I don't know if it's because of the heroine's amnesia, it's all dazed, the heroine in the text is at a loss for everything, and the article is also, lacking an emotional conception, but using the brushstrokes to depict the scene, the scene and the reality, but obviously, some places can't grasp the whole scene well, write points or write faces, and use your skills to bring out the whole big field.

The creation of emotional atmosphere is already very weak, if the whole story cannot be described through the scene

"Realm", then it is a failure, maybe it is deliberately written in this way, there is no depiction of wind and snow, and I try my best to pursue one

The "field" is true, but only by itself

"Scenes" to write people out of the soul, it is a little difficult, at least I personally think it is a little difficult, the article is not bad, but it is really far from that kind of wonderful writing.

People, scenes, feelings, meanings, fields, environments, these six words should be pondered!

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