Write some thoughts.
Yesterday, an old reader who hadn't been on QQ for a long time, Xiaobai, found me.
Tell me that the book is getting worse and worse, but I don't have the feeling of wanting to chase the book, it's so bland, and ask me what to do.
He told me that from behind the Mistlands, the Enlightenment Star felt bored, not feeling anything.
I replied to him, in fact, I feel the same way, I don't feel anything, and the writing collapses.
First of all, let's talk about writing this book in the first place.
I didn't really plan to try this genre at the beginning, because I didn't read any books on this genre.
It was also the reader bubble who came to me and asked me what I was writing newly, and I said that I was going to go to the small category of gangsters.
Bubble suggested that I write a book on creation, saying that this kind of feeding of all human beings is very popular.
I said at the time that I didn't like to read these kinds of books, and he recommended other books of the same kind to me, and it seemed that they did have good results.
I wavered and didn't have any good ideas for a new book at the time, so I started working.
Bubbles is very enthusiastic, and there are some of the materials in this book, power settings and stalks, which he sends to me every day, and I organize them and add them to the story.
And every day I write chapters, I show them to him in advance.
At first we were all on the rise.
Even then, I didn't like to read these kinds of books, and I've only read more than 40 chapters to this day.
But I'm still willing to write some lofty stories that seem to describe the history of Chinese mythology.
So I had a lot of fun writing at the time, and I was also sharing my thoughts with my big brother, whom I respect very much, and we were all very happy.
However, as time went on, as my grades got worse and worse, I started to wonder if something was wrong.
Later I found the wrong place.
That's what I've said a few times before, and about a dozen or so readers have said about it.
Where is the mistake, that is, no matter what mythological events I write about, the mythological events are widely known, and everyone knows the result.
The process of writing about this matter, everyone's acceptance of a story that already knows the result is not high, at least many people say that I know the result, why should I look at the process of your writing.
For example, I know that Nuwa mends the sky, knows the battle of Zhuolu, knows that Houyi shoots the sun, and knows that Dayu controls the water, although I don't know the process, I don't have much sense of expectation.
It's like knowing that chocolate is bitter, and people who love to eat it want to eat it, but they also know that it will gain weight, so they will subconsciously resist and eat less.
And knowing the ending of the story, although people who love to watch it want to watch it, they also know that the story costs money, and they will subconsciously resist it, and order less.
This leads to a very serious amount of skipbooking.
Everyone skipped the process and only came to see the ending at the occasional big climax to see if the ending was what they thought it would be, and what was the difference.
This caused my subscription to be awkward and skipping severely.
The second disadvantage is the inability to write about normality that often has the protagonist as the first point of view.
What does that mean, that is, I often have to write about the state of various legendary creatures in the small world, and the perspective is constantly switching, and I can't always focus on highlighting the protagonist, which leads to the supporting characters written in front of me are quite brilliant, but the protagonist often plays soy sauce and looks east and west.
And as soon as I highlight the protagonist pretending, the protagonist will come off the scene, no matter how it ends, the incarnation is still what, someone will spray, what are you doing behind the scenes.
I can say that the vast majority of people still want to see the protagonist pretending to be forced, and hope to highlight the protagonist, because the background subscription proves this, as long as the chapter name with the absurd word, it is higher than the other chapter name subscription.
So can I keep writing about the main character? No.
This is the disadvantage of the genesis stream.
I had to write the supporting characters a lot and ignore the main characters. I highlight the main character, and I have to ignore the wonderful supporting roles, which leads to the facialization of the characters. You can't have the best of both worlds.
The third disadvantage is the lack of interaction.
What is interaction?
It's the lack of a lot of friends who are on an equal footing with the protagonist.
The protagonist is almost always alone, and it's okay to be a single dog.
Humans are social animals and have their own social circles. And the protagonist does not.
Of course, you can say that the protagonist is the creator god, what ordinary social circle is needed?
But the people we read are ordinary people, and what we can substitute for must be an ordinary social circle, not the social circle of the creator god, which is too fake and empty. Poor sense of substitution.
To sum up, there are actually some minor faults, so I won't say much about it, and after I realized these major mistakes at the time, I wanted to save them.
So after discussing with my esteemed eldest brother (who also started to dislike reading it because he could guess the ending), I decided to change the tone of the book and write a story that is not so easy for everyone to guess.
This means that the outline of the whole book will be changed, the tone of the whole book will be greatly changed, the line of the whole book will be greatly changed, and the power system will also collapse a little.
In this case, I said to Bubble at the time, if you don't succeed, you will be benevolent.
If the breakthrough is successful, the book will be saved and the results will be even better.
If it fails, the book is completely finished.
At that time, I didn't do any more foreshadowing, and I was very direct about subverting.
Facts have proved that this kind of broadsword is bound to collapse if it is carried out without foreshadowing.
I put out too many big ideas in one go, so that the reader can see the clouds.
It is also inexperienced, this kind of mistake is important to me, is later experience.
So starting from the destruction of the world after the blackening of Emperor Junjin, it is about more than 140 chapters, and the whole book has collapsed, the tone has been greatly changed, the myth has been broken, and the collapse has collapsed.
I'm a Buddha.
As I said to the bubbles, if the breakthrough is not successful, it will be all over.
At that time, it was scolded by several readers, and many left.
More than half of the 24-hour follow-up was booked.
I didn't give up at the time, and I continued to write a few chapters, and then I kept going.
I still don't give up and want to save it, so I wrote the Xia Dynasty, but it is impossible for the players who foreshadowed it to disappear, this is a cancer that continues to exist and continue to release poison.
So the later it gets, the more it gets ordered.
Up to now, only one-eighth of the average bookings have been made, only one hundred and seventy or eighty.
I hope that some authors who write about the Genesis stream will see this and avoid these mistakes of mine.
I was still able to read this book before chapter 148, and it didn't collapse.
Before that, the results were okay, and in all the genesis texts on the current website, the results could probably be ranked in the top five. Although it is also a good achievement, after all, there are too few genesis texts, and even fewer can be written.
But alas, it collapsed too early, collapsed too early.
If it's two million words, it's still possible to write.
These 500,000 words just collapsed.
Silly.
I was ready to finish the syllabus a week ago.
At that time, I also considered the second option, which was to delete the more than 50,000 words before the collapse and continue to write according to the old routine, which can still make money, at least although the routine is immature, it is more popular.
But I thought about it and gave up.
Why.
Or because of the problem mentioned above, a story that everyone already knows the ending, I went to write, the skipping is very serious, the ceiling is limited, even if many people like it, it still means that it is still a wrong way.
Second, there is still a lack of interaction and other problems.
And the other reason is that now the editors are all on vacation.
At that time, it was impossible to delete it, even now, and it is impossible to delete Chapter V, let alone so much.
And after deleting it, readers who have seen the plot that has collapsed now can accept me to continue to write along the old routine.
That's another problem.
Although there are very few people watching it now.
Therefore, after persevering for a week, I persevered until now, and when Xiaobai said this, I still decided to escape the outline.
I failed to break through, and I couldn't turn things around.
I was so passionate that I burned out several times.
Yesterday the reader came to me and said that I couldn't stand it, and I didn't retract my steps from the cliff at all, and I fell.
I'm out of passion.
I don't like to read books on this genre.,So far, I've only read dozens of chapters of the book with the best results in this genre.,I want to break through when I learn from him to engage players.,It turned out to be stupid.。 I'm in a lot of pain when I write every day, I can't find any refreshment, I don't know what I'm writing about.
That's the lack of desire to talk.
An author who has no desire to talk, the little voice he squeezes out every day can't even move himself, how can he move others?
So it is understandable that there are only 1780 people chasing the order.
I'm willing to put my passion into a better story than to spend it in a painful story that has no desire to talk and no emotion or coolness.
So let me go.
I also let myself go.
I want to be quiet for more than a month, read a book, and think about a new book after more than a month, I want to be quiet, to get rid of that painful squeezing way of writing.
Even if I continue to write like this, I can still make a little more money this month.
But that money wasn't enough to make up for my painful daily toothpaste-like squeezing, and I had no idea what to write.
Creation loses its purpose, and it is a false ......
I'm just sorry for the more than 170 readers who can still be subscribed, I'm sorry for the editors who cultivated me, I'm sorry for the readers who have rewarded, the children of poor families and the two-dimensional sister Saigao, Xiaobai, Dream Time, Xue Wu, Kujiu, Tianheping and many other friends.
In the next book, I want to write about what I am good at.
If you still come to see it, you can tell me in the book review section that it is a myth, and I will make up for it for you......
The book has been written to the end, and the application is over. Friends who invest can reap the last wave of coins.
And because 500,000 words have been written, readers who invest in lucky bags can also reap the bet amount.
Finally, I wish you all peace, joy, health and happiness.
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