(4) A perfunctory explanation of the content of the chapter
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Apologize first, I'm sorry! The plot of Hades's daughter develops so fast that everyone is frightened.
Xiaoshui is sorry that because he was in a hurry, he didn't look carefully and sent the outline plot of the daughter of Hades directly.,Caused the first chapter of the opening chapter to swoop and jump.,Your message, I saw that the modification work has been done.,You can see the modified chapter from the web page.,If it's a client, then I'm sorry to delete that chapter and download it from the new.。
By the way, in reply to readers' questions:
Hades's daughter was reincarnated directly in the Lechuan River?
Answer: Xiaoshui is wrong, this explanation is specially written for you, I will answer it seriously, I usually write an article about what story wants to happen in this chapter, first this chapter outline and then expand the plot to about 2,000 words, okay, let me demonstrate:
Example: (Non-text pseudo-outline demonstration is used to do not speculate on the plot) Hitomi has a fever, the husband takes Biao home, the husband confronts him, and he laughs and is confused.
The first expansion: I took the crystal pupil back from the supermarket all the way to talk and laugh very happy, I haven't come out to play with the crystal pupil so simply for a long time, but on the way home, my husband's car sped past us, without stopping, and the crystal pupil, who was still holding snacks and was very happy, suddenly fell to the ground I threw down the fruit and stepped forward to help the crystal pupil, the little face that was ruddy just now was already pale at this time, I reached out and touched it, and sure enough, I had a fever again (omitting the plot of going home) The people who just entered the door of the house caught me a little off guard, and it turned out that my husband brought Biaozi back, the father-in-law looked at Biaozi with a wary face at this time (omitting the evil words and probing the plot).
The second expansion is to expand the omitted plot, so that the expressions of the characters can be further polished. It's easy, right?
So yesterday's mistake was that I cut too much of the content after the first expansion, and wrote an outline enough to write three articles like a meat cut, and then expanded it into a large section for the first time, cut it into three pieces, fined, fried, cooked, and fried! Completed! Is it okay to try to finish the chapter of Hades' daughter today in order to apologize? People really know it's wrong. t^t。
There's also an answer to the most criticized typos in the past few days.,I also want to change.,1No time 2 I have a bad problem.,As long as I change the word, I like to re-ask and even add more plots.,You don't want the fixed plot you've seen to be changed beyond recognition by me.。
At last! If you still hope that I can take responsibility and continue to correct typos, please leave me a message! More than 20 I will move the first ten chapters, more than 100, I will overhaul the first 20 chapters more than 500 messages I will change the whole article! If you point out that it's wrong, I'll change it! Speaking counts and doesn't change, I am (hum (ˉ(∞)ˉ)sigh)!
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