Chapter 356: There is no lack of virtue, only more lack of virtue! (Medium)
The Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin is useless, this is the conclusion that Manzhu Sawa came to after reading the sixth chapter of the Land of Zen and the seventh-chapter five-colored altar. Because from the point of view of description, the Nine Dragons pulled the coffin and hit Mount Tai, and Mount Tai appeared cracked, so it seems that this writing is just to lead to the legendary five-color altar of the Three Emperors and Five Emperors, and the various visions of the five-color altar show that this is the most important.
Writing like this does make the scene a lot more atmospheric, but the crux of the matter is that it is a bit redundant to write like this. From the introduction and classification, it can be seen that this is a novel of cultivating immortals, and the background is in another world. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist being in the real society of the earth now, simply according to the development of the novel, after a while, the protagonist Ye Fan touches the liliang of this five-color altar and travels to Xiuxian Shijie, otherwise it will not be possible to construct such a condition at all, which can be said to be the same plot development as a template. According to this development, what Kowloon pulls the coffin is really something that adds momentum to the opening.
Although the plot of the Nine Dragons Coffin is not something that ordinary authors can think of, Manzhu Sawa still feels a little disappointed, after all, she has great expectations for Su Shichen's work.
""Covering the Sky" is indeed the most imposing opening of all Su Da's novels, but it is too much to pursue momentum." Manju Sawa commented.
Well, it's a bit like the heartthrob Beckham in football, Beckham's free kick is famous, of course, if it is successful, the media will praise the ball skills, but once it fails, the media will say that Beckham is too angle-oriented.
The beginning of "Covering the Sky" is well written, and many people praise it, but if it is poorly written. The reader will come up with the same comment as Manju Sahua, which begins with a majestic atmosphere, but it feels a little empty.
But is that really the case?
If you ask Su Shichen which novel begins with what he thinks is the most haode. Probably he would not hesitate to say that it was Dickens's "A Tale of Two Cities". Ask the beginning of the most haode among the online novels, this Su Shichen really can't answer, this "most" is not something that ordinary novels can afford, but the question impresses him very deeply, undoubtedly "Covering the Sky" is one of them.
How could the beginning of a novel that left such a deep impression on Su Shichen be because of the cumbersome ...... that highlights the momentum?
Manju Sawa watched the content of the next chapter, and the plot development of "Covering the Sky" was completely a strange turn. It wasn't what she thought about at all, it turned out to be the bronze coffin of more than 20 meters pulled by the nine dragon corpses and opened it, sucking the protagonist Ye Fan and the others in. Then the nine dragon corpses flew up again, pulling the coffin into the air. The important thing is that the dragon corpse is still a dragon corpse and there is no sign of resurrection, but it just pulled the coffin carrying the protagonist Ye Fan and others and flew up, flying towards the mysterious passage constructed by the mysterious Tai Chi Bagua diagram.
"I'll it. Has the coffin in Kowloon become a train? Manju Sawa was shocked by this plot development.
Actually, don't really say it. When Su Shichen first saw this Nine Dragons pulling the coffin, putting the protagonist and others into the bronze coffin, and then the Nine Dragons took off, he remembered the interstellar train in Doraemon.
The story development of "Covering the Sky" is not at all the plot that Manzhu Sawa thinks in his heart, what five-color altar crosses and is reborn, and the Nine Dragons pull the coffin is just a foil, and now she understands that the five-color altar is just to construct a mysterious passage, and the Nine Dragons pull the coffin is the main one.
This is unexpected.?
"Sure enough, I just said, "Covering the Sky" is a masterpiece of the mountain. This is what it looks like to close the mountain. Manzhu Sahua's interest suddenly soared, and he wanted to see where the Nine Dragons pulled the coffin to the protagonist and the others.
The plot was slowly dragged out. It is very likely that the Nine Dragons coffin was made by ancient people, and it is very likely that it was the era when China disappeared, and the protagonist and others were pulled to a strange continent, and it may not even be on Earth at all.
Manju Sahua's question is solved, but a new question has arisen.
"Another way to break time and space and return to the ancient days of the earth?" Manzhu Sawa thought like this, "This highlights the importance of the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin, and looking at this rhythm, this is a multi-person wearing together?" ”
Manzhu Sawa she underestimated "Covering the Sky" too much, after coming to a strange location, Ye Fan and others found the carving of the dragon, and according to the inscription on the carving, the continent they were on was Mars.
"I'm dizzy, it's Mars? The trend of this plot is really not something that ordinary people can guess. Manzhu Sawa suddenly remembered something and shouted, "Could that five-colored altar be a teleportation array?" ”
According to what is written in the book, the Nine Dragons Coffin arrived at Mars through a mysterious passage built on Mount Tai on Earth, and Mars also has an identical teleportation array.
Immediately afterwards, Ye Fan and others saw a building ruins, and after identification, this building turned out to be the Great Leiyin Temple of Western Bliss Shijie, and they also saw the ancient Bodhi tree where Shakyamuni preached.
In other words, Shakyamuni meditated for seven days and seven nights on this ancient Bodhi tree in front of this Great Thunder Temple on Mars and became a Buddha.
Mars...... Bliss Shijie Dairai-yin Temple
This is completely unrelated to two places that no one can associate with, but in "Covering the Sky", they are forcibly pulled together, which is called a novelty.?
"Mamma Mia, the background of "Covering the Sky" is really as mentioned in the introduction, it is really big." Manzhu Sawa didn't know what to say anymore, and his mind was full of doubts, "Could it be that the legendary Western Heaven Bliss Shijie is not on Earth at all, but on Mars?" There is also the Kowloon coffin, what kind of background does this want to express? ”
This novel is a Xianxia novel, and naturally there are gods and Buddhas, so there is nothing for the appearance of Buddhism, Manzhu Shahua, but she is curious that this big thunder sound temple has become so dilapidated because of weishenme, that is where so many Buddhist powers exist.
"It's hot, it's hot, it's good, I didn't expect the first few chapters to go into a climax." Manju Sawa said.
Legend has it that there are a lot of demons and monsters sealed under the Great Lei Yin Temple.,And when the protagonists took away the bronze plaque of the Big Lei Yin Temple, the ruins of the Big Lei Yin Temple disappeared with the wind.。 The ashes are gone. One of the most direct consequences of the destruction of the Great Leiyin Temple is that those demons and monsters that were suppressed by the Buddha in the legend are about to appear, and the first one to appear is the crocodile ancestor who was suppressed in the first layer of the Leiyin Temple in the legend.
Including the protagonist, everyone is mortal. Even if he still holds the vessel of the legendary Buddha in his hand, there is no way to compete with the legendary existence, in other words, the lives of the protagonists are threatened, which is the climax and conflict point muttered in Manzhu Sahua's mouth.
And what is written is not only these unexpected plots, but also the struggle of people's hearts, the contradictions between people, and all kinds of calculations.?
"Each has a ghost. This is the best part, there are many online novels nowadays that only pay attention to the refreshing plot and do not focus on the portrayal of characters. However, Su Da's characters have always been portrayed well. ”
The protagonist Ye Fan and everyone can be said to have been taken to Mars, and in the face of the powerful crocodile ancestor, it can be said that he has been forced into a desperate situation, and the ugliness of people in order to survive is all ugly, and Ye Fan was almost pushed off the five-color altar by his companions.
"Humanity in a desperate situation. This is something that Su Da performed very well in "Infinite Terror". Each has its own personality, and there is no face. "Manju Sawa looked very seriously.
In order to avoid the crocodile ancestor, everyone returned to the coffin again, and then used the blood of those little crocodiles to activate the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin again, and it was empty again.
"Anyway, it's not going to come back to Earth like this, is it? That would be too anticlimactic. ”
Manzhu Sawa naturally thought too much, this time the Nine Dragons pulled the coffin to sail in the stars, and at the same time, a picture of the ancient starry sky emerged in the bronze coffin, and there were small lines on this starry sky map. And this line is the current route of the Kowloon coffin, that is. This is a map of the stars.
"Isn't this like an airplane track? However, this one is stronger, and it is directly the route of the starry sky. Manzhu Sahua said, "The only people who have this ability may be those heavenly gods and Buddhas." "Manju Sawa is now very curious about what the end of this starry sky route map looks like, and it is a planet like Mars???????
Take the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin, sail through the Big Dipper, and finally reach the point.
It should be said that this is the place where the story of "Covering the Sky" begins, in this place, everyone sees the legendary golden-winged Dapeng, as well as the strange environment, the mysterious creatures that molt in the black pond water, etc., all of which show that this shijie is the legendary Xiuxian shijie.
"Su Da is really powerful enough, he wrote so many chapters to get into the topic, and it didn't make people feel dragged at all, but it made me feel that there was no such wonderful feeling if there was no foreshadowing in front, this is strength, what kind of shijie is this?" Can't wait to watch the next chapter, but Su Shichen not only didn't fill the pit, but a bigger pit appeared, and all the people who talked about this shijie with the protagonist became old men in their seventies and eighties, and the protagonist himself became a child as if he had rejuvenated.
It was such a big surprise to come to this shijie, and then ......
When Manju Sawa couldn't wait to turn the next page, it was the last page of the reward page, which means that there was no more.
"How is that possible? Didn't you send thirty-two chapters at once? How could it not be? Manju Sawa looked at the title and realized that the chapter she had just read was [Chapter 32?] Flick your fingers and face the old man].
Before I knew it, Manju Sawa had already finished reading all the updates.
"How can this be the end? How can this be the end of it! It's not scientific! Manju Sawa was no longer a lady at all, and kept repeating this sentence in his mouth.
The path opened up by the gods in the starry sky, what is this continent? The Weishenme of the Great Thunder Yin Temple will run to Mars and decay, and the demons that are suppressed are all there, so where did the legendary gods and Buddhas go??
The most important thing is that Kowloon pulls the coffin, who is in the coffin? It is even said that the legendary crocodile ancestor can be feared, and Weishenme will be summoned from the distant starry sky by the five-colored altar???
One by one, so many questions were thrown, and Su Shichen was so irresponsible.
Soon Manju Sawa thought of another thing, this is the amount of fifteen days, which means that it will not be updated in the next fourteen days, and she has to wait for fourteen days with these questions. Thinking of this, Manzhu Sawa really has a feeling of wanting to fry his hair, torment!?
Manzhu Sawa understood, she finally understood that Weishenme Su Shichen would suddenly be so powerful, and Weishenme would release the thirty-two chapters so heroically, and the content of these thirty-two chapters was a sinkhole, a god pit.
"Ahh......h How can there be such an unscrupulous author?!! ”?
ps: It's not a good look today.,Guarantee two more.,There's one more before twelve o'clock in the evening.。 (To be continued......)