"Well, it's boring to write and play, and practice writing!" Lin Zijie nodded.

"I really can't see it, you haven't graduated from junior high school yet, and you want to write a book, but cousin, not everyone can write a book, which not only requires talent and writing, but also rich experience, don't always think about these unrealistic things, your parents often call my mother, let you study hard, don't waste too much time on this, do you know the way?" Qin Xue educated.

"Hehe, I said it, just write it casually and play around!" Lin Zijie smiled, he didn't want to explain, of course, his personality was already tranquil, and he didn't bother to explain.

"Okay then? Since you write books, let me see what you write? Your cousin and I have been writing diaries since I was a child, and my essays have often been excellent, and they have even been published in school magazines, let me guide you, you will definitely have a lot of language problems or inappropriate words, don't even write sentences smoothly? Qin Xue said

"Do you really want to see it?" Lin Zijie asked

"Huh? Mentor you? Qin Xue nodded, looking instructive, in her opinion, she is experienced, and guiding Lin Zijie will definitely benefit him a lot.

"Alright then!" Lin Zijie nodded, approached the computer, held the mouse, opened the Guoguo login page, and then downloaded the saved five chapters of "The Best Family" to the desktop from the Guoguo disk.

Qin Xue's white hand grasped the mouse, and with a look of great interest, he opened the document block, looked at the five chapters, opened the content of the first chapter, and began to appreciate it.

"The autumn breeze is kind, the shadows of the trees are slender, the wide Xuanwu Lake is like a huge and smooth mirror, shining with golden brilliance under the afterglow of the sunset, and the spacious lake surface is sparkling, and the cruise ship is like a shuttle...... This? What a beautiful sentence? It's so graphic? Did my cousin write this? ”

After reading this beautiful sentence describing the scenery, Qin Xue was secretly surprised in her heart, her calm heart rippled in a circle, and she looked down vigorously, the more she looked, the more shocked she became, and she found that the sentence was smooth and hearty, and the words were beautiful but not gorgeous, just right.

"Cousin, is this really what you wrote? Don't you lie to me? Did you copy it somewhere? Qin Xue said a word to Lin Zijie with a little skepticism, and it was no wonder that she didn't doubt it, after all, Lin Zijie was still a junior high school student, how could he write such a mature sentence? How is it possible to use words and phrases so skillfully at such an age? Even if it's yourself, you can't write it?

"Cousin, how could I do such a 'clumsy' thing, if you don't believe it, you can search it with the all-round network to see if there are any of these sentences?"

Lin Zijie said "righteous and awe-inspiring", although it was plagiarism, but now he has come to this world, everything in the original world is his original, because who called him a happy traverser?

"I really can't see that you are so young, and your writing has been sharpened to such an extent? There are a lot of boys in my class who can't even write decent sentences? ”

Qin Xue was impressed, appreciative again and again, after reading these sentences, even she herself sighed a little to herself, she has been used to writing for so many years, when it comes to writing, in fact, there is a head full of rhetoric, but like Lin Zijie's use of this kind of natural beauty, elegance and common appreciation, but it has not been achieved.

To put it bluntly, it's too gorgeous, the content is not substantial, and it's a bit empty, even the teacher once said that she, Qin Xue has been trying to make changes? I didn't expect that this cousin, who was two years younger than him, would reach this level?

What else did you just say? Mentor him? With such beautiful rhetoric, do you still need guidance? Can you guide me in reverse?

Qin Xue suddenly had a feeling of slapping herself in the face, and as she continued to look down, after a while, she finished reading the first chapter, which gave her the feeling that she was witty and humorous? And it seems that a modern man to ancient times? What kind of novel is this? Why haven't you read it before? This is such a good idea, my cousin even thought of this?

Qin Xue's heart was turbulent for a while, a year ago, Lin Zijie transferred from Fanyang Middle School to Hanjiang Middle School, and lived here, at first the impression of this cousin, she was not very good, her academic performance was a mess, she was a little sloppy and didn't like to be clean, and her behavior was too frivolous, she was completely an ignorant teenager, so he was a little cold to him, and then he was gradually educated by his mother, and many habits were changed.

Today, after reading the novel written by Lin Zijie, Qin Xue began to re-examine her cousin? It turns out that a person can't just judge from his appearance, he can know the Tao by the content of this chapter of the novel written by Lin Zijie, Lin Zijie should usually be regarded as an extremely 'cultivated' person, a lover of words, almost all of them are like this, well, this is how Qin Xue herself understands it.

After opening the second chapter, Qin Xue continued to follow up, looking at it, she found that she was attracted by the plot inside, and after reading the second chapter, she ignited her desire and the urge to look down.

Chapter III.

Chapter 4!

"Outside the mountain, the green mountain building, the West Lake singing and dancing when to rest, the warm wind smokes the tourists drunk, and Hangzhou is Bianzhou... This poem rhymes well? ”

Seeing the poem that appeared in the fourth chapter, Qin Xue was shocked and didn't know what Lu Dao said, feeling that this was beyond her understanding, a junior high school student? It is possible to write such a poem.

This poem contains a kind of irony, corresponding to the plot described in the content, satirizing those who only know the way and steal peace, live a drunken life, and whitewash the peaceful life of the talented people and the government at the time, which is simply a portrayal of the story?

Qin Xue felt that such an incisive poem could not be written by a junior high school student, so she was so nervous that she searched this poem on the all-round network? Didn't find out?

Is this really the work of his cousin?

Qin Xue asked herself once, it was unbelievable?

After reading the five chapters in one go, Qin Xue only felt unsatisfied, looked at Lin Zijie, and praised: "Okay, cousin, your talent is so good, the content is very well written, cousin supports you, if you want to use a computer to write, it will only work?"

"Really? That's so thankful for my cousin! Hearing this, Lin Zijie was grateful, he was really afraid that borrowing his cousin's computer every day would cause her disgust, and he was relieved to hear Qin Xue say this.

"Do you need to write now? Can I let you keep writing? Qin Xue said

"It's okay, it's okay tomorrow, it's not busy, you can chat with your friends, right?" Lin Zijie said

"Okay then?" Qin Xue nodded, but instead of playing with the computer, she planned to read the contents of the five chapters carefully.

Lin Zijie had nothing to do, but walked out of the door, planning to go out to breathe the wind and go shopping by the way.

Downstairs from the entrance of the building, Lin Zijie walked to the street, Hanjiang Middle School happened to be after school, and some young students wearing school uniforms could be seen everywhere.

Lin Zijie was aimless, he went wherever he went, and soon came to a park very close to the school, planning to go to the park to sit for a while.

However, before he walked to the gate of the park, his footsteps stopped, and his eyes then frowned, only to see that in front of him, a young girl walked gracefully, the girl had purple fluffy long sleeves on her upper body, and a long white skirt on her lower body, the breeze blew, the green silk was flying, and her clothes were fluttering, it was a very innocent girl, like a picture of a lady, as if the fairy fell into the mortal dust, without a trace of dust.

This picture is very beautiful, and Lin Zijie is a little obsessed.

That girl is Lin Zijie's tablemate Yang Zihan.

Seeing Yang Zihan walking towards the lotus step by step, Lin Zijie had already decided to say hello to her. Memory shows that although the two are at the same table, the intersection between the two is very small, because Yang Zihan came to Hanjiang Middle School to study, only less than half a year, and she is a little shy and introverted, she doesn't like to talk to others very much, she is usually alone, reading novels, or listening to music, and has very few friends.

Therefore, Lin Zijie was a little interested in getting to know her.

However, just as the two were getting closer and closer, suddenly behind Yang Zihan, three boys caught up with her, one of them, a tall and thin man, stuffed something into Yang Zihan's hand, but was immediately thrown away by Yang Zihan, and her pace also accelerated, as if she wanted to escape the entanglement of these people.

The boys also quickened their pace, caught up with her, and surrounded her.

Immediately afterwards, the boy who gave her something was pushed by a partner next to him who was a little obese, and as a result, the boy who gave her things didn't know if Lu Dao was intentional or unintentional, and he stumbled and gave Yang Zihan, who was caught off guard, a bear hug!

Then, Yang Zihan cried! Lin Zijie's eyes wrinkled?

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