Chapter Seventy-Two: How to Describe a Character to Make People Shine
Suddenly, Sayou thought of something, this matter is not aimed at others, but at himself.
You don't have to think carefully to know that everyone will have a little bit of a vision for the future, and they will have dreams, for example, Sayou once wanted to eat a Manchurian banquet once a day.
However, if this dream is not a dream, if it is realized one day, I will definitely feel disappointed and disappointed at that time.
After all, the reason why dreams have value is, of course, because dreams are not realized, and they can continue to provide motivation for people, but once they are realized, this motivation will probably disappear.
The dream that I had always wanted to achieve was fulfilled at this moment, but when I finished it, I threw it aside, and I couldn't help but say, 'Is your dream only worth so little!?' Bastard guy! βγ
But that's the way it is, once the dream is realized, it no longer has the ability to power itself, and it ends there.
Okay, so here's the problem, different people will make different choices after their dreams come true.
The former is to put an end to dreams and indulge in the reality of the moment; The latter is to continue to erect the banner of dreams and then keep moving towards it.
Although the former's approach is a bit lazy, it is also relatively easy to understand, since you have already achieved your dream, why bother yourself?
However, the latter approach is not quite correct, of course, it is right to work hard for life, but being too yourself will only bring bad effects.
If one day you can really eat the genuine Manchu Han full meal, Sayou may cry with joy. Of course, there will be tears of sadness.
After all, looking at it this way, the goal that people strive for and the hardships they pay. It seems insignificant after implementation......
Now Sayou has no chance to realize that so-called dream, he still has a lot of things to do, and things that must be done.
People are made of memories, so what are the characters in the works made of?
Language? Dialogue? Action? Fight? Psychology? Sadness? Ponder? A variety of factors can create a character, but also can position a character, which can really give the character charm and something that has a sense of zΓ i. What is it exactly?
"Speaking of which, young man, your doubts seem a little redundant, and you only need to use your hands as the author to create zΓ o. Why care about the details? Although it is often said that the devil is in the details, it is just an excuse for one's own failures and sloppiness. Because they don't care about the details, they fail, and those people just want to prove the theory. The same goes for the male classmates who courted me in the past. What to say is wrong in the details. I'll definitely pay attention to what I wear in the future, but that's not the point. β
"Is this a show off in disguise? And courtship or something......"
This female college student is a wild animal from somewhere, no wonder she is unruly.
No, it's not unruly, the reason why she rejected those men's courtship was wrong, it was a confession, it should be simply because she didn't want to associate with people. I'm not good at socializing with people.
Rehearsing it in my mind, the picture of Miss Luozhi walking with her boyfriend is really unimaginable.
"I don't mean to show off. If you want to show off, you're always showing off, boy, right? Don't underestimate the anger of the FFF group, pay attention to your crotch when you sleep at night! β
"This kind of joke is too dangerous!"
"Then be careful with your two poached eggs, huh~"
"Don't say this yellow as if nothing happened. Erotic jokes, have you finished setting up your character over there? There is also the design of the costume. β
"OK, OK, there's no problem at all, I'm not a casual person, I will never be sloppy where I should be serious, and I won't make excuses for my carelessness."
Even if it's not very reassuring, but for the work of Luozhi, Sayou still agrees with her.
After all, as a college student, she has experienced a longer life than her current 'self', and if she is still like a child, she is too irresponsible for herself.
On this topic, Sayou is puzzled about his future, and he is inclined to be a hard-core man, but he still has a relatively neutral face at the moment, isn't this setting strange?
"I have a point of view that when it comes to character building, it's not a comic, but a novel, and the best way to create a character is dialogue. Psychological description should be ranked second, after all, psychological description is aimed at a certain person, and the dialogue is a description of more than two people, and it is the best way to portray a character from multiple angles in the way of many people, right? β
"Indeed, the most important thing in the novel is the description of the dialogue, and then the psychological description, the description of appearance, the description of the scene and the description of the battle, among which, the description of the battle may also be a more important place."
Because the depiction of a battle can highlight a character's personality traits, how do you fight? A direct attack? Cunning dodge? These are all important.
Listening to Sayou's analysis, Miss Sakura, who was holding the pen, nodded again and again, she was very straightforward in this regard.
Straightforwardness is good, but because of this straightforwardness, Miss Sakura didn't escape from the hospital before, and she probably has been thinking about the only way out, so that the doctors can catch it.
It's not quite right, she was only discovered when she was about to escape, so should it be said that she had already made a plan?
Regardless of the outcome, her defeat is the opportunity for two people to meet, and this cannot be changed.
Failure creates an encounter that feels ironic.
In addition, it is not easy to admit that others are right, and no one willingly classifies their own ideas in the wrong place.
Back now, Miss Sakura hasn't stopped writing, and now she's drawing lines for the pictures, and she's also taking notes, recording the settings she thinks of or the bugs she finds.
"How should the characters be described to make people shine, that is, whether the dialogue will make people shine. However, in the light novels or literary works I have read so far, there are many books with few dialogues but a lot of mental activity, and the process of such books is relatively dull, but once you like it, you will love it. By the way, I've seen a novel written in the second person, and it's an amazing feeling. β
No, it's unbelievable and a little bit of disobedience, Ms. Sakura added.
"I'm afraid that's very disagreeable...... The first person and the third person are commonly used, no, it is a prescriptive descriptive technique, and I didn't expect anyone to dare to use the second person, which is a huge challenge in the history of literature. β
As for whether it's literature or not, I'll talk about it later, you're sitting in front of you......
"I have a little bit of an opinion, too."
"Comrade Lin Xuan, please."
"Thank you......"
Lin Xuan sorted out the words in his heart while looking at the books in front of him, and then put the books aside.
"Dialogue is important, but the content of the dialogue is the center, and if it's just gossip, it's difficult to create a good character. Let's take this work created by everyone zΓ o as an example.,The content of the dialogue must not be too ordinary.,After all, the background and setting are not ordinary.,In order to conform to the setting, you must add some conversations that are mixed with the setting.,For this reason, you need to pay attention to it.,Write interesting conversations in the case of matching the background.γ But yes - that's just for novels, and the word about manga has changed a bit, right, because manga with too much dialogue is not popular. β
After Lin Xuan finished speaking, he picked up the book in his hand, it was a popular royal road hot-blooded comic recently, and the dialogue content was indeed not much, it was just right Cheng dΓΉ.
Zuoyou agrees with Lin Xuan's words, so far I really haven't seen any comics that are all dialogues, so to speak, it's no wonder that I rarely see the comics of the Monogatari series......
Sayo touched his chin and nodded, then picked up the brush and kept making new changes to his work, adding a stroke here, adding a stroke there, and then outlining the lines to add a bit of rough background.
Then......
"Sure enough, the boobs should be bigger."
"It was wrong in the first place!" ββ
was complained about by the three of them...... (To be continued......)