Chapter 101: Winning an Award for Writing Poetry (Part II)
Of course, it is impossible to be too short, just like Gu Cheng's "Generation" has a total of two sentences: The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to find light.
And Pei Duofei. The same two short sentences as Shan Tuoer's "Freedom and Aiqing":
Life is precious, and aiqing is more expensive
If it is free, both can be thrown
"Freedom and Aiqing" has been translated by many people, but Su Shichen still feels that Yin Fu's translation is more secure.
Although these short poems are classic, they are too short to be the first even if they are written.
Of course, the books in the lower body poetry movement are even more inadequate, such as "A Handful of Good Breasts" or "Listening to the Police Tell the Story of the Murder of a Prostitute", "My Sister Went to the South", "Aiqing Story" and so on, these can be said to be hooligan poems, of course, it is also possible that Su Shichen's own realm is not in place.
For example, the poem "A Handful of Good Breasts":
As soon as she got into the car
I just kept my eyes on her
The chest is towering
Butt bulge
It's really impressive
Mouth-watering
I stared at his chest
Hold on
That bulging breast
If only I could see through it
……
This is a poem, it is completely a hooligan's psychological process, and it must be inappropriate to write this now.
If you want to write, write some inspirational poems that spread positive energy, Su Shichen screened them in his mind, and selected three poems.
"Believe in the Future" by the index finger, "If Life Deceives You" by Pushkin and "If", an inspirational poem written by Radiard to his twelve-year-old son.
These three poems are undoubtedly very classic, first of all, "Believe in the Future" is the representative work of the famous poet's index finger. It is known as the "originator of hazy poetry".
"Believe in the Future" and "Love Life" are both such very inspirational modern poems, but Su Shichen chose "Believe in the Future" because this poem is the famous work of the index finger. But it can be said that Cheng Ye "Believe in the Future", and failed also "Believe in the Future", that is, because the nineteen-year-old index finger of this poem was labeled as reactionary and was sent to a mental hospital, but because of this, he also wrote the popular "In a Mental Hospital".
Su Shichen's deepest impression of the index finger is this sentence in the poem: "Believe in the future and love life!" The downside is that this is a poem written by the index finger for that era. It is impossible for Su Shichen to experience that era, although it is perfunctory and perfunctory, but there are still some inappropriateness.
As for Pushkin, the author of the poem "If Life Deceives You", although Russian. However, this poem is very well-known, and it has also been selected into middle school textbooks, which is very positive, but there is still a shortcoming, although it is longer than "Generation" and "Freedom and Aiqing". But it doesn't grow much.
"What If" was written by Radiard for his son. So Zuihou's sentence is like this: "Then, your cultivation will be as broad as heaven and earth, and you will be a real man, my son!" ”
In the previous life the earth was still the emperor of the superstar Michael. Jackson's epitaph, so the popularity is very high, but there is also a problem, this article is more of an inspirational poem than a poem to educate his son on how to behave. Obviously not suitable.
The three articles "Believe in the Future", "If Life Deceives You", and "If" are all flawed, which can stump Su Shichen.
"Little Four hasn't thought about it yet?" Ma Jun looked at Su Shichen's brows and frowned, and couldn't help asking, "Little Si, you just write about your life." Don't you like to say that human life is like a flood, and it is difficult to have extremely beautiful waves without encountering islands and reefs. This sentence is not bad, you can make up some casually, little four, this should not be difficult for you, grab the first, four-star notebook! ”
Ma Jun's words completely reminded Su Shichen, "By the way, life, I can write an ode to life!" ”
"Ode to life, what ode to life?" Ma Jun is confused.
"Ode to Life" is one of the most famous poems of Longfellow in the previous life, which is very inspirational, and the length and theme are very appropriate.
Originally, Su Shichen didn't think about it for a while, but he completely thought of it when he was reminded by Ma Jun. Keep forging ahead, keep pursuing, be good at labor, be good at waiting! These are the two paragraphs of "Ode to Life", which completely clarifies the main idea.
That's it!
"Ma Jun, I also thought of a poem for you" two pieces of A4 paper were transcribed "If Life Deceives You" and "Ode to Life" respectively, and Ma Jun wrote his name on top of "If Life Deceives You".
And above "Ode to Life" is Su Shichen's name.
More than an hour passed, and the time for the submission of the manuscript was up, and then there was a special person to receive the manuscript.
"Little Si, you are really good, the "If Life Deceives You" is so well written, but I can't understand the "Ode to Life", I think "If Life Deceives You" is better than "Ode to Life". Ma Jun said.
If you don't talk about the rhyme and connotation, "If Life Deceives You" is indeed much more classic than "Ode to Life", but poetry is not just from the degree of smoothness, but Su Shichen suddenly found that he seemed to have miscalculated one thing, ordinary people only look at modern poetry to read smoothness, and don't read anything at all.
Then his "Ode to Life" may not even get a consolation prize.
"Little four, no, that old man is the referee." Ma Jun pointed to an old man who was reviewing the manuscript in the middle of the event stage, this old man had a good face, sharp eyes, and strong spirits, and he was passing the manuscript one by one.
In fact, it's no wonder that Su Shichen and Ma Junhui don't know each other, this old man's name is Yang Jiezhi, his identity is not ordinary, he is a professor at Tsinghua University in Beijing, and he has released three poetry collections, which is very prestigious in the poetry world.
Some people say that Tsinghua University has two pillars, one is Zhou Jingpeng, who criticized "The Flood" before, and the other is the one who is now sitting in the back of the stage.
Of course, they are so famous, but Su Shichen and Ma Jun are not people who like to read poetry, so it is natural that they don't know each other.
As for the appearance of this famous professor Yang Jiezhi at this event, that's another story-
"What is it all about. Is this still poetry?!!! "Yang Jiezhi can be said to be very hot now, as if a powder keg can explode at a moment.
The reason why he is so angry is because of these strange things, right things. Can these be called poems?
Yang Jiezhi took a deep breath and continued to read, but he didn't see any slightly better poems at all.
"Do you think that arranging seven characters together and then writing four lines can be called a seven-character poem?" Yang Jiezhi hated this phenomenon of some ancient poems not paying attention to rhyme at all!
The speed of review is getting faster and faster, and at first it took a minute to read a chapter, but now it is compressed to ten seconds.
However, Yang Jiezhi felt that it was a little redundant to look at this kind of thing for ten seconds, but Yang Jiezhi was still quite responsible, and basically had to sweep it again.
"The older I get, the more confused I get. I actually listened to Yuxuan's belief that you could find one or two talented people by holding an event in the square, and if everyone had this talent, then the poet would not be too cheap. Yang Jiezhi sighed. Suddenly, I swept an interesting article.
"If Life Deceives You" is a good title. I hope the content is not too bad and insults the topic. Yang Jiezhi continued to look down, and to his surprise, this was an extremely wonderful article.
"If life deceives you. Don't get anxious. Don't fret! Be calm and calm on a melancholy day......" Yang Jiezhi read aloud slowly, a very good poem.
In fact, there are two versions of "If Life Deceives You", one of which is the original translation, and the other version is the version above the junior high school text, which has been modified to become more in line with the aesthetics of the Chinese people, and Su Shichen also wrote this version.
"Both the idea and the verse are very good, and this poem is more than two levels higher than the others. If there are no accidents, the first place this time is this article. ”
"Ma Jun, I haven't heard of this name, it seems to be a newcomer." As soon as the poem "If Life Deceives You" came out, Yang Jiezhi's mood was much better.
The next poem. Compared with "If Life Deceives You", it is scum.
Suddenly, I noticed a strange thing: "How can these two handwriting be the same?" ”
"If Life Deceives You" can be said to be the best one he has seen so far, so he is quite impressed, but he found another poem with the same handwriting.
"The names are different, one is Ma Jun, and the other is Su Shichen, could it be written by one person?"
In the comparison of the two articles, Yang Jiezhi found such a thing, these two poems are indeed written by one person, Ma Jun and Su Shichen have a very good relationship with each other, this is called Su Shichen should be very talented in writing poetry, but Ma Jun has no talent for writing poetry, so Su Shichen wrote two and gave one of them to this person called Ma Jun, which means that the handwriting of the poems in the two works of Weishenme is the same, but the handwriting of the signature is different.
This Yang Jiezhi is very smart, and he can speculate all about things just by the handwriting of "If Life Deceives You" and "Ode to Life".
"Su Shichen is quite familiar with the name, it seems that he has heard it somewhere." Yang Jiezhi thought about it, but he didn't remember, "Since I gave my friends such excellent poems as "If Life Deceives You", I should have the confidence to write more wonderful poems than them, let me take a look." ”
"Ode to life, such a big topic." Yang Jiezhi read this "Ode to Life" carefully.
Watched it once, twice......
"It's ?!!" Yang Jiezhi's eyes widened, as if he had found something shocking.
Then I watched this "Ode to Life" and wrote and drew on the paper......
"Now it's time to announce the results," the host stood on the stage again.
The first to be announced were the ten consolation prizes, and some of the people whose names were read were happy and some had gloomy faces.
I am happy because I was chosen, but my gloomy face is because I think very highly of myself, and I don't believe that what I wrote only won a consolation prize.
This was followed by a mobile phone for five third places, and the five people who won the third place happily took over the mobile phones.
Then there are three second places, announcing that the third place is already about to read out the poems written, one is "If Life Deceives You" written by Su Shichen, and the other two are long and short poems and modern lyric poems, which are indeed very good.
"If Life Deceives You" is easy to understand, and it is also very concise, which caused quite a stir once it was read. Then Ma Jun went up to accept the award, but such a wonderful poem was written by a child like a student, which was even more surprising and discussed.
"The first place this time will be awarded, that is, the champion, but at this time, I will abdicate and give way to a more convincing person to promulgate, and I will invite Professor Yang Jiezhi, a professor at Tsinghua University, to "The host retired to the back of the stage.
"It's Yang Jiezhi! I also bought a book of his poems. ”
"I know that Yang Jiezhi is the most famous professor at Tsinghua University."
"I didn't expect Moyun Bookstore to invite Professor Yang Jiezhi here." "I heard that the eldest lady of the Liu Group is the godgranddaughter of Professor Yang Jiezhi."
……
"Little Si, it seems that the old man is still a very famous celebrity." Ma Jun said.
Su Shichen nodded, listening to the discussion next to him, it seems that the identity of this old man named Yang Jiezhi is really not simple.
Yang Jiezhi stood on the stage and said the first sentence: "May I ask who is Mr. Su Shichen?" ”
"I am." Squeeze out of the crowd.
A hint of surprise flashed in Yang Jiezhi's eyes, obviously he didn't expect Su Shichen to be so young...... (To be continued......)
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In addition, the poem is indeed "A Blossoming Tree", which the kitten wrote incorrectly and confused, and has been revised.
This is the second watch, and there are three more