"Mortal Homo: Super Immortal", finally finished, after about a year and a half, finally let Han Li have an ending, this ending may not be satisfactory to everyone, but the author at least has an explanation for himself, and also for book friends who like this sequel.

To digress, some book friends may not even know the title of this book, don't make a mistake when recommending it, dear!

Han Li's ending accomplished the goal set earlier by Chao Immortal, of course, it still made a suspense in the end, and the author didn't want to continue writing, but there were quite few stories that could be written.

That suspense will be revealed in the last volume of the blood competition, and the author has also thought about whether it will be possible to pull the corresponding volume over, but the deciding factor is basically not introduced in this sequel, so it is better to leave it to be revealed there.

The original writing of the blood competition natural selection was written in accordance with the requirements of the essay and the transmission of positive energy, so not too many book friends like it, in fact, the author is also a victim, but the author will guarantee that this book will definitely have a complete story structure, I hope book friends can like it.

Here are some of the problems encountered in the sequel, of course, those words of the author, the author will not mention it.

First of all, some people say that those old monsters who have lived for tens of thousands of years, hundreds of thousands of years, are all guys with no lower IQ, and this situation is often seen in the books of other authors as far as the author knows.

Let's talk about the length here.,It's not so difficult to write the opponent to a fairly high level of intelligence.,At least the author thinks,This sequel book can roughly have some IQ.。 If it's not high, it's up to you, personal opinion, if you don't like it, you can give examples.

In the entanglement between the protagonist and the opponent, in order to improve the opponent's IQ, it needs to be used for more space and many detours in the plot.

For example, in a general fight, it is easy to write one or two rounds, about one or two chapters, but if the opponent has a very high IQ, then it is necessary to create an opponent to save the protagonist many times. and even scenes where the protagonist is trapped or frustrated. This kind of plot goes back and forth three or five times, and it can't be reflected at all.

So the question is, (which excavator technology is stronger), hehe, hehe, digression. The length of this back-and-forth contest. Maybe the protagonist can solve something with two or three flashy moves. But it takes seven or eight moves or more, and the original two chapters are completely finished, so it won't be finished until four or even five chapters.

Such words. The opinion of many book friends, in the eyes of the author, should be said that the article is water, and the author really does not want too many water chapters, but the IQ of some supporting characters in the article should not be low in the eyes of the author.

And this kind of question is raised, which is why some book friends like to read history, or read the kind of text in the mortal martial arts stage, because that kind of battle of wits and courage generally has a lot of detours, in fact, the author also likes that kind of plot, but when it comes to the high stage, this kind of plot is difficult to arrange.

The reason why it is difficult to arrange is naturally because at that time it will be an era of respect for strength, no matter how much wisdom you have, like Zhuge Liang, if you fight Lu Bu directly in the ring, you will only be abused, and no matter how much you cheat, you will not succeed.

Therefore, in the early days of historical novels, or martial arts, and fairy tales, the plot was easier to write.

And this asymmetry of strength also gives rise to another problem, that is, to kill the enemy by leaping the rank, in fact, there have been many cross-level kills in this book, but the author thinks it is more logical.

Some of the controversy should be that the immortal killed the immortal crocodile, and some book friends directly targeted the result, it is unreasonable for the immortal to kill the immortal, so the author really has nothing to say.

The opponent has no wit, not to mention, the killing process is difficult, the plot is difficult, and he was injured in the end, and he used the Arcana to kill, none of these matters, just speak for the result, the author can only admit it.

Because of this reason, there is basically no way to cross the ranks to kill the enemy in the future, and the author can only gradually divide Han's strength, so you have also seen more distinct characters.

A little silly magic light, a more rational fire beard, calm and calm Yan'er, infatuated and stoic Jin'er, cold and benevolent Han Hu, and finally the profound and wise crab Taoist, the author thinks that these people's personalities have their own characteristics, and they are well shaped.

And to achieve a different battle every time, at least the style is different, the ability that originally belonged to Han Li must be separated, Han Li's strength has not become too strong, this is also the point that the author considers, in the author's eyes, every battle is basically a different style of play, I don't know if you will be satisfied.

Some book friends sharply mentioned the words of rolling on the spot at the beginning of the book, saying that it is not good to substitute, the author explained in the book review area, here is a little talk, there are two kinds of rolling sideways and rolling forward, of course, rolling sideways is ugly, rolling forward and then excited, that is quite a beautiful picture, the author remembers seeing it in some cartoons, it is a very beautiful action, you can associate it.

Let's talk about the spiritual domain.,Some book friends said that the spiritual domain shouldn't be so weak.,Of course, there's nothing wrong with this statement.,But you can think about it.,If the spiritual domain can attack at the beginning.,It's going to be those balls flying around.,From the beginning to the back.,I really don't know how to design the plot of the fight.。

In fact, in the author's eyes, the spiritual domain should be a thing that protects itself, and this is what the author wrote.

Moreover, the spiritual realm itself is a cultivation foundation for monks, who will always take out their foundation to compete with others, I don't know if you book friends agree.

Another point is that some book friends say that the author is wordy, and indeed, the author also admits that there is this problem, but the author also notices another point, and thinks that wordiness has its reasonableness.

For example, some characters who have appeared before, characters with a lot of space, such as Hua Sunflower and Kaifa, the author found that when I mentioned it later, some book friends had forgotten about it.

This is not to blame book friends, because most book friends do not only follow a novel, sometimes confused, or forgotten, which is completely reasonable, therefore, the author's sometimes wordy words, still feel a little necessary.

Having said so much, it may be wordy in the eyes of some book friends, the author is really ashamed, but the ability is limited, and there is only this way of narrating, please understand.

In addition, book friends who really like this sequel, I hope to be able to recommend more mortal fans to come to correct, but the best thing is to go to the starting point to watch, because the author still only has a few hundred yuan of income to hit the street, and your penny subscription is the motivation for the author to write down, and I hope you can give more rewards, crying and kneeling.

The second book is a natural selection, if you don't like to read it, skip it, Han Li's ending is actually good, everyone ignores the last sentence. But the third book, I hope you can pay attention, the author has prepared for a short time, the novelty should be general, but the author thinks there should still be merit in the plot, thank you. (To be continued......)