Is this book a novice?

After reading some book reviews, I couldn't help but want to talk about it!

In this book, I admit that some of the shaping is a little bit new.

Take Shui Bingling as an example, she is a little rude and willful, ignorant, and makes people look unpleasant. However, isn't this a true portrayal of some spoiled children in real society?

Shui Bing Ling, the innate spirit fish has the Tao, in addition to aging, what she comes into contact with is some beasts and monsters, even if she lives for a long time, but what does she know? The innate soul is very smart, and it can be seen from Shui Bingling's naughty performance that she is stupid? She's not stupid! However, on the other hand, she is a little white, which is normal, she has not seen and understood many things. Chen Hua can teach her something, but it is also plausible that she has learned.

I think that people need to go through and take time to truly mature. Shui Bingling, she can't avoid these!

Now, how many things has Shui Bingling seen? How sensible can she be?

Someone hates her, which means that I did shape her perfectly. That's what you want!

Maybe I'm overdoing it! But don't worry, people will be mature, and Shui Bingling will become popular in the future, so that everyone is satisfied!

Even if you do something wrong, you have to give it a chance to correct it!

About the heroine, I didn't originally want to write about multiple heroines. But seeing the impression of many heroines on the reader's impression, I hesitated a little. Does this mean that everyone would like to have more heroines?

As for the rest, the story may be a little more detailed. However, it shouldn't be water, right?

Hey, about Lingling, it may be that I wrote a lot, but it's also to highlight the heroine!

Once again, I solemnly declare that Shui Bingling is definitely not the heroine!

Don't want to say more!

But I still hope that everyone can leave more messages in the book review area, whether it is support or criticism, W Fengxue is not unacceptable.

However, one: don't apply the things from the previous novels to my novels, since I want to write differently, some settings must be different. I'm here, how can the Heavenly Dao calculate Pangu?

Two: It's not easy to break the limitations, and I'm trying hard to write this book well, write it differently, and write my own characteristics. Some of the content, I feel a little unbearable when I write it, but I can't help it, I still need to try. But it's just to create such an effect!

Three: What do you want to see? You can also mention it! can be found in the reader's impression and in the book review, and W Fengxue can also try to write a storyline that satisfies everyone. How can I think as well as I want?