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Li Donglai said: "Not only are there all kinds of spoofs, but the protagonists spare no effort to blacken themselves. From the breakup of the male protagonist who began to make a cameo, to the female protagonist who appeared as a plain female man, one person bravely fought two robbers, and then to the joke of the heroine's slippers...... It looks easy to be black, but it actually takes courage! A lot of bridges are very creative. 'Mei Yuangui took Ye Xiaochun to ride a horse and run on the bridge' This paragraph is good, I feel like a small high-tide. It's going to be hilarious. There are also a lot of touching and heartwarming plots. It's good to make the movie not empty for the sake of being funny. ”

"From a professional point of view, the creative source of this story, created in a concept-first way, 'Breakup Master' is a highly conceptual name, and its advantage is that it will use your life experience, cognitive ideas to create associations in your mind, and even vague framed movie content, so that you can probably guess the style of the movie, etc., creating a strong sense of familiarity before watching the movie. This kind of conceptual precedence is both a part of typology and easy to lead to emptiness. However, if it is done well, it will not, for example, South Korea's "Love Operation Group" has achieved a good box office, and "Shocking Demon Thieves" and "League of Thieves" undoubtedly belong to this kind, and the word-of-mouth box office is acceptable, so it is promising to do a good job. ”

"Come east, "Shocking Demon Thieves" has not been released yet." Liu Dehua reminded next to him.

"Oh, hasn't it been released yet...... It's almost there, too. Let's move on to the movies. ”

Li Donglai slapped the script and flipped to the side where he had just marked.

Deng's heart tightened, and he actually felt nervous that the teacher was going to take an exam during the semester. Sit upright and listen.

Really. Listen to Li Donglai: "There are many satirical contents in the script, such as the success of learning and other similar industry advocacy behaviors, and the relationship between rich people and husbands and wives - hypocritical bosses. Matching the wife who plays on the spot, as well as the ugly side of human nature, etc., are involved, which is still very reliable. In terms of theme, as mentioned earlier, there are inspirational and realistic elements, and the landing point is more withstanding scrutiny, but why these good ideas not only do not add points to the story, but on the contrary, they become unpleasant to the audience. Dizzy, I don't know why. ”

"So what's the reason?"

Li Donglai raised an index finger, "I summarized a few points." Hope it helps. ”

"First, the text is not right.

Because one of the most important problems in the script is that the protagonist's purpose is not clear and the main story line is not clear. Irrelevant. Breakup Master. But except for the first half, the second half disappeared out of thin air, leaving only a looming shadow. So the movie has no theme...... So is this still a breakup master? It's about the influence of a manic female man on a sexy liar - maybe too much. But the most important thing for a movie is that the theme is clear, and a good movie title is the key to a commercial film. You want to let people know what you're talking about, and you can even make it a gimmick. But it can't stop there. It's going to be a double-edged sword: as many viewers as you get, you're going to get as many lashes. ”

"This year there is an American comedy film called 'Sex-Sex Tapes.' Originally, it was a good story about a couple who accidentally uploaded a sex-to-love video to the Internet, and since then have embarked on a long journey to defend their rights and delete the videotape. But the title ruined the movie. ”

"Of course, it's not that it's a bad name."

"The main reason is that the main plot line is not clear enough, if the final expression is the love between Mei Yuangui and Ye Xiaochun, then before that, the relationship between them was too little interaction, and most of the supporting roles impacted the main line, and the main line of the director became a looming existence, so the gimmick spoof filled the film, and once the humor and comedy lost its foundation, it would become a castle in the air, making the audience feel an inexplicable sense of nothingness. This will make people unhappy after watching it. ”

In view of this, we can compare the mass base and good reputation of "Thai Embarrassment". "Thai Embarrassment" is also a variety of spoofs in the middle, such as elevator incidents, stealing documents, horses killing chickens, Songkran Festival, temple chases, street car chases, and torrent bravery...... But there's a story line here – signing! Agency! Or sign a contract! And in order to make the main line more exciting, let these funny bridges in the middle naturally integrate into the main line, and deliberately added the obstacle line of the yellow neck. So the movie is natural and smooth, no matter how noisy or tossing you are, you don't feel annoyed. Because this is not for the sake of making trouble, but to title each spoof as 'one of the ninety-nine-eighty-one difficulties encountered in order to be the first to achieve the final goal of signing', the screenwriter spares no effort to remind you at every moment - sign, I want to sign, I want to sign before that person. ”

"But "Breakup Master" should have a good main line, let Ye Xiaochun break up with the success master, but don't let her get hurt, there are contradictions in this itself, and there are dramas where there are contradictions. However, many humorous plots are not closely related to it, although it makes sense, but the creation of movie scripts should avoid randomness, if it is random, why do you want the screenwriter to do it? The film script is the art of necessity, the art of making the accidental inevitable, the art of creating the inevitable by chance, and by no means the art of piling up the accident, that is physics, and the film is chemistry! ”

"The values of the movie itself are distorted, and the breakup master plays missing after soaking in someone else's girlfriend, which can also be called a "master"? The show is too much, if it is said that framing Mauritius to play the king can be far-fetched to the needs of the plot, then the aerial photography standing on the bird's nest is **naked self-boasting, and the vulgarity of sensationalism has no art at all, only a child who has not grown up will make his work into this kind of movie that only focuses on "laughing" and does not remember the loss......"

"Ahem, cough ......" came from Liu Dehua's exaggerated dry cough.

Li Donglai came to his senses and was slightly embarrassed, "I'm sorry, I talked a lot just now." Some are in the play, brother, don't take it to heart. ”

Deng was already as dead as ashes, and suddenly felt that filming this drama had no future, it was useless, and the script had such a big loophole, he had the idea of giving up. "Okay, thank you for the director's advice. I'll go back and refer to it carefully. ”

Li Dong came to see him stand up and leave, knowing that he had hurt people a lot. Said: "We haven't talked about cooperation yet, are we leaving?" ”

Deng was stunned for a while, and it took a long time to come back to his senses, "So you phantoms still have to cooperate?" ”

Li Donglai smiled: "Of course we have to cooperate." If I don't cooperate, I won't waste a little bit of saliva. I just said so much, I just want to make the movie better. Let you shoot again, don't go the wrong way, grasp the main line and don't relax. ”

Dunton's face was red, he obviously misunderstood, and his psychological capacity was not enough. You must not let your daughter-in-law know about this, otherwise you don't know how it will hurt people.

In the end, the two sides preliminarily negotiated and jointly funded the shooting, and the Phantom was responsible. According to Deng's original concept, the cost of film investment is not large, even if he can't attract investment, he can afford it himself. Now it's safer to be able to pull in investment.

In 2o12, the box office of mainland films reached a record 1.7 billion yuan, which seemed to be magnificent, but last year's Taobao Light Mixed Festival (November 11) sold 19.1 billion yuan in one day. After all, the film industry belongs to the high-end configuration of "full of warmth, lust, lust", which is more crazy than the rigid configuration of food, clothing, housing and transportation.

And among the 1.7o billion, the loss accounts for the majority.

Several filmmakers sit together, and the topic naturally can't escape the movie.

Li Donglai chatted, juice in the palm of his hand: "Domestic films should reflect on it, quick success, rashness, flickering, there is no innovation at all, I have also read a lot of scripts in the past few years, some scripts can't be read at all, I know that I will definitely lose money when I shoot it, but many people take such a book to fool money around." ”

"Filmmakers don't want to make progress, but the audience has been growing, and the moviegoers in 2o12 are much more rational than in previous years......"

In the past, the audience was almost a swarm, and if you engage in some publicity, you can trick the audience into the theater, and the audience will scold a few words at most after watching it, and these bad movies may become more and more popular. But in 2o12, it won't work, many audiences are not in a hurry to watch the movie, they first have to look at the surrounding evaluations, and then decide whether to enter the theater.

"Life of Pi" and "Thai Embarrassment" are good examples, and they are largely driven by word-of-mouth at the box office.

And the audience is no longer so blind to the big investment and big stars, "Blood Drops", "Big Shanghai" and "Tai Chi" are typical examples, star-studded, with a lot of investment, but the box office is miserable. Including "The Four Famous Catches", if it weren't for the summer domestic protection, it is estimated that it would be miserable. Even Feng Xiaogang's "1942" did not recoup its investment, let alone others.

It's no wonder that Li Donglai is cautious.

The script of "The Breakup Master" has obvious loopholes, but Deng has hard work. coupled with his image and popularity and appeal in the movie over the years, he can be willing to make a game.

The banquet was lively, but for Deng, it was no longer attractive. His mind is now full of going home to find Yu Baimei, revise the script, and then pinch him with a few favorite actors, and start shooting a new movie as soon as the money is in place.

He was happy, but Li Donglai was a little unhappy.

He met an acquaintance just now, Chen Qiaoen, and the two sides were a little embarrassed to meet. Chen Qiaoen bumped into Li Donglai and rolled his eyes angrily. He looked up haughtily and walked away from him.

Li Donglai raised his hand to greet and stopped in mid-air, so he was not embarrassed.

"This woman is too arrogant, it's been so long, and she hasn't forgotten it. Didn't you just touch a few handfuls, and you didn't lose a piece of meat. Dare to show me a face, not many people in China dare to do this. Hmph, don't say it, it really has a different taste. ”

It was already late at the banquet, and 6 people left the table. Li Dong didn't have time to stay long, so he gestured to Sister Chi Ling and told her to go back and wait for him first. Sister Chi Ling was chatting with someone, and when she saw his gesture, she nodded slightly, and wanted to go home under the pretext of being unwell. I don't know where a middle-aged man came out of nowhere to give her away. Sister Chi Ling was immediately embarrassed, quickly waved her hand, and refused with a cold face, "No need!" ”

looked in the direction of Li Donglai weakly, but now he didn't see it, so he breathed a sigh of relief. Quickly grabbed his bag and left with his assistant. (To be continued......)