Chapter 6: Revision and Preparation of a New Chapter
After sending Xu Fei away, Li Xuechu took out the 1,000 Xiangjiang coins that he had just stuffed into his pocket, and he had mixed feelings for a while.
"I am not a person of this world, and this world has nothing to do with me." This kind of thinking has been lingering in Li Xuechu's mind for a long time, alone in a foreign land, without relatives and friends, and without understanding the language. In addition to Dege, who is also from the mainland, Xu Fei is the first Xiangjiang native to talk to him for more than half an hour.
It turned out that Li Xuechu didn't care much about these when the space-time tunnel was still there, but now he had to integrate into the foreign land of this strange era.
It is urgent to learn Xiangjiang dialect.
1,000 yuan in his hand, this is Li Xuechu's first entry in Xiangjiang in addition to reselling goods from later generations. After the money was in hand, he felt that the world was more real, or that he was more saved here. Li Xuechu suddenly had a desperate desire to see his works in the newspapers and magazines, not only to gain a foothold, but also to prove himself.
Me: Li Xuechu was originally a person who never existed in this history. But now that I'm really here, I want more people to know and recognize me, and even history has my record.
The determination is great, but things still have to be done step by step. Rather than the grand plan in my head, it is more practical to revise and improve the manuscript now.
There are still a lot of places to repair the manuscript, but it is not difficult for him to have the huge film and television materials of later generations as the backing. I gave it a week, but in fact, two or three days was enough to calm down.
The first to start is to be the first to grab people.,If you catch the reader's eye at the beginning.,Follow-up foreshadowing text can make readers patient.,Fortunately, the whole manuscript is basically a laugh throughout.,If the opening is overhauled.,Basically, the part of the second serialization is a little blander.。 That is, the part where the two thieves began to plan the burglary, but in fact, these are also quite prescriptive. After thinking about it for a while, the ideal in my heart took shape.
Without further ado, start writing down the ......
In a prison in Xiangjiang, in an office room, four police officers from the prison administration, court, and police department are sitting in a large desk, and there are two small benches in front of the desk near the corner. After a few seconds, there was a knock on the office door, and one of the officers answered the "please come in", and the door opened, and a female police officer ushered the two prisoners in. The two of them glanced nervously at their surroundings, then at the four expressionless officers, and then sat down on the small bench at the base of the wall.
A police officer glanced at them, picked up a copy of the text in front of him, and read it in the cold tone characteristic of political and legal officials.
"Zhang Cai and Zhang Baiban, who committed theft and robbed others of property in Yuen Long District, Heung Kong in July 1979, were arrested by the police in July 1979 and sentenced to two years and one year and nine months in prison respectively.
"Zhang Cai, Zhang Baiban, do you have anything to state when you apply for parole this time?"
Zhang Cai, who was a little older and a little older, glanced at the younger whiteboard next to him, and then began his statement in a slightly sad tone.
"My two brothers applied for parole this time mainly to take care of their mother. The old mother is not in good health, she has been suffering from rheumatic pain and arthritis for a long time, and she is also old, and we are very worried about her health. This time, we all asked the neighbors to hide it from my mother, saying that he was going out to do business, in case his grief was too much and affected his body. But next month is my mother's 60th birthday, and I want to go back anyway to see it, my mother has worked hard for so many years, and her health is getting worse and worse, and I don't know how long I can take care of her if I don't go out......"
Zhang Cai's low tone was matched with a sad face, and even the political and legal officials with iron hearts couldn't help but be moved.
"Poof!" The whiteboard next to him suddenly couldn't hold back his laughter.
The four of them looked at it suspiciously, the whiteboard laughter stopped abruptly, the organs on the face twisted strangely, and in just a few seconds, sweat came out. This made the four of them look more and more puzzled, and even began to look at the two brothers suspiciously.
"The old mother used to love his little son the most, but now the old mother is seriously ill, and the whiteboard can't sleep at night for the past few days. I'm sorry, sir. Cai hurriedly said, "Okay, whiteboard, don't cry." ”
Is this crying? The four of them looked at the whiteboard again, the whiteboard's expression became more and more distorted, and finally whimpered, crying, "woo woo ......" The tone was weird, I couldn't tell whether I was crying or laughing, my face rose, and my nose flowed into my mouth, making one of the policewomen in the middle of the four people sad and disgusted.
The whiteboard wiped his eyes, but there were no tears. After wiping it a few more times, my eyes finally turned red, but there were still no tears.
The benches of the two were quite close, and the wealthy hand quietly reached for the back of the whiteboard, pinched a piece of flesh, and twisted it vigorously......
"Woo woo woo ......" whiteboard's face was flushed, and he felt like he was going to die, as if he was enduring a painful experience.
Cai's face also began to sweat, and he spun it half a circle harder......
"Ahhhhh......h
"Xiaobai, if you are sad, you can cry, you don't feel good when you look like this!" Choi also held back tears and persuaded, and put another effort on his hands......
"Whoa, whoa, whoa......" The whiteboard finally cried, and the seven-foot man cried like a child, how uncomfortable was this? Seeing this scene, Cai is also sad, thinking about what happened to him in prison, the garbage food, and the savage inmates, I can't help but cry.
"Woo woo woo ......" The middle-aged policewoman also cried, the policewoman was embarrassed and sad and looked left and right at her colleagues, and finally couldn't hold back and cried bitterly.
After a few minutes, the crying was almost gone, and an older police officer broke the silence first. "I'm sympathetic to what you're going through, but ......," he said, looking at the second page of the file he had just turned over, "weren't you orphans before?" ”
"Huh?" The other three were startled, and they also turned the second page to look at the information in the file.
"Uh......" Cai hated in his heart, why is the file so detailed?
But soon, Zhang Cai recounted the ups and downs and bizarre life experiences of his two brothers. As soon as I got out of the orphanage, Zhang's mother came to the door, it turned out that since the disappearance of the Zhang brothers, Zhang's mother had been looking for her son thousands of miles away, and found Xiangjiang from Nanyang, rheumatism and arthritis was the root of the disease left by sleeping in the open at that time. Zhang's mother went through hardships and finally found the two brothers in Xiangjiang, and the mother and son were finally reunited. Because their mother was too old and frail to give birth, the two brothers could only work everywhere, and their lives were very difficult. In the end, Zhang's mother was seriously ill, and her brother was cornered and blinded for a while, and finally embarked on the road of no return to theft and robbery. The hardships are unspeakable......
The story is bizarre, the ups and downs of the mother and son are tragic, and they chase the Korean drama, and the policewoman is also in tears. After a while, there was a pile of tissues in front of the policewoman's desk, and the other three couldn't help but lament that there were people in the world who had such an experience.
"Phew!" "Phew!" Ten minutes later, two parole applications were stamped with two large bright red stamps, and parole was approved......
"Wow~hahahaha......" More than ten miles out of the prison gate, an arrogant laugh rose to the sky.
"Brother! You're so wise and so clever, I adore you. The sycophants of the tabula rasa gushed endlessly, "With my brother like this, nothing can be done in the world, and where can I go." Brother, you are my idol. ”
"Okay, compared to Einstein and Li Jiachen, my brother is still a little worse, but it's also bad luck," Zhang Cai's face was proud: "Learn a little, I almost made you bad this time, but fortunately I'm smart enough." ”
"That's it, they're lucky, by the way, brother, now that they're out, what should we do?"
"What else can you do, do your old job!"
"Do it again, brother?" The whiteboard was a little scared, "If you go in again, it won't be so easy to come out"
"Don't worry, I have a plan," Zhang Cai looked wise, "I've been reflecting on it for a long time in prison, and the reason why we went in was because we didn't have a plan to do things, and if we didn't plan anything, we would kill people if we didn't plan it." There is also a waste of energy on the poor ghosts, those poor bastards, there are no two money on the body and the precautions are so strict, stealing a piece of clothing can chase you for three miles, this time it is a dead old woman, next time I don't want it for nothing, this time we want to steal the rich. ”
looked at the palpitating whiteboard: "I have been thinking about this plan for a long time, and I promise that nothing will go wrong." You first go to the rich man's community as a security guard, I go to buy a police light and two ** with Chen Cripple, usually converge the point, pay attention to collecting information from each family, and wait for which day there is no one, let's drive a car in and empty everything, the rich people's mansions are far away from each other, and they usually deal less with each other, and they like to travel, and no one may know that our things are empty for two or three days, and we don't have to worry about having no money to spend for ten years. The more Cai said, the more excited he became, "When they come back, we don't know where to go for a long time, hehehe." ”
"Brother."
"What?"
"You're treacherous!"
"Needless to say? Wahahaha...... "......
"That's it!" Li Xuechu put down his pen and looked at the opening plot that was almost polished, and his mood improved.
wrote a general plot, and the later manuscript doesn't need to be changed too much, the thieves have become two brothers, and the eldest brother is the mastermind and the younger brother runs errands, which is similar to the original setting. The opening chapter actually borrows from the Korean drama "100% Thief Woman", but from a beautiful woman to a two-legged man. The outline should also be planned to tell a complete plot every six or seven thousand words to facilitate newspaper publication, and it can be done in three days.
But the remaining four days can't be wasted, you have to think of another story, anyway, when Xu Fei comes, you don't have to hand it over to him in its entirety, just write an outline and the previous part of the plot.
What else to write?
Originally, I wanted to write Home Alone and other similar movies at once, but I still didn't think about it. Writing a bunch of similar novels at once does not say that readers will be aesthetically fatigued, and I feel that it is inappropriate. Let's wait for this to become popular, if someone follows the trend, just follow it, in fact, really capable editors disdain to follow the trend. I still have so many movies in my head that haven't appeared yet, and there's no need to think about this.
After thinking about it for a while, Li Xuechu had an idea. Pick up a stack of new manuscript paper and write on the cover: "Drunken hero." ”
"This is quite suitable," Li Xuechu thought.
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