Chapter 413: Back to square one
The railway bureau will hold an on-site meeting for the exchange of experience in the Guhe train depot, which is a great honor for a grassroots station section, and it also means that the "100 trains safety competition" held by the Guhe train depot has been recognized by the railway bureau and will be promoted in the overall situation!
Wu Duan Chang was very excited when he heard this: "Director Zou, thank you to the leaders of the Road Bureau and the leaders of the sub-bureau for giving us this precious opportunity of the Guhe train section, we must live up to the expectations of the leaders, and do a good job of this material, you give me 5 days, no, no, 3 days, we must take out the first draft of this experience material!" ”
"Good! After 3 days, you send someone to send the experience materials to the Transportation Section! Director Zou said undoubtedly, because the time limit given to him by the Road Bureau was 5 days, Wu Fengshan said that 3 days was exactly what he wanted, and the first draft was taken out, and the transportation section of the sub-bureau organized a few pens to polish it.
Wu Duanchang put down the phone and called Hu Baoguo and Xiao Yuanhang to his office, announced the good news to them, and at the same time, gave them the task of writing experience materials, the Bai'an Race activity was carried out by Xiao Yuanhang, and the security room has been tracking this matter, Xiao Yuanhang's writing is good, and the task of the first draft of the experience material fell on his head, of course, the deadline is 3 days, and the first draft must be taken out within 3 days.
Hu Duanchang was also very happy to hear the news, the experience of Bai'an Sai activities is promoted in the overall situation, in any case, there is a credit to him, the deputy section chief in charge of security, and immediately said that let Xiao Yuanhang go back to write quietly, he will do all the logistics work, and he doesn't have to worry about the work of the safety room, just go back and write materials.
Although this experience exchange was expected by Xiao Yuanhang, he was also very happy in his heart, although his time as the director of the security room was too short, it was impossible to promote him because of such an experience, but it also added a strong stroke to his security career, after two or three years of qualifications. If there is an opportunity for promotion, this is also one of the highlights of his work!
Xiao Yuanhang took the task and happily returned to the safe room, and found He Hongwei and Liu Shiji to have a small meeting, mainly the materials needed for the experience materials of the Bai'an Competition, He Hongwei has been tracking the activities of the Bai'an Competition, holding first-hand information and various data in his hands, Liu Shiji is to assist and guide He Hongwei's work, and also has a large number of materials for the Bai'an Competition. After reading the material, I also formed an idea in my mind.
After getting off work, Xiao Yuanhang found a clean snack and had dinner, then returned to the house in the city, boiled a pot of boiling water to make tea, and began to write materials in the study. This kind of empirical material is not a problem for him at all, as long as he has the material in his hand, it is easy to form the material.
Spread out the manuscript paper and take out a charcoal pen produced by the Moxiang Stationery Factory. After thinking about it for a while, I wrote down the title "How do we carry out Bai'an Race activities"! He also considered this topic for a while before deciding, and when he and He Hongwei and Liu Shiji analyzed the materials in their hands, he began to consider the topic of this empirical material. A good topic has the effect of the finishing touch, so that people can know what is going on at a glance.
In the beginning, he also wanted to follow the traditional empirical material so proposition, such as: Adhere to the four in place, and carry out the activities of Bai'an Competition; Grasp the five basic points and implement the five concentrations. Vigorously carry out Bai'an race activities or something, after considering a few topics in a row, Xiao Yuanhang felt that it was too vulgar, and sat down at the desk before he had a flash of inspiration, and wrote this topic, which seems to be a bit straightforward, but it makes people feel real, and safety work must be done in order to eliminate potential safety hazards and ensure safety.
Xiao Yuanhang worked hard for 8 hours, and at 2 o'clock in the second half of the night, a sprinkled experience of more than 5,000 words was written, drawing the last full stop, Xiao Yuanhang immediately revised the material, immediately put down the pen, washed up and went to bed. Because, tonight he only has this one thought in his mind, even if he wants to check and revise, he can't jump out of this circle, he must let his brain rest fully, and when he checks again tomorrow, he will be able to find out what is wrong and needs to be modified.
slept until 9 o'clock in the morning, Xiao Yuanhang got up and got down two bags for breakfast, and then sat down at the desk to check and modify the materials, and after his mind cleared, he also checked out a few unobstructed places, which were mainly loopholes in the layout of the article, so he adjusted it in time, and polished the language again, and this empirical material was basically formed.
At noon, I went home and had dinner with my parents, and in the afternoon I went to the unit and gave the draft to He Hongwei and asked her to transcribe it. More than 5,000 words is not an easy job, and He Hongwei did not finish transcribing it until he was about to leave work.
Xiao Yuanhang came to Wu Fengshan's office with the manuscript, and Wu Duanchang saw that Xiao Yuanhang took out the first draft in two days, and although he was about to get off work, he still read it seriously. Wu Duanchang's writing skills are also very deep, and he read an experience of more than 5,000 words in one go, it is very smooth, there is no feeling of blockage at all, and he speaks with data, which is very convincing, and he basically can't find any faults.
Wu Fengshan put down the manuscript and said: "Xiao Xiao, the experience material you wrote is concise, the data is detailed, and the sense of rhythm is also very good, the sub-bureau let us take the first draft, I think this is very good, you will take the car to Tongshui tomorrow morning, and hand it over directly to Zhang Guoxin, the head of the transportation section!" ”
Xiao Yuanhang rushed to Tongshui by morning train the next day, and arrived at the transportation section of the sub-bureau at a little after 9 o'clock, and found Zhang Guoxin, the head of the transportation section, to give him the materials. In the morning, Wu Fengshan called Section Chief Zhang, saying that Director Xiao of the security room went over to deliver materials, and he could arrive at about 9 o'clock, Zhang Guoxin had never seen Xiao Yuanhang, thinking that this Director Xiao would be thirty or forty years old, but he didn't expect to be so young, and he felt like a high school student!
Section Chief Zhang read the materials and felt that they were basically formed, but he was the kind of traditional cadre, how to look at this topic how awkward, thought for a while and said: "Xiao Xiao, Director Zou has transferred 2 pens from the sub-bureau office to help us revise the materials, the first draft was written by you, and you have the first-hand information of Bai'an Sai, so you stay and revise the materials together with 2 big pens, and I will find them."
2 pen sticks are the secretary of the branch office, usually for the director or deputy director of the bureau to write materials, after the two came, Zhang put forward 5 amendments, the first of which is to modify the topic. Xiao Yuanhang has been with them in the sub-bureau for two days, and the experience materials have been changed to three or four drafts and sent to Director Zou who have not passed, and after the fourth draft came out, it has been completely recognized, and Xiao Yuanhang can't recognize that the place was written by himself!
Xiao Yuanhang also knows the truth of revising the masterpiece, but the article has been changed from his original intention, the reason why Director Zou can't pass is not that the level of materials they write is not good, but to follow the old routine of official documents, official words, clichés, and even a lot of nonsense, Director Zou feels that there is no new sense of highlights, seeing that the time specified by the Road Bureau is coming, Director Zou sent a fire, and called the 2 pen poles and the deputy chief of the transportation section and Xiao Yuanhang together, and personally organized the study of how to write this experience material.
In the process of research, Director Zou accidentally saw the original manuscript brought by Xiao Yuanhang, and his eyes lit up after seeing the title, and he read it carefully, and after reading it, he said loudly: "This material is very good, why don't you show it to me?" ”
Section Chief Zhang took a look at it and found that it was the first draft brought by Xiao Yuanhang, his expression was very embarrassed, and he said curtly: "This is the original draft brought by Xiao Xiao, I feel a little too straightforward, cai, only ......."
Director Zou said: "What is too straightforward, this is called real, we must not engage in any showmanship in empirical materials, there is nothing to say, we need to be so real, time is too late, just send this to the Railway Bureau!" (To be continued......)