Original:

"Copy a few pop songs, come on, Lao Tzu's five tones are incomplete, and each song will hum a few sentences How to copy"

Fixed: "Copying pop songs? Come on, Lao Tzu can't read music, and many songs can only hum one or two sentences, even if you remember a few? How much can you sell a song for this year, it's not reliable to make a fortune with this. ”

The purpose of the modification is to let the protagonist also memorize 2 songs (the protagonist remembers very few songs completely, just 2-3), and the protagonist will send two songs to Brother Ke Zhiliang later: "Big Brother" and "Stupid Child". This leads to an important plot. It would be self-contradictory if not revised, as some attentive readers will find.

In addition, the first chapter has made some changes to the sentence to make it more fluid.