The first ad focuses on the landscape, the second on the emotion, so the final slogan becomes: Estéle Paris, help your beauty be ready for surprises every moment.

Zhang Qiuxi's surprise in the advertising film is the scenery along the way, and the so-called surprise in the advertising slogan obviously refers to love, there was no this when shooting, and she only knew that the advertising slogan was like this after watching it, but she didn't feel anything.

The popularity of the advertisement made the poem "Mistake" widely circulated, and many people waited in front of the TV to watch the advertisement after seeing the poem reprinted by netizens. Not only is Zhang Qiuxi's advertisement different, but the advertisement itself is also special enough, if you want to select the most popular advertisement, it will definitely be among the best.

It's only now that the ad is on its third day, and although it has already been discussed on the Internet, it is still surprising that someone else has introduced the work so quickly. Not to mention creation, it usually takes three to five days to mail the manuscript to the magazine.

Seeing that the sender's address on the envelope was in Qingxi Zhang Qiuxi was relieved, of course, it was faster to be local. Skipping the beginning of the poem, she was about to continue to look down, but the knock on the door of "Dangdangdang" attracted her attention again.

A woman of twenty-seven or eighteen years old appeared at the door, with short hair, wearing a sweatshirt, carrying a guitar and a travel backpack on her back, looking dusty, and her white sports shoes were covered with dried mud.

"Please come in." Hongdou beckoned her in, looked her up and down before asking, "Who are you looking for?" ”

No way, although this woman is also quite beautiful, she looks a little wolf in her dress. Whoever sees it will inevitably take a few more looks. Women,Generally, they love to be clean and pay attention to their image.,This person in front of me doesn't seem to care about these at all.。

"I'm here for you." She said logically and looked around. His eyes fell on Zhang Qiuxi's body, and then he said, "May I ask if Teacher Xiqiu is here?" ”

"Haven't you seen it all?" Zhang Qiuxi rolled her eyes, stood up and said, "Although you look a little familiar, I don't seem to know you, do you have anything to do with me?" ”

She didn't answer immediately, but glanced at the sofa not far away with her eyes, Zhang Qiuxi immediately reacted and said, "Please sit down." Sit down and talk about something. ”

Now she was not polite, and put aside the travel backpack and guitar that were already full of dust. After sitting down, he took out the mineral water and took a sip. She looked quite tired, and after sitting down, she involuntarily leaned back on the sofa.

At close range, they could see that her face was a little pale, and they were all curious about where this woman came from, although they threw it to Zhang Qiuxi to receive her. But I still watched curiously.

"I'm Yang Jie." She finally spoke again, but I didn't know how to introduce herself.

"Uh, did we know each other before? Or is the name famous? I'm sorry, I still can't remember. Although I always feel that I have seen it somewhere, Zhang Qiuxi is sure that he has never known such a person in his life.

Yang Jie said: "We don't know each other, and I'm not famous." But I submitted an article to your magazine yesterday, and I thought you would have an impression of my name after reading it. ”

"Yang Jie, this name seems to be really impressive." Zhang Qiuxi walked back to the desk and took the manuscript he was reading just now, and the name written in the sender column on the envelope was Yang Jie.

"That's what you're voting for, aren't you?" Zhang Qiuxi opened the manuscript paper and handed it over, only to find that the manuscript was actually full of pictures and texts. Each one has two photographs on it, some landscapes, some architecture, not novels but travelogues.

"That's it, that's right." Yang Jie nodded. Then he looked at Zhang Qiuxi with expectation and said, "How much can you pay for my article?" I've heard that the interpolated photos are quite expensive, can you give me some money in advance? ”

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Zhang Qiuxi and Hongdou are a little dumbfounded, in fact, the author will be eager to receive a reply as much as possible when he submits his manuscript, which is understandable. However, the magazine has been established for so long, and she personally came to the door to ask about the situation after only one day when the manuscript was sent, and she was the first to ask for an advance in the manuscript fee.

"If the author has special circumstances and needs to advance the manuscript fee, it is okay. But generally speaking, it has to be a contracted writer, or the manuscript has been serialized. Zhang Qiuxi usually doesn't care about these things. So this explanation is done by the red beans.

"I have a special situation right now." Yang Jie hurriedly said: "Teacher Xiqiu, for the sake of me being your fan, please make an exception to withdraw the manuscript fee to me." ”

"Well, your article is quoting my poems, and it can be seen that you are my fan." Although I don't know what Yang Jie's situation is, since she submitted the manuscript and came to say this, Zhang Qiuxi really can't refuse.

However, if you want to advance the manuscript fee, you must first have the manuscript fee, Zhang Qiuxi continued: "I was about to review the manuscript before you came, and I haven't finished reading it yet, so if you don't mind, wait a minute." ”

Yang Jie nodded like a chicken pecking rice, her eyes stared at Zhang Qiuxi, Zhang Qiuxi was uncomfortable, and her forehead was about to break out in a cold sweat. Only then did she feel that being stared at by a woman would be more unsettling than being stared at by a man.

After reading the manuscript carefully, Zhang Qiuxi raised his head and asked, "Miss Yang, are you a travel writer?" ”

"No, strictly speaking I'm a wandering singer. Of course, this is a nice saying, to put it bluntly, it is to sing at the exit of the subway and other places, and use other people's donations to wander around. Yang Jie shook her head.

"I remember, you were the one who caused the chaos at Huixi Station in the morning, right?" Zhang Qiuxi suddenly realized and said: "I saw you running away in a panic at the beginning, and I didn't look too carefully, so I didn't remember it for a while." ”

Yang Jie smiled awkwardly and said, "There will always be some trouble when you go out, I didn't expect to be met by you so coincidentally." ”

"It's really a coincidence, I didn't expect to meet it again when I take the subway again." Zhang Qiuxi suddenly felt that life was really amazing.

"Teacher Xiqiu, in fact, this is not important, right?" Yang Jie pointed to the manuscript in her hand and said, "Why did you suddenly ask me about my profession, do you still need to have a proof of work and a stable income to advance the manuscript fee?" ”

"Of course not, we're not a bank." Zhang Qiuxi said: "It's just, although our magazine can't accept articles like travelogues, but you have a bit of a problem." ”

Without waiting for Yang Jie to ask, Zhang Qiuxi continued: "Your article is too far-fetched, and the poem is completely inappropriate. Of course, it doesn't matter that we are in the southwest and not in the south of the Yangtze River, but it can't be that the whole poem is completely unrelated to the article, just quoted for the sake of quoting, right? ”

"Because I really like this poem very much, when I first saw this poem in the subway, I was very moved, and I couldn't help but add it." Yang Jie smiled awkwardly, she seemed to be the kind of person Zhang Qiuxi played in the Estee commercial, but it looked a little miserable.

Zhang Qiuxi continued: "Your writing is very beautiful, and many of them actually rhyme, so it can be seen that you have strong writing skills." However, the pictures and texts do not match, and the jumps are too strong, and there is no connection between each picture and each paragraph of text. ”

"I write a lot of lyrics." Yang Jie explained in a whisper.

"It's no wonder." Zhang Qiuxi nodded and said: "But writing lyrics is different from writing articles, the words need to be changed, I suggest that you describe the customs and what you see and hear in the photos, the mood is not not impossible to write, but don't always love and love, it should be about your perception of travel." ”

"Although the photos are not a place, at least there should be a certain connection in the mood and perception when describing, rather than the previous photo is still entangled in love, and the next photo is nostalgic for history."

Zhang Qiuxi has not been exposed to this kind of article before, but it can be regarded as having been mixed in the literary world for so long, and the ability to review manuscripts is still there, although these suggestions are not necessarily the most correct, at least it can be affirmed that Yang Jie's article is indeed problematic.

"Then my manuscript fee"

"It's a pity that your article doesn't meet the requirements for publication, and if you don't publish it, you won't have a manuscript fee, and of course it's impossible to advance it." Zhang Qiuxi shook his head.

"So the photo"

"Interpolated photos are really valuable, but you can't use them alone, because they're not photographed, and they're printed directly on manuscript paper, and the pixels are a little bit too much to gamble on." Zhang Qiuxi then dispelled Yang Jie's expectations.

Yang Jie became dejected when she heard this, and said: "Sure enough, I know that travel writers sound easy to envy, but it's not so easy to do." ”

Zhang Qiuxi felt that it was not good to dampen the enthusiasm of others, and there was indeed merit, so he said: "It's not easy to be a travel writer, but I think you should have been to a lot of places, and your writing skills are not weak, so it's not a problem to think about it." ”

"This is the first time I've written an article, and the photos were taken with my phone." Yang Jie said: "It's because I've been to a lot of places, and I happened to hear about the profession of a travel writer, so I thought about whether I could exchange some money in this way." ”

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You're embarrassed to travel without a camera these days, right? If you want to be a travel writer and take pictures, you actually use your mobile phone, Zhang Qiuci's face was full of helplessness, and said: "I think you should just continue to be a wandering singer, anyway, the result is the same." ”

"The lyrics are okay, but I don't like to write articles, and I'm not interested in novels." Yang Jie said again: "This time, I needed to sharpen the gun on the spot to find some on the Internet for reference, but I was already dizzy just by looking at it." ”

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This attitude really didn't write it, Zhang Qiuxi was speechless again, and said: "Wait, you're not even interested in novels, and you still say that you're my fan?" (To be continued)