After reading what was written earlier, I found that the plot was really a bit dragged, but it was also because at the beginning, in order to explain the relationship between the characters and the background, some places had to use more pen and ink.

But I also admit that many places that can be done better and more concisely are because I wrote a book for the first time and didn't handle it well.

Because I want to portray the characters and characters too deeply, it is inevitable that the description of the dialogue is too focused and deliberate.

It should improve a lot later, and the plot writing will definitely improve with experience. I hope that my book friends can be patient and support me.

It's really hard for a new book to survive, and you feel okay after reading this book, please take a moment to recommend it, and thank you very much.