Let's talk about characterization

Suddenly I wanted to talk about character building. Because if this kind of thing is directly elaborated in the text, or expressed through dialogue and psychology, it will be very embarrassing, very, very embarrassing, so I will use it as a writing summary. (Don't tell me to shut up here, many writers will write writing summaries.) )

Let's talk about Aoko.

First of all, I'm quite complacent about the recent piece, in the content related to the flag war, a triple silent progression designed:

Pre-plot: Qingzi is close to home, gives up going home, and rushes back to join the war.

The first psychology: He wants to save the people of the small team and the teammates of 1777, because of this, he chooses to rush back.

Here after the operation, there is a psychological conflict point description: after showing close to the top combat power, because of the psychology of wanting to protect 1777, Aoko wants to stay in the ordinary squad to fight. He stayed, stayed in 1777, but after the realization of his psychological desire, he was only a little relieved, but not happy.

Here is the presentation of his psychological self-conflict.

The second psychology: After entering the battlefield, the logic here, if it is just to preserve 1777, Qingzi does not have to open up like that.

But in this place, a few minutes before entering the battlefield, I first used Liu Shiheng's perspective to say that his eyes were not in the right state, and then through Lao Jian's perspective, I used one word to describe him: guilt.

What is shown here is that Han Qingyu began to feel responsibility because of his ability, not only for the team and the people around him, but also a more general responsibility.

So the person he searched so much, for the sake of those foreign comrades-in-arms he didn't know, for the sake of less sacrifice, he opened the field wide, and kept opening, swallowing metal blocks until the seven orifices bled out.

Step 3 Psychology: The act of fighting red shoulders and picking up flags.

Here are two thoughts: From Aoko's point of view, is there a danger of death in the red shoulder, and what does the blue flag mean on the shoulder?

So why do I want to express these two things through a state of confusion?

Some people may feel confused and insincere.

Actually, no, in fact, when a person is already confused and still wants to do this, he can still remember that this time the flag cannot fall, but it shows that this kind of psychology has gradually formed in Qingzi's psychology, but he himself has not yet clearly realized it.

Looking down like this, he just regained his senses and immediately went to build the main ship, is it really just for the sake of metal blocks? Regarding this, I wrote a sentence earlier, I don't know if you have noticed, Qingzi knows: He can threaten the main ship, he is there, and there will be a lot less sacrifice.

The triple progression goes like this.

So, why don't I write about Qingzi directly, just think: I want to be a hero, I want to fight, I can sacrifice?

First, because this does not conform to the character design, it is too embarrassing to write like this, and it will even feel fake and empty. (Of course, it doesn't fit my embarrassing personality in writing.) )

Second, let's review Qingzi's identity and history:

Qingzi is not a traverser, not omniscient, he is just a rural baby who has fallen off the list, 19 years old. And he was threatened to come to the blue, and he came with hatred.

Here is a small detail setting in the big plot in the front, Zhang Daoan's most important recruit is Qingzi, but who is the friend he really made in the New Year? It is Wen Jifei.

Why? Because for the Azure power layer, it is extremely difficult for Qingzi to get close to and communicate with each other.

I don't know if you have noticed, it was after Zhang Daoan's sacrifice that Han Qingyu gradually began to become friends with Lao Jian, which is actually a psychological change.

He was always wary of the Teal hierarchy of power.

You see his wavering attitude when they first met, indifference and rejection, it has nothing to do with gender, but it can be seen that her status is not low. In this way, it was not until later that he got along with the two institutes that he said in person: We will be friends in the future.

But it's also for individuals.

On the whole, the persecution of Qishan Copper and the evil of the Alphonse family made Qingzi never able to let go of this vigilance and distrust of the Azure power layer, and then he subjectively did not fully agree with the Azure and was not fully willing to sacrifice for it.

So why would he make such an active choice? The answer is: the blue general public.

The silly seductive Mira, the sister with a scar on the arm who gave him a beam of sunshine, the doctors and nurses I knew in the hospital, and an ordinary soldier on the battlefield...... It's these people, because they are more similar to Aoko, and the sacrifice and dedication give it a more pure feeling.

So we saw that he desperately rushed back to the 101 medical station, facing the active choice of 300 people. It's a proactive and clear choice.

Aoko is a person who wants to live and go home. Such a person, you want him to take the initiative to choose to work hard every time now, it is illogical.

I don't want to directly portray that kind of great light-righteous mentality.

In short, I am depicting the psychological journey and transformation of a character little by little.

I didn't mean to scare anyone, after all, there were almost no relevant remarks. I just want to say that if an obscure, moisturizing and silent way of portraying characters is a sin in the online article, please support the readers to be a little more patient and trusting.

- The Arsenal of the World.