heroines.

One of the major features of Tomato's works is that the emotional drama is simple, his novels are basically based on the upgrading of the male protagonist and fighting monsters, and the emotional drama is just a few condiments, and its weight is even inferior to brotherhood. This is the characteristic of Tomato novels, and it is also the result of helplessness, in fact, he really wants to write emotional dramas, but every time he writes emotional dramas, he can always receive countless complaints and readers' protests. Compared with the upgraded plot, the emotional dramas he wrote are too scummy, so in Tomato's follow-up works, there will be fewer and fewer emotional dramas.

This is different from Tong Yan Wuji's works, "Emperor Immortal" can actually be seen as the emperor and the immortal falling in love, although "Monstrous" is set in the vast Xuantian Nine Seas, but the two heroines are also very scene-stealing, especially at this stage, there are many emotional scenes, Tomato read the first ten chapters, I think it is impossible to portray the two heroines as vividly as Wuji, and it does not affect the promotion of the plot.

Tomato doesn't think it's because his skills are not as good as Wuji, he attributes this to the fact that Tong Yan Wuji talks a lot about love, and has an in-depth understanding of all kinds of girls, and he only has Xiao Jiu, and it's basically an online dating, so it's reasonable to think about it, he shouldn't use his shortcomings to compare with Wuji's strengths.

So Tomato spent a lot of ink on a battle with the male protagonist Nie Tian, so that he played a chapter, in this chapter, the two heroines didn't even have a chance to appear in the amazement of passers-by, and they were completely marginalized, because of this treatment, Wuji's style of online articles immediately showed Tomato's style.

Tomato attaches great importance to the chapter he wrote for Wuji, he read this chapter together with the previous one, and found that the use of text in this chapter is not as exquisite as the previous one, the frequency of the same word is relatively high, unlike the fairy tawgli, even if it is the same meaning, he will use different words to distinguish small differences, which is not really necessary for online novels, readers will not read so carefully, but if it is a physical publication, there is no doubt that Wuji's novel has more reading and collection value.

In the past, although Tomato also read Tong Yan Wuji's novels, he had always read them roughly, and he just read wonderful stories, but today, he studied Tong Yan Wuji's novels almost paragraph by paragraph, and saw the gap between him and Tong Yan from a simple vocabulary, after some truths were understood, he began to be a little dissatisfied with the chapters he wrote, so he revised them over and over again, and each word was polished, and three hours later, this 3000-word chapter was uploaded to Tong Yan's author background by Tomato, And it was almost twelve o'clock in the evening.

Tomato is not sleepy, he continued the plot just now, and began to continue to write, this time he didn't stop the two heroines again, and finally let them appear, according to Tong Yan's outline, the two heroines are going to break their wrists again, women's struggle, this is not what Tomato is good at, but he still insists on writing, he doesn't believe in this evil, why is every heroine of Mowgli remembered by readers, and even the male protagonist of his novels will be quickly forgotten by readers.

When Tong Yan woke up the next day, Tomato had already finished writing two more chapters, he wrote more carefully and seriously than his own novels, and he also had more experience in character building and emotional portrayal, Tong Yan didn't expect his buddy to be so powerful, "I still don't read these two chapters, you can publish them directly today, by the way, did the readers of yesterday's chapter have any reaction?" Tong Yan asked curiously.

(To be continued.) )