Chapter 198: Three days to sharpen a sword
At this moment, Ye Li is completely unaware of the things on the Internet, these days, he, Lan Ruoqi and the other three are constantly discussing the plot of the story with each other in the cultural studio, using brainstorming to come up with more ideas.
After all, the two eras are not the same, and if you want to catch up with the local atmosphere of this era, there must be many factors and hot spots suitable for this era.
Under such brainstorming, they finally sorted out most of the plot ideas, and at the same time wrote the first draft.
"No way!" After reading it, Ye Li rejected the first draft of the three people at the same time.
It is not very easy to find a style of expression that is suitable for a theme, and it often takes a lot of sharpening.
In his previous life, Dou Po Firmament had changed it many times before releasing the book, and the online writer Toad would use three or four versions of the novel to publish on the Internet with an ordinary author number every time he released a new book, to see which one clicked and responded to the best, and then chose the book. So those works that seem to be popular, those popular works, are often not achieved overnight.
To know that the backbone structure of a book requires two or three million words, every plot point, every connection point must run through the growth of the protagonist, and it needs to be conceived for a long time.
Of course, a handful of geniuses are not among them.
Under such circumstances, Ye Li controlled the plot of these novels and spent a lot of time.
After the new outline ideas of the three novels were sorted out, it took two full days.
Ye Li sorted out all the plots in one direction: "Growth!" ”
Unlike traditional novels, traditional fiction writers can use the plot as the backbone, but that's not something that most people can control. And the more important direction of online novels is growth. This is more suitable for this era. More immersion.
Facing the second draft handed in by the three of them, Ye Li began to delete and revise it, putting forward his own opinions.
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When they saw the many opinions put forward by Ye Li, Lan Ruoqi and the other three were stunned, they felt that after Ye Li's theoretical refinement, the rhythm of their novels, the reading pleasure, and the excitement of the plot were even better than a notch.
It's just such a short period of time, Ye Li actually has such a rich mind, can he point the direction of the article here?
They felt that Ye Li was as mysterious as the starry sky. A feeling of even greater admiration welled up in my heart.
"If this kind of revision direction is not successful, I'm afraid we really don't have the talent to write, right?" The three of them looked at each other before finally writing a third draft.
In this draft, not only all of Ye Li's ideas are included, but also their understanding, and the details that belong to them and their emotions are written.
So when he read the third draft, Ye Li finally showed a bright smile, because he found that Lan Ruoqi and the other three had found the direction of writing. Find their style orientation.
A smile appeared on his face, and he was finally relieved. Zhilu said that they were on the right track.
"But that's not enough......"
Ye Lizhidao's works serialized on the Internet should not be too depressing, but should be moderately reasonable "relaxed" and "cool". Most people don't want to see many suspenseful plots in a novel in addition to their busy work, one after another, which makes people breathless. Most people also don't want to see a book that is too obscure, which makes people too entangled, and even when reading, they have the urge to tear up the book and smash the computer when they are too angry.
Therefore, the popular novels written by Jin Yong in China and Alexandre Dumas abroad have been recognized by countless people.
And when Jin Yong wrote that Xiaolongnu was defiled, countless people sent letters to the newspaper to accuse, and even many people ran to Jin Yong's house in the middle of the night to throw stones and eggs.
Thinking of this, Ye Li felt a more thorough feeling.
Then, without thinking, he incorporated these theories into the works of Lan Ruoqi and others.
And the manuscript written by Ye Li through these theories, even if Lan Ruoqi saw it herself, she was shocked, because this fourth draft had been written very well, and even made them feel a little enthusiastic, full of feelings of wanting to look forward to the later development of the plot.
At this moment, the gaze they looked at Ye Li was completely different, and their eyes were full of unconcealable surprise.
Because Ye Li not only used the theory so skillfully, but was even willing to share it with them! You must know that after so many discussions, they have a deep understanding of the novel, and the synchronization of theory and practice has been greatly improved, and in just over two days, they are no longer the former Wuxia Ameng.
Only then did they realize that there were many problems with the manuscript they had written before.
At this moment, Ye Li took out three manuscripts and handed them to them separately. This is the first 30,000 words of the three novels after Ye Li's revision.
This is the original work, with some popular elements added in line with this era.
Lan Ruoqi and the three of them were completely shocked, because the three versions written by Ye Li were much better than what they wrote with all their heart!
When they watched such a work, they felt that their minds were almost exploding, compared to their level, it was really far from Ye Li!
They had the idea of looking up to Ye Li.
With Ye Li's ability, it's no wonder that it can cause countless people to be shocked!
And Ye Li's willingness to give them such three novels can be regarded as the greatest help to them!
What more could you ask for?
The three of them began to admire Ye Li's works with fascination, and then integrated them into their own writing structure.
And when the fifth draft was finally approved by Ye Li, they were already sweating profusely and feeling exhausted.
However, thinking of Ye Li writing three wonderful beginnings by himself, they couldn't help but be shocked: "Maybe for us, Ye Li is already doing his best now, right?" ”
Thinking of this, they were ashamed.
It's just that when they noticed Ye Li's appearance, they were full of shock. Because Ye Li's temperament is still extraordinary, he is not tired because of such laborious revisions and new drafts.
And they even noticed that Ye Li's temperament had become more crystalline, indescribably thorough, and it was refreshing at a glance.
Such a high-speed creation. It didn't affect Ye Li's mental state?
Now. They couldn't help but deeply understand why Ye Li could serialize the Legend of Sword and Fairy so quickly. Why can I write so many novels so quickly!
They are full of incredibleness.
And when they thought that Ye Li was only fourteen years old now, they felt bitter in their hearts. The so-called top teenagers in the world are like this, far stronger than them!
Naturally, they didn't know what to do, Ye Li had a foundation for reading novels in his previous life, so it was not difficult to write.
At this moment, the door was pushed open, and Xue Ting and Wang Mengfei both walked in. At the same time, Xue Ting took a newspaper and handed it to Ye Li: "Ye Li, when will your novel be published?" There's only four days left......"
Ye Li was stunned: "What four days?" ”
Lan Ruoqi and the others are also at a loss, these days they are busy creating, and they don't care about other things, thinking about it at the moment, there is a feeling of being in a different world.
"You don't know what to do?" Xue Ting was surprised: "You read the newspaper by yourself, you have been busy with exams in the past two days, and Wang Mengfei and I are not available here." ”
Ye Li took the newspaper suspiciously, and then saw that on the newspaper, He Mo was actually promoting, "Ye Li's morning and evening newspapers are sold." It will fall below three-quarters of its original level in a week! ”
And the time was exactly three days ago!
Ye Li's gaze became cold, he didn't expect that he would defeat Mojia Media Film and Television. defeated He Tiandi, and He Mo finally made a move!
"Is it a divine comedy with more than 500 million funds?" Ye Li muttered, the chill in his eyes getting thicker and thicker.
Seeing Ye Li's expression at this moment, Xue Ting noticed that there was an aura in Ye Li's gaze that was unsightly, although his face was flat, but that kind of chill made people feel trembling in their hearts.
However, Ye Li restrained his breath, smiled faintly and said to Xue Ting and Wang Mengfei: "Don't worry, the sales of the morning and evening newspapers will not fall." ”
"Hmm!" Xue Ting and Wang Mengfei nodded at the same time, and they realized at this moment that Ye Li didn't know, otherwise they wouldn't have let He Mo be so arrogant.
With Ye Li's identity now, any word he says can cause a sensation on the Internet. And even if He Mo is hoarse, he can't damage Ye Li's image and influence on the Internet. This is the reason why Ye Li has created a series of miracles during this time! This is also the reason why countless people believe in Ye Li.
"Are they all written?" Xue Ting couldn't help but ask.
Ye Li nodded and said, "You can go to typesetting now, and you can report it tomorrow!" ”
"Hmmm! As long as the sales can be recovered, it will make this He Mo slap himself in the mouth! Xue Ting said happily.
"That's not enough, since the He family still wants to pursue it, then let me solve it!" Ye Li's gaze flashed with a cold glow.
Seeing Ye Li's expression at the moment, Xue Ting and Wang Mengfei were both heartbroken, they found that the usual elegant young man had always been calm and waveless, but now in such an angry situation, it made people feel like they were facing a dragon devouring a tiger, and they couldn't be forced to look at it!
They glanced at each other, knowing that this time it was not Ye Li's trouble, but He Mo's trouble.
Ye Li immediately called the person in charge of the morning newspaper and the evening newspaper, passed on the two articles of Li Min and Li Zhuyue, and carried out heavy publicity from tomorrow.
At the same time, Ye Li's gaze became deep and sharp. He Mo? Perhaps a few months ago, I could only succumb to the oppressive force of yours, but now the situation is reversed! Now you still want to use me as a means of propaganda, but you don't know how to do it, you are setting yourself on fire!
From He Yu to He Tiandi, and now it's your turn!
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Many people on the Internet are paying attention to Ye Li's morning and evening newspapers, but their eyes are flashing with unspeakable anger, because He Mo has been constantly promoting things about the Divine Comedy these days, and when mentioning the Divine Comedy, he will always mention that there are still four days before the end of the week.
With the advent of the economic crisis, the sales of all kinds of newspapers have declined, and the morning and evening newspapers are no exception, even if many people go out of their way to buy these two newspapers, but after finding that there is really nothing worth reading on them, they will not buy them anymore.
However, thinking that the He family used propaganda as a means to suppress Ye Li, they were indignant for Ye Li in their hearts for a while.
When Ye Li was fighting for the country some time ago, where did you go?
Your movie can't compare to Ye Li, but when a movie comes out in the island country, how can you serve the country?
And now that the dust has settled, they have begun to shout for their own interests?
It's only been three days, but Ye Li didn't show up at all, which made them a little worried in their hearts.
It seems that even if Ye Li has such a strong reputation, there is nothing he can do in the face of such an economic crisis, after all, he is still just a teenager, and you must know that those media tycoons can only avoid it in the face of such an economic crisis, let alone Ye Li.
Thinking of this, they were a little unwilling in their hearts.
In such a situation, the time came to the morning of the fourth day, and at this moment, when they noticed the literary supplement in the morning newspaper, they were all shocked.
Because there is a novel in the literary supplement of the morning newspaper, the name on it is "Tianlong Babu", and the author is "Ye Li & Phantom Moon!" ”
Everyone was pleasantly surprised!
Ye Li finally made a move!
They absolutely believe that Ye Li can save such a state of sluggish newspaper sales.
On the same day, many people got the news and went to buy this newspaper, wanting to know what was written in this novel by Lu Dao Ye Li!
Thinking that since the twilight city, their hearts have been extremely bright, but since then, Ye Li has stopped publishing novels, which makes them feel a little melancholy in their hearts, and now, they can finally feast their eyes.
At this moment, everyone on the Internet is surging with hot feelings.
Ye Li's novel is bound to be a masterpiece! Even if it's co-written!
At this moment, they suddenly posted their previous depression and exploded.
"I said a long time ago that Ye Li will not let us down!"
"Newspaper sales are bound to go up like crazy!"
"Even if it's an economic crisis, it can't stop Ye Li!"
"In the past three days, Ye Li sharpened his sword, and finally proved all this with facts!"
"Tenryu Babu is so beautiful! Confucian philosophy, leisurely travel, a novel that integrates humanities, and the characters are so well shaped, it really deserves to be the handwriting of a teenager in the world! ”
Although it is co-written, it can be seen from the writing that this is in line with Ye Li's style! It's really cool to watch, it's incisively cool! ”
"I'm looking forward to the next scene! More than 4,000 words in a day seems really not enough! ”
However, at this time, He Mo once again spoke on the official homepage of Mojia Media Film and Television: "What is a martial arts novel that can't be listed in the hall of elegance? ”
At this moment, He Mo's smile was cold, in his opinion, Ye Li was forced by his pressure temporarily, so he wrote a martial arts novel, even if it looks good, but after all, it is only a martial arts novel. (To be continued......)