Chapter 154: Dragon Snake! Lu Xiaofeng! (Above)

There is a problem with the chapter layout of "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng", and in fact it is not a problem. At that time, martial arts novels in the seventies and eighties were like this, but this kind of segmentation method is not suitable for online texts, just take the first part as an example, counting the introduction, there are only twelve chapters in total, and there are 10,000 words in a chapter, according to the chapter method of 2K and 3K on the Internet, this must be at least three to five chapters.

In fact, "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is really similar to detective novels, they are all puzzles one after another, but of course, the connection between cases is stronger than that of detective novels.

The whole book is actually composed of seven series - The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng (aka: Jinpeng Dynasty), The Embroidered Thief, Before and After the Decisive Battle, Silver Hook Casino, Ghost Villa, Phoenix Dance Nine Heavens, and Sword God Smile.

Besides, if you really want to write it, you can also write the prequel of Lu Xiaofeng, the legend of the iron shoes, and the mystery of the bloody clothes.

The first seven are mature, but the last three are only adaptations of film and television works, and they still need to be written by Su Shichen himself.

Someone once said that Jin Yong's writing is difficult to imitate, but Gu Long's writing is very easy to imitate, and Su Shichen can only laugh at this.

In fact, on the contrary, Gu Long's writing is more difficult to imitate than Jin Yong, according to the book "The Biography of Jin Yong" written by Leng Xia, it is recorded that Jin Yong's writing is characterized by conciseness, almost every word and sentence is written to promote the development of the plot, and it is completely appropriate to describe it with words and words.

Leng Xia made a summary: Jin Yong's writing is so good mainly because of four reasons: first, Jin Yong read a lot of martial arts novels when he was a teenager, and the accumulation is very good; Second, Jin Yong was already a newspaper editor before writing martial arts novels. has written a lot of current affairs commentary and reports, and there are a lot of actual battles; Third, Jin Yong has experienced more than ordinary people, and under the care of the island people, it can be said that his family is ruined. The emotional character has been sharpened; Jin Yong himself is a surprisingly intelligent person, and his attainments in ancient Chinese literature and traditional literature are very high. Su Shichen personally thinks that Zuihou is more important.

Jin Yong's writing is to see more, practice more, experience more, accumulate more than four, as long as these four points are completed, Jin Yong's pen strokes can definitely imitate more than 80%.

And Gu Long you think really write a few sentences

dead person

He was a dead man

Dead people don't move

He's dead, so he won't move......

In this way, it can be regarded as imitating Gu Long's pen strokes.

Gu Long can definitely be said to be a prodigal son, with many girlfriends, but few people reprimanded him for being inappropriate, but Jin Yong was divorced only once, but he was saddled with the reputation of a negative man.

Jin Yong believes in aiqing and thinks that aiqing is greater than friendship, which may have something to do with not being able to catch up with Xia Meng when he was young. There are also cousins who don't see Jin Yong's novels, all of whom are bad guys, Murong Fu in Tianlong, and Wang Xiaofeng in Liancheng Jue.

Of course, this is not the most coincidental, the most coincidental thing is that Jin Yong's cousin is Xu Zhimo from Kangqiao. And what is even more coincidental is that Xu Zhimo has a pen name called Yunzhonghe...

Therefore, Su Shichen thinks that in order to become the next Jin Yong, in addition to imitating in writing, you must also have a cousin, a cousin like Xu Zhimo. Preferably, this cousin's pen name is also the name of an adulterous thief.

Gu Long's aiqing concept and values are completely different. Gu Long is a man who believes that friendship is more important than aiqing, and the opposition between aiqing and friendship can often be seen in his novels, especially Li Xunhuan, the birdman, who abandoned aiqing for friendship.

Gu Long is dissolute, so most of the protagonists in the novel are prodigal sons; Gu Long was a heavy drinker, so he drank himself to death; Gu Long values friendship, and birdmen like Li Xunhuan are a portrayal of Gu Long.

Therefore, a close reading of Gu Long's text reveals a kind of chic, a kind of loneliness, and this kind of chic and lonely energy is closely related to Gu Long's experience and character. How can it be a good imitation!!

Therefore, it is very difficult for Su Shichen to write "The Prequel of Lu Xiaofeng", "The Legend of Iron Shoes", and "The Mystery of Bloody Clothes" in the writing of an antique dragon, and it will collapse if he can't do it in the later stage. But if the seven series alone is less than a million words, it is really too little, and I am in a dilemma, and in the end, I am ready to try it after thinking twice.

The most beautiful proprietress in the original first chapter is divided into chapters, one, two, and three, and the most beautiful proprietress (upper) (middle) (lower), and then sent out at once.

In fact, there have been many readers who have been staying on the catalog page of "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng", and then they have been clicking on the refresh, and there are still many people who do this, in their words, F5 has been crushed, and there is a delay of a few minutes in the background of the website, that is, after Su Shichen released it for three minutes, it finally appeared.

A group of readers are hungry, three chapters and 10,000 words for some readers who only read the dialogue and don't read other readers for 10,000 words for a few minutes, so after a few minutes, the updated three chapters were read by this group of readers, Lin Yan is such a reader, but after she finished reading it for a few minutes, she suddenly had a feeling of egg pain, okay, she had no eggs and only a stomachache.

Lin Yan She likes "Breaking the Firmament" and thus became a fan of Su Shichen, although she is a sister paper, but she just likes the novel of Breaking the Firmament, which slaps her face and even hurts her hands, as for mortals, she doesn't like it, and later read a lot of books that pretend to slap her face, but Lin Yan thinks it's not as thorough as Dou Po.

So Lin Yan has always felt unfinished, and now that Su Shichen has released a new book, although it is only martial arts, she still supports it without hesitation, but now she can't understand the updated chapters of "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng", and now Lin Yan is in the clouds.

Then Lin Yan felt that Su Shichen's writing was getting worse and worse, even if she was a mortal, she only had a dull feeling when she looked at it, and there was no such feeling of not being able to understand.

It's just that the more she writes, the worse it gets, Lin Yan is angry, not only does it not appear in the same book as Breaking the Sky, but it is still a novel that she can't read, how can you call Lin Yan not to be angry?

In order to eliminate her anger, Lin Yan was ready to post, yes, she was going to post, not posting was not enough to make people angry, pulled the mouse, and then saw the comments of other readers in a daze-

"The male god of the iceberg blowing snow at the west gate, the perfect male god with flowers full of buildings. I'm still wondering what kind of person the protagonist will be, but it's a big lazy bug and a pervert. - Feng Xiaoqian's pupils

Lu Xiaofeng is indeed a lazy worm, which can be seen from the way he drinks. Lying on the bed and not wanting to get up, I didn't even move to drink, put the wine glass on my chest, and then used the deep internal force to suck the wine in the wine glass in my chest into my mouth.

"Oh yes! I finally knew that Weishenme Hua Manlou said that Lu Xiaofeng had four eyebrows, and it was really four eyebrows. - The Man in Black

"Wonderful. I have been reading novels for more than 20 years, and the last two years have been reading previous martial arts novels, and people who have not experienced that era in the post-80s and post-90s will never understand our generation's love for martial arts novels.

I didn't read novels online before. But my grandson said that there is a very classic martial arts novel on the Internet, and my idea is that people nowadays can't write martial arts novels that used to feel that way, so I don't have any interest in my heart.

But under the repeated recommendation of my grandson, I also opened it to take a look, and I was a little interested when I saw the name in "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng". Because in our time, the name of martial arts novels is like that. What a legend, unlike slaughtering the heavens and killing gods at every turn.

Although it's only about 10,000 words now, and the introduction is only four chapters, but it can really be seen that this kind of writing is very classic, and I seem to be back to 30 years ago when I was chasing martial arts novels in newspapers and magazines, and the blood that I hadn't seen for a long time was ignited again, and the characters with very different personalities were the first book I chased on the Internet. Come on! Millions of rewards are not a tribute, I hope the author can maintain this level in the future!! ”

This is a message from a book friend named Tian Buying. According to this tone, this person should be above fifty or sixty years old, think about it, my grandson is reading online novels, and the million reward is 10,000 yuan, it seems that this day is not only an old book lover but also an old book lover with a wealthy family, "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" has another million league.

Lin Yan was stunned, reading the comments, they were all saying that "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is a very good novel, how could she not understand it? Is it because you can see it too fast?

Lin Yan decided to take it seriously and watch it again, this time she watched it more seriously.

The 10,000-word plot has not yet unfolded, so it would be deceptive to say that he was attracted by the plot, and Lin Yan was attracted by the characters in the novel.

"This person named Zhu Zhu is really interesting, and he actually said, 'The child wants to pee, the wife wants to steal people, it's something that no one can control, what if I don't sit? Go to the room and somersault? Roll on the ground and crawl' like that. ”

Lin Yan giggled, the protagonist Lu Xiaofeng is a big pervert, and Zhu Zhu's wife is a big beauty, a lonely man and a widow, which man knows that he may be cuckolded is not so anxious that he jumps and jumps, where is it like Zhu Zhu, unless he doesn't care about his wife anymore.

However, Zhu Zhu didn't love his wife, he didn't care, he just believed in Lu Xiaofeng and his wife very much.

"Good haode trust, I will find a boyfriend in the future, I will also find a Zhu Zhu like this, no matter what I do, I must believe in me wholeheartedly." Well, I don't know that it was because of Lin Yan's condition that she found her true destiny at the age of thirty-two, and mourned silently for a sister who was caught by Su Shichen...

In general, the first Jinpeng Dynasty of Lu Xiaofeng's legend is still relatively powerful, and in this part, the iceberg male god and the perfect male god will appear.

Although the plot is not expanded, it leaves a very big suspense, Lu Xiaofeng is not wrong to be a lazy person, even if someone fights to the death in front of him, and may even endanger his own life, he can also lie motionless on the bed, you can imagine what a lazy person this is.

Lu Xiaofeng is fully qualified to say that: "Don't be lazy with me, I'm lazy with you." ”

is so lazy lying on the bed in the room, a very big princess came to Lu Xiaofeng's room, and thought she was here to find trouble with Lu Xiaofeng, after all, Lu Xiaofeng is a big pervert, but this stunning princess knelt down with Lu Xiaofeng, and then a more turning scene appeared, the lazy Lu Xiaofeng actually jumped up from the bed and escaped without a trace.

This is really strange, the stunning princess knelt down for him, Lu Xiaofeng actually fled, as if he was very afraid, he was not afraid that someone in his room could die at any time, but now he was afraid.

Doubts, what is even more confusing is still to come, the stunning princess saw Lu Xiaofeng's actions, but said: "He is indeed a smart person, extremely smart!" ”

Nima? What kind of logic is this?

A stunning princess knelt down, and then Lu Xiaofeng ran away, and became the one who decided to be smart, what the hell is going on.

Lin Yan was curious, so when she clicked on the next chapter, there was a picture of the reader interaction of "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng".

Gone!

Angry, Lin Yan almost smashed the mouse, and Lin Yan is not only a book lover who is curious, just look at the latest book reviews-

"This chapter is too TM ecstasy, ask for a follow-up chapter."

"Ask the prophetic emperor, Princess Weishenme knelt down and scared the peerless lazy Lu Xiaofeng into running away, and Weishenme Lu Xiaofeng escaped and became an extremely smart person, what kind of logic is this?"

"If I don't figure it out, I may not be able to sleep today......

The effect of the text of "The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is haode, almost everything that should be there is something, and there is something that shouldn't be there.

What should it be? There are fights, protruding characters, and climaxes, these are what should be there, and what should not be there is the pit of the ending, and the pit does not pay for the death.

"The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng" is off to a successful start, and another book, "Romance of the Dragon and Snake", is also exerting its power......... (To be continued......)

PS: ps: Jin Yong's cousin is indeed Xu Zhimo, but about the question of the cousin insinuating Xu Zhimo written in Jin Yong's book, everyone should take it as a joke and can't take it too seriously......

It's the end of the month, and friends who have guaranteed monthly passes will throw it to the kitten.