Chapter 669: I can't bear it

Each project of the theme park is built by a different company, and no problem does not mean that there is no problem with all, and the acceptance work can be completely handed over to the quality supervision department to be responsible, and there is no possibility of any problems, but they are too concerned about the park, and they have to come and see it in person to feel at ease.

After Nobita's props museum, other projects will be completed in a short period of time, and I am afraid that I will have to run to the company in three days. Anyway, it's not far, and it's not a difficult thing, but it's not a problem. It took a while for the building to be built, and during this time, Sun Fuqing had already passed on the script they had created.

In the previous theatrical version, Nobita and his friends went to heaven and earth, and returned to the Three Kingdoms to slip around, but this time Sun Fuqing and the script they created directly pulled Nobita back to the primitive era. After everyone read the script, Zhang Qiuxi asked, "What do you think?" ”

"I got a zero score in the exam, was scolded by the teacher, laughed at by my friends, and was punished by my mother, and then I was disheartened and felt bored, and then ran away from home, it's still the same routine, but this time I ran away from home and went a little farther, and I went directly to 100,000 years ago, and no one really could find him."

Hongdou said: "The story is actually pretty much the same, but it's replaced by rescuing the primitives, I think it's okay." What do you think? Especially Haruharu and Shinna, you two have the most right to speak. ”

"There is actually a lot of room for plot details, and everything else is fine." Shina said this, and Red Bean said: "Of course they can't compare with you two in this regard, at least so far, the point is that this script is not feasible." ”

Ye Qingqing said: "It's a passing grade." The setting of the primitive man is quite interesting, and the flaws are not hidden. I don't think there's a problem. ”

"So that means they can do it according to this script? Do you have any other opinions? "Red Bean confirms again, if there is no opinion. Then it is necessary to allocate funds to make zuΓ² according to the script, Sun Fuqing and they are still waiting for the result with anxiety.

"I have an opinion." Zhang Qiuxi said: "The script can be improved, but if you don't improve it, I'm sorry for the audience, I think it can be simply modified." 100,000 years ago, it seemed to be the last ice age, and most of the earth became very cold and unsuitable for survival, so if you help primitive people, it shouldn't be a fight between tribes and beasts, you can let Nobita and them help primitive people avoid the ice age, what do you think? ”

Seeing this script, Zhang Qiuxi immediately thought of two stories. None of them are the theatrical version of "Doraemon", the two stories are "Ice Age" and "Crazy Primitives", so I can't help but think that if the two are combined, this script will be more interesting.

"To lead primitive people to a new livable environment, before that, you have to believe that the ice age will really come, and the storytelling is really stronger." Ye Qingqing nodded thoughtfully.

Hongdou then said: "It's very strong, you can make it into a TV animation if you grab it, and it can be out for several seasons." ”

"What's this, each theatrical version of the story stretches out and can be done well for several seasons. If you really can't do it, it's okay to divide one, two, three, it's called Nobita's Ice Age Episode. Zhang Qiuxi couldn't stand up the nonsense, and then said: "Or this episode helps primitive people, and the next episode helps wild animals such as mammoths and saber-toothed tigers." ”

Originally, there were several "Ice Age" in time and space. When Zhang Qiuxi crossed over, there was only one "Crazy Primitive", but from various aspects, the sequel was a sure thing, because the box office was too successful. Ending like this is clearly not the style of Hollywood studios.

When Shangguan Jin heard this, he said: "I knew that you would not be able to bear it, and you should have written the script yourself a long time ago." That's it. Whether or not we can achieve our goal is your story again. And the theatrical version is divided into upper, middle and lower, is this really good? ”

Hongdou thought about it and said: "There should be no problem, if no one reminds you of some things, the person concerned will never know what is wrong." As soon as Xiaoqiu revised the script, they would be able to clearly understand what the deficiencies were, and it would be easier to improve the deficiencies. Of course, grading or something is still exempt, we are the conscience of the industry, not an expert in cheating. ”

"I think that's the case." Zi Cai Xinna said: "Sister, don't directly revise the script, and just give suggestions for revision, just like a teacher reading a paper." Anyway, it won't take a few days to revise the script, and it won't delay the progress of the theatrical version. ”

As soon as the TV animation stopped, fans knew that the theatrical version was coming, but every time the theatrical version was made, it was calculated by years, and it was not bad for a few days. Hongdou said: "Then it's just to call back and let them rewrite, are you sure?" Notify them when it's confirmed. ”

"Don't worry, wait until I write down the revisions first." Zhang Qiuxi picked up the pen and said: "I only remembered when I heard Xinnai's analogy, it seems that we have really been doing the work of a teacher." ”

In the past, when I was studying, the teacher would leave some opinions on the exam papers, especially for essays. And now, they don't have to mark the papers, but they have reviewed, and they have decided to fully fulfill their responsibilities as editors and try their best to guide the authors, so they will give comments on each manuscript and write it in detail.

However, this is not mandatory, it doesn't matter if the author changes it or not, let alone refuses to publish it if the author does not revise it. Because there are too many contributors, at present, it can only provide some help to the selected works, and the opinions decide to publish or be serialized, and it will not affect anything if they do not refer to their opinions for revision.

The rejected manuscripts are not enough, only a very small part of the rejection opinions are given, and most of them are formulaic replies, which is the case for the entire industry.

Looking up to the company's side, it's different, the script must be revised when it is sent back, or it will be directly approved, and it will take the trouble to give any advice. It is estimated that Sun Fuqing's mood at this time is similar to that of the authors, waiting for others to give the results, and whoever comes will be nervous, unless they are 100% sure.

There is no need to write some clichΓ©s such as smooth writing and novel ideas, just point out the direction. In this way, the animation company has a clear concept, and not all the work has been completed by Zhang Qiuxi, the relationship is very good, strictly speaking, it is still a relationship between superiors and subordinates, no need for polite words. (To be continued......)