Chapter 13 Completion of the work

For Kim Sung-ho, a scout from S.M. Company, his dedication really made Cui Zhenlong feel ashamed. Since Cui Zhenlong returned home from Seoul for more than a month, Kim Sung-ho has made no less than 15 calls to Cui's house, and he also came to Busan in person to persuade the Cui family to agree to Cui Zhenlong's going to the company as a trainee, but in the refusal of his grandfather Cui Zhongguo Yizheng's words, and Cui Zhenlong himself also said that he had no intention of debuting as a star at all, Kim Sung-ho died down and left the Cui family in despair, but deep down in his heart he had no intention of giving up, and felt that there was a turning point in this matter, but the time had not yet come. Besides, now that Cui Zhenlong is still young, he can wait a little longer.

Putting aside the idea that Kim Sung-ho is destined to have a cup for the time being, our Cui Zhenlong classmate has completely focused on his mother, why? That's because the novel he was looking forward to so much, "My Sassy Girlfriend", finally wrote the first draft with Park Xiuhui's efforts of more than two months, and the next step was follow-up revisions and other work.

Cui Zhenlong's goods have been like a little monkey jumping up and down for the past few days, constantly circling around Park Xiuhui's side, begging his mother to let him see the completed first draft first. But how could Park so-hye give him the manuscript? After all, in her eyes, Cui Zhenlong is just a child, and if she loses her manuscript, then her hard work for more than two months will be in vain. In the end, he really couldn't help being entangled by Cui Zhenlong, so he made a copy to him, and told Cui Zhenlong not to lose the copy, otherwise beware of his little ass.

Cui Zhenlong, who got the copy, immediately went into his room and read it carefully, and as soon as he saw the names of the heroes and heroines of the novel, he was thundered! In the original version of the novel, the author is lazy enough, the male protagonist is named Morning Glory, and the female protagonist simply replaces it with "she"; Now look at Park Xiuhui is better than the original author, the male protagonist's name is Park Gengyou, the female protagonist's name is Cui Xiuhui, Nima, even if you are the author of the novel, you don't have to be so narcissistic, the male and female protagonist's names are directly used to simply swap the surnames of herself and her husband!

After reading the first two chapters of the novel, Choi Jin-ryong felt that his original decision was so wise, Park Xiuhui's writing skills are indeed extraordinary, and the style of the novel is very smooth, and there is no jerky feeling of writing for the first time. may be due to the fact that she is a female writer, and under Park Xiuhui's pen, the portrayal of the details of the characters and the psychological changes of the heroine are particularly prominent, which is many times stronger than the online novel in the previous life. After all, Kim Ho-sik, the author of the online novel in his previous life, is not good at writing, so he is relatively simple and casual in terms of words, and he still mainly relies on the novelty of the story itself to win by surprise.

Choi Jin-ryong also found that this novel is different from the version of the previous life in many ways during the reading of the novel, first of all, the novel of the previous life is written in the first person of the male protagonist, while Park so-hye's version is written on the basis of the third person, and she describes the story more from the perspective of the heroine; second, compared with the works of her previous life, in addition to writing the storylines mentioned by Choi Jin-ryong, Park Xiuhui also added some other content, making the whole story more full and interesting in terms of plot and more readable; Third, in terms of the handling of the ending, like the version in the previous life, it does not have a happy ending as described in the movie, which makes Cui Zhenlong very entangled.

Overall, the novel was written very successfully, completely beyond Choi Jin-ryong's expectations, but he was going to read it again and then list his thoughts for Park so-hye to refer to.

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"Oppa, you can play with me!" Just when Cui Zhenlong was busy, a delicate coquettish sound interrupted his train of thought, and he didn't know when Cui Xueli, the little girl, entered his room and wanted to play with his brother who loved him the most.

"Shirley, good, you go to Zhenzhe Zhenxian to play, OPPA has something to do" Cui Zhenlong looked at this little girl with a little headache, some of her sometimes rude requests made him unbearable, just like the last time, playing with her, Cui Shirley invited him to eat a burger made of plasticine, of course, Cui Zhenlong picked up the burger and put it in his mouth and pretended to eat it, and praised it, but the girl began to cry, saying that Cui Zhenlong did not eat the hamburger. Nima, is this thing edible? It's really going to kill you!

"But Zhenzhe oppa, they don't want to play with me, and they always bully me," the little girl began to complain to her eldest brother.

"Huh? Are they really bullying you? Cui Zhenlong asked.

Seeing the little girl nodding her little head aggrievedly, a cold light flashed in Cui Zhenlong's eyes, "It's really been three days since the house was uncovered, and it seems that the 'education of love' can't be stopped." ”

Immediately, Cui Zhenlong really found a few younger brothers and taught him a good lesson, and the three little guys were obedient to him and obediently followed Cui Xueli to play at home.

In this way, in addition to attending normal classes and training classes, Cui Zhenlong spent the rest of his spare time in his room, and the family was very strange at first, what happened to this child, but later found out that he didn't do anything out of the ordinary, so he was relieved. Adults think that without this leather monkey to take the lead, the home is much cleaner, which is also very good, but after a few days, everyone feels that the home is a little too quiet, in the words of my aunt Cui Gengjing: "Without Cui Zhenlong's pistachio at home, there is no taste for even eating." ”

After more than ten days of retreat, Cui Zhenlong revised the name of the last novel, and his work came to an end, and Cui Zhenlong rushed to his parents' room with the revised copy in his hand.

When I walked into the room, I saw that my mother was still lying on the table and writing seriously, and I didn't dare to remind her out loud, the last time he broke into the room recklessly, interrupted her train of thought, and then was taught a hard lesson by Park Xiuhui, and now even Choi Gengyou didn't dare to disturb Park Xiuhui when she was working, otherwise the consequences would be severe, and his end would be miserable that can't be expressed in words.

Cui Zhenlong stood next to Park Xiuhui, carefully watching her decoration of her work, until Park Xiuhui finished writing the last word and stretched a lazy waist, then he found that his little leather monkey was standing next to him, and he didn't know how long it had been.

"Zhenlong, is there anything to find your mother?" Park so-hui asked.

Cui Zhenlong immediately walked behind Park Xiuhui, skillfully massaged her with her little hands, and then said with a hippie smile: "Oh, Mom has worked hard to write, I'll help you beat your back." ”

Park Xiuhui closed her eyes and enjoyed her son's service, the first draft of her novel had been written, and the revision was relatively smooth, and her mood was surprisingly good.

Cui Zhenlong pinched his shoulder for a while, and then asked tentatively, "Oh Mom, has your novel been revised?" ”

"Well, not yet, it will take a few days. By the way, you didn't lose the copy you received, did you? ”

"Of course not, I'm not Zhenzhe, they lost everything, oh Mom, look, aren't they here" Cui Zhenlong took out the copy of the novel that he had altered and handed it to his mother.

"Huh?" Park so-hye took the copy and was about to put it in the drawer of her desk, but with her usual instincts, she believed that her son could not be as simple as reading his own novel, and must have other purposes.

As she opened the first page of the novel, what caught her eye was some handwritten fonts densely interspersed between the lines, out of curiosity, Park Xiuhui began to read the modified text carefully, and after reading a few more pages, although Cui Zhenlong's revision ability or his writing skills are not as deep as Park Xiuhui, but his whimsical ideas on the plot arrangement still have a great touch effect on Park Xiuhui.

"You little fur monkey, you just want to show me this today, right?" Park so-hui looked at Cui Jin-ryong with a smile and asked.

"Oh Mom, I just wanted to help you, and don't you think I'm writing well? I really inherited your excellent talent, oh mom," this thing is starting to narcissize again.

For her son's tricks, Park Xiuhui has long been accustomed to it, and said with a very calm expression: "Okay, oh Mom, I'll watch it carefully, after all, this is the result of Wuli Zhenlong's efforts for many days." After speaking, he also held Cui Zhenlong's little face with both hands, and several bobos came on it.

Seeing that his goal was achieved, Cui Zhenlong also walked out of the room with a smile on his face full of saliva, and now he is very smooth, he just needs to wait for Park Xiuhui to finalize the whole work. He believes that the quality of this novel itself must be excellent, and as long as it is coupled with effective publicity, it will definitely be a big hit.