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"Teacher, don't laugh anymore, your mouth is crooked, it's already !!" Facing Wu Xiuyan, who covered her mouth and chuckled from time to time, Sun Yanye sighed that the other party was not serious, and at the same time, she couldn't help but complain a little depressedly. (Please search for the fastest novel website!)

As a person who played (Xue Zhihua) and (Powder Snow), Sun Yanye really didn't expect that these two songs would make the audience feel so much, it has been a long time, and there are still eyes in the coffee shop from time to time, so that he doesn't dare to take off the scarf that wraps half of his face at will, for fear of being recognized and causing some trouble.

"What could it be? But I really didn't expect that Yan Ye, your charm is so great, you see, there are so many little girls quietly staring at you with your face!! Ignoring Sun Yanye's complaints, Wu Xiuyan squinted her eyes and continued to tease Sun Yanye's nerves, as if it was really interesting to do so, "Seriously, you don't want to fall in love?" Anyway, you're 17 years old, the season of first love!! I miss your teacher and me, that beautiful first love."

With a straight face, Sun Yanye stared at Wu Xiuyan expressionlessly.

Because as a student, facing Wu Xiuyan, a teacher who is really good to him, it is impossible to ignore the top bar of his face, so all Sun Yanye can do is 'silent protest'.

"" Remembering the beauty of her past in her mind, she was about to express her emotions, but Sun Yanye's 'silent protest' poured her heart like a basin of cold water, Wu Xiuyan immediately glanced at Sun Yanye, waved her hand and said, "Okay, don't look at me with that kind of look, it's just a joke, I'll just get back to business, what about the script?"

"Here" finally doesn't have to let the ears be destroyed, Sun Yanye breathed a sigh of relief in his heart, and didn't forget to hand over the script that had been placed on the table early in the morning to Wu Xiuyan.

"(The little thing of first love)? Hehe" which pot is not opened, looking at the big title on the cover of the script, Wu Xiuyan did not continue to check the script for the first time, but stared at Sun Yanye meaningfully, until the other party blushed and 'retreated', and then tilted her head like a winner, and then focused her attention on the script in her hand

Although I had heard Sun Yanye say a simple approximate at the banquet before, it was just a rough idea, and there would be a big difference between it and the actual finished script in front of her, so Wu Xiuyan looked at it very carefully, for fear of missing any key points, and stopped from time to time to ponder a little.

This is a film literary script, but the writing is not sophisticated at all, and there are even jerky handling of various details---- this is the first conclusion reached by Wu Xiuyan after carefully reading the script. Of course, Sun Yanye's script, the problem is not only this, but also the background description and portrayal of the drama** characters also have their own shortcomings.

Hawkers, although there are all kinds of shortcomings, Wu Xiuyan has no dissatisfaction, because this is completely what she expected.

Expecting a person who is writing a script for the first time to come up with a script that makes her impeccable at once, Wu Xiuyan said that she has not whimsically opened to such a Cheng dù, and in broad daylight, it is better not to daydream too much. However, (the trivial matter of first love) there are many shortcomings of this script, but the advantages are also real, at least in terms of the narrative of the story, it is very smooth, giving people a feeling of doing it in one go, and the plot of the whole script is also remarkable.

"There's still a long way to go, Yanye!" Although she was quite satisfied with the script created by Sun Yanye this time, Wu Xiuyan did not show it, but was ready to beat the former.

made up her mind, Wu Xiuyan said words against her will, and at the same time pointed out all the problems in the script to Sun Yanye, and attached some of her own revisions by the way.

Listening carefully to the advice provided by Wu Xiuyan, Sun Yanye felt hit in his heart, and at the same time, he really recognized his many shortcomings in script creation. The gap is too big from the original idea, and Sun Yanye really didn't realize that his first script had so many problems.

"Hehe, don't be too sad, the first time, it's all like this, Yan Ye, when you first wrote a song, it was probably not very good, tried again and again, accumulated again and again, and only now that you have those excellent and even classic songs that have come out, isn't it?" Seeing that Sun Yanye seemed to be choked enough, Wu Xiuyan knew the truth of being too much, and smiled and encouraged.

"Well, but I'm really nostalgic because I made a lot of noise when I first started writing songs!" Nodding with a sigh, Sun Yanye first laughed at himself for a while, and then boosted his morale.

Although personally Sun Yanye is not the kind of person who has a particularly big heart and does not take any setbacks to heart, in the final analysis, he is not the kind of vase that can't withstand a little blow, and it will break when he falls.

In my heart, because I realize that I have too many shortcomings, I have a sense of frustration.

But after experiencing so many big and small things, because of this little criticism of Jianyi, Sun Yanye has not been fragile enough to be that Cheng Dù, otherwise when he was wandering in New York, he would have been unable to think about himself, and he would not have been able to find Sun Yongjun and take him to live in South Korea.

"Teacher, one day I will be able to write a script like you!! that can be accepted and liked by the audience." Leaving behind the disappointment and frustration caused by the lack of scripts created in this attempt, Sun Yanye regained his spirit and made his own ambitions.

Quantitative change produces qualitative change, when he Sun Yanye was able to create beautiful and moving music from constantly making noise to now, he didn't believe that he would not be able to create a qualified script in the future.

"Hehe, it's best if you can think like this," Seeing that Sun Yanye did not lose confidence because of his little beating, but instead exerted his strength, Wu Xiuyan secretly rejoiced in her heart, but continued to say, "It's just that your script (the trivial matter of first love) is actually not really so useless, if you change it carefully, you may really be able to become a qualified script, even if it is put on the big screen, it may be possible!" ”

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was surprised enough by Wu Xiuyan's sudden 180-degree turn, Sun Yanye looked at the former in a daze, and for a while he didn't know what to say, and he couldn't help but have a thought in his heart----Hey, this teacher cares about himself and cares about himself, but he just wants to encourage himself, so he can't open his eyes and say nonsense, and put it on the big screen?!" completely forgot that jì had just memorized her own script, and she was so full of holes

"Don't react so much," waving her hand and calming Sun Yanye a little, Wu Xiuyan continued, "According to Yan Ye, Cheng Dù of your current script, you don't even think about it on the big screen, even if you really have that opportunity, the chance of hitting the street is also great!" ”

"Hehe" smiled wryly, Sun Yanye knew this question, but when Wu Xiuyan picked it out, he still couldn't help but feel a little hot on his face.

"But, the story foundation of this script is very good, it's just that you don't have enough ability to modify Yan Ye, otherwise, put the script here first, I'll help you rearrange it in the next few days, and then you can compare Yan Ye and take a look, you can mention what is lacking, and you can also read it if there is something worth learning from!" Ignoring Sun Yanye's embarrassment, Wu Xiuyan made arrangements on her own, "As for the question of whether to move it to the big screen, let's take a look at it then, that problem is not so simple, filming a movie, there are many curves and curves in it!" ”

"Well, that's bothering you!! teacher" only thought about the issue of revising the script, Sun Yanye bowed down to express his gratitude to Wu Xiuyan, as for the later filming problems, Sun Yanye ignored it for himself, that is still far away, not to mention that he alone can't complete the matter of putting this script on the big screen, it's just nonsense.

"What's not troublesome, but Yan Ye, don't fall behind in your study of script creation during this time, this is just a literary script, you can't lose the storyboard script, watch more and learn more, it's always beneficial to you!" Rubbed Sun Yanye's head, although the former is getting older, Wu Xiuyan's habit is afraid that it is also stereotyped, and she can't change it, and she is too lazy to change it, while telling Sun Yanye, for fear that Sun Yanye won't believe it, Wu Xiuyan explained more seriously, "The screenwriters on the Korean and Japanese sides are different from China, Europe and the United States, the screenwriter doesn't just hand over the literary script, and you can continue to write the storyboard script, with the director or alone, that is, in the end, the name of the director will be hung, It's not impossible to command the entire crew! ”

"Eh!!"

In response to Wu Xiuyan's instructions, Sun Yanye was about to continue to say something, but the mobile phone in his pocket rang like a convulsion, and the music was so loud that it could basically be heard in the entire coffee shop.

Apologetically signaling to the customers who came by the prestige around him, Sun Yanye then directly pressed the call button, "Yuko, is there something?" ”