A book friend told me: "Old wolf, the first 100,000 words were not well written, a little bland, not attractive enough. ”

In this regard, I just want to say: "You are completely right, and you are too polite, thank you for the correction." ”

I have to admit that the first episode was a bit bland, sorry, I reviewed, I corrected.

Here's what it was meant to be:

Any kind of creature, after coming to the unfamiliar environment, there will be a period of stinging, until you understand, adapt to the environment before you can have a bright day, too awesome, too high-profile, it is easy to be BOSS explosion...... Equip.

The level of the old wolf is not good.,It's far from other authors.,If the start is too big.,I'm easy to write later.,If you start with the protagonist's aura and fight monsters in the world.,It may not be long before you become the sword god of Shilipo.,The most rear-back sighed in the sky: "I am very diǎo, my father knows." Therefore, the first episode is a period of adaptation, which is used to learn and master the rules of survival in the strange world, meet a few good or bad friends and enemies, dig a few big or small holes that can be filled, and slowly develop step by step, and the pattern gradually becomes larger.

It's just that the adaptation period is not well written, not exciting enough, and I don't realize that the stinging period can actually be very exciting, my fault, thank you for being able to point it out.

At the beginning of the second episode, the adaptation period is over, and the protagonist will encounter more people, more complicated things, have more bizarre experiences, and get more treasures.

Of course, the most important thing is that a wide variety of Gu things will also be presented to you one by one.

So please continue to support the old wolf! It's okay to raise it first, fatten it and then kill, it's good to usually vote for a recommendation, give a like or something, if you have to give a reward...... Then I'll go get some soap first.

Ask for collections, recommend votes, and praise again, please support the old wolf and give me more motivation!