In order not to seem too unsociable, Li Chencan had no choice but to go over with everyone, pretending to be paying attention to what they were concerned about, but in fact, he thought wildly in his heart.

The main thing is to think about how I want to get involved in the film industry.

"Oops...... Sister Qing, this is a problem for us. ”

Immediately someone said.

Someone even deliberately raised his voice and said: "How can we change such a perfect poem?" ”

"Yes, yes, yes! Look at it, this 'long night knows how heavy the dew, and the light is faint and quiet' is used so wonderfully......"

In the room, the young man who heard everyone talking couldn't help but chuckle - these guys were patting their sister in this way, but he saw that He Ziqing still didn't have much expression on his face, so he should be unmoved.

Li Chencan finally saw the words on the paper.

It's a five-rule song.

"Jade Ladder Resentment".

"The new moon is bright and the autumn is beautiful, and the ladies are worried. The night is long and the dew is heavy, and the lights are ambiguous.

The lonely golden screen is covered, and the jade stream is bleak. There is no distance in the heart, and the day of riding is long. ”

However, everyone said so, but they were still racking their brains to change it.

Some of those who are more accomplished in poetry are trying to pick out the places where they can change their poems, and some poems are not haode, so they are not moved.

I also came up with five or six ways to change it.

"Anything else?"

The same Zhou Ningkun who had spoken to Li Chencan before now said: "Everyone try to brainstorm as much as possible. ”

Suddenly, at this time, Li Chenxin saw a smile on the corner of Li Chencan's mouth, and felt that he seemed to be confident, and after weighing the gains and losses slightly, this guy gritted his teeth and said directly: "Chencan? What do you think? Do you want to try it too? ”

"...... How did I get such a bastard cousin. "Li Chencan is really in the mood to kill this grandson.

However, Li Chenxin did divert everyone's attention.

Although these people don't believe it in their hearts, they can be diligent on the surface, Zhou Ningkun smiled: "We have forgotten, there is still a friend who won the second place in the ancient poetry contest here!" ”

"Yes, yes, yes...... The bleak autumn wind is now again, Li Chencan, who has changed the world, is here, are we still willing to seek the near or something? Chencan, why don't you try it? ”

Seeing that so many people are looking at themselves, if they don't do anything, their reputation is estimated to be ruined here today, Li Chencan is reluctant to associate with these people, but he can't let them see himself clearly, otherwise, if he spreads the matter, his reputation will be hit hard.

Li Chencan could only say to everyone: "Then it's ugly......"

After speaking, he carefully examined the poem......

He immediately saw that this poem was really close to the one he remembered in his previous life...... And coincidentally, that poem has also been revised by some high-ranking commentators.

Moreover, Li Chencan's memory of the two lives, his twice as smart mind, and the ancient poetry skills behind him in this life, have really changed a word.

Before, these people, some of whom were self-proclaimed talents, even waited to see Li Chencan's jokes, but after really seeing Li Chencan's changes, their impression of him changed a lot, and sure enough, there was really no false person under this reputation......

He Ziqing looked at these papers, looked at the poems on them that had changed differently, and there was no disappointment on her face at first, but she put everything on them aside, and it was only when she saw Li Chencan's poems that her eyes were slightly brighter.

Under that beautiful line, Li Chencan changed 'the old sorrow of the girl' to 'the sorrow of the girl', but it was just such a word, and the poem immediately changed!

A smile appeared on the corner of He Ziqing's mouth, which made the young man feel that the room was brighter, and then she took Li Chencan's paper and smiled: "This person can see through the poetic eye at once...... I'll go out and have a look. ”

The young man breathed a sigh of relief, but he could be regarded as inviting his sister to move.

When everyone looked at He Ziqing who walked out, they were relieved that they finally saw her......

He Ziqing smiled at everyone, everyone was very surprised, but they didn't dare to go up to talk rashly.

He Ziqing then took Li Chencan's revised poem, and then asked, "May I ask who this is?" ”

Everyone saw that it was Li Chencan's handwriting, and sure enough, they all confirmed the change of their minds about Li Chencan before.

Li Chencan could only signal.

Li Chenxin was so excited that the blood on his face was almost gone...... , this cousin is really awesome!

He Ziqing was also a little surprised when she saw that the person who signaled was Li Chencan, and then said, "Can you tell me that weishenme wants to change it like this?" ”

Everyone's eyes were focused on Li Chencan......

There are also all kinds of emotions in the eyes.

Li Chencan didn't know the identity of this girl anyway, he only felt that she had a peculiar nobility, as if she was different from everyone around her, but he himself was different from all these people, he came from another time and space, so now Li Chencan said without any pressure: "This poem should be written about a woman who misses her husband who is fighting abroad at home, right?" ”

"Yes, the idea of the poem originally came from the Book of Songs, and it is such a story." He Ziqing bowed slightly.

"In fact, this five laws are very well written, very Han and Wei style, especially the two sentences of 'the night is long and the dew is heavy, and the lights are ambiguous and the hall is quiet', which can chase the artistic conception of the Liang people of the Southern Dynasty 'the cicada noise forest is quieter, and the birdsong mountain is more secluded'." Li Chencan paused, and said: "The artistic conception is impeccable, but in terms of wording, I think we can make some changes, for example, this girl has old sorrows, since this girl is missing her husband, where does the old sorrow come from?" ”

So He Ziqing just said that Li Chencan saw through her poetry at a glance, her whole poem is mainly this old word, she didn't say that she missed her boyfriend at the beginning, she still doesn't have a boyfriend...... It's just that that day I remembered some unhappy things in the past, and I just happened to see the poem in the "Book of Songs", so I started to write this, in fact, what she wanted to write was the old sorrow.

Now he is seen through by Li Chencan at a glance!

"So I changed it to a distant word, since I miss my husband who is fighting far away, then use a distant word, which is more compatible with the atmosphere of the poem."

Everyone nodded their heads in praise......

Li Chencan's word is really well changed!

He Ziqing also seemed to be a little satisfied, but as if she was deliberately picking a mistake, she said: "But if you change it like this, 'far sorrow' is good, but it is heavier than the 'far and near' in the back, and there are only forty words in a song with five laws, which is not good." ”

Li Chencan smiled: "What's so difficult about this?" "Thinking about the heart without distance" was changed to "thinking about the heart without day and night", the poet wrote about nostalgia under the moon, and it is also advisable to "no day and night". ”

At this moment, everyone was convinced.

Looking at Li Chencan, his gaze had completely changed.

PS: Today's three watches!