Xinyu: So far, my favorite book is still "The Lost Traces of Huaibi", although it has a very poor score. When I received this long review, "Huaibi" had been completed for more than a year, and the number of hits per week was only one or two hundred, and even fewer readers could notice this long review and click on it. I really can't bear to leave such a wonderful long comment over there, Xinyu moved the full text over, and said to the author, and finally I agree with the opinion of the Mu Chu Gang, and I also tried hard at the time, but unfortunately my ability is limited. Not much to say, others are welcome to join the group to discuss.

If the heroine is weaker, it may be more exciting

Author: Book friend 140917101934500

I used to be a fan of martial arts, and I liked to hide martial arts books under the textbooks when I was in class. However, after Jin Yong's ancient dragon Liang Yusheng Wen Ruian and even Huang Yi, the martial arts literature lost its inheritance, and the appearance of the Tang Shuanglong Legend once made me very excited, when there were online martial arts novels, I had read a few articles, and I was not too impressed, and then I almost stopped reading martial arts novels, until I accidentally saw Huaibi the year before last. It can be said that this is the only martial arts article I have read in the past ten years. Later, for personal reasons (hehe, I just gave birth to a child), I put it aside halfway, and recently I finished reading it again. To be honest, this article really has to be the best of martial arts novels written by newcomers after several masters. (I don't want to fight with others, so I won't mention those very popular female writers of online martial arts.) ）

I won't say much about Huaibi's lost writing, just look at the few poems written by the author for the characters in the book to know the author's literary accomplishment, and these days, online novels are basically fast food, and the author is willing to settle down to write poems for the characters, it is not easy, which shows that the author still has a little pursuit, and is not completely carried away by the online literary world covered by this fast food. A few days ago, Kan Yuda revealed his thoughts in the author's words: The author of waste materials hopes to be able to look at the image in the book he wrote many years later, and still be able to like it. This sentence touched me very much, there are many people who are willing to write articles, and there are not many online writers who are willing to manage the characters in the article well, and who are willing to treat the characters in the text as family members who visit them from time to time or even look back many years later.

I like the structure of the book the most. There are really a few divine twists in it, which made me have many surprises when I read the text, and this accident is very well foreshadowed, not a raw one. The turning point of the heroine Shangguan Xuan's life experience and even Nanzhu's childhood sweetheart are not accidents, because the heroine always has to have some benefits. The biggest surprise comes from the setting of the role of Shi Niang, this burden is really good, compared to Bai Di's affection and Shi Niang's forbearance, and even the paranoia that is more often abandoned, the relationship between the male and female protagonists has become a bland home-cooked dish. I think this burden is really the most exciting part of the plot setting of this book, and it is not easy for this burden to be connected from the beginning to the end.

But at the end of the book, it still gave me a little bit of a sense of disobedience. Maybe it's the reason for the traditional concept.,When I see the heroine invincible in the martial arts world.,Even pull out the mountains.,It's a little hard for me to accept.,I'm not against the heroine.,But it's a house fight or farming or a variety of small white texts.,The heroine is stronger.,But in the martial arts world,I still like to have a more powerful Nanzhu.,The heroine can be very good and powerful.,But you don't need to be a woman.。 This may also be the preference of most readers, especially male martial arts book readers, the various descriptions of Nanzhu Tie Yao in this book are actually very good, and this Nanzhu is also a very attractive character, so it is covered up like this, I really feel that it is a pity. If the seventeen-inch bone slash is an iron free man instead of Shangguan Xuan, isn't it also reasonable? After all, Tie Xiaoyao is the one who uses knives. If the final internal force is super strong is Tie Xiaoyao, is it more acceptable to martial arts readers? Judging from the development of the plot, it shouldn't be too nerve-wracking for this book.

There is also a little regret, from my personal bad taste, I actually like the role of Ling Ziteng, a humble gentleman, gentle as jade, and open-minded, but unfortunately, he is too weak in this book, and the whole process of Mu Chubang's shocking change is a bit brief, the foreshadowing is enough, ** not enough...... Wouldn't it be better if this wasn't a heroine's text, but a readjustment according to the style of traditional martial arts? Two male protagonists, one female protagonist, including the supporting actress Yingnan, are all favorite characters, Shi Niang and Bai Di and Yue Chang abandon this small triangle must also have a lot of popularity, in this case, will it be more popular.

A little opinion, just for the reference of the fish big. I really like this book, so I wrote the above text, I hope the author will not be surprised, and I hope that other book friends will discuss with me, this book is really wonderful, I really don't want to be overwhelmed like this......

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