Chapter 421: A Different "Fortune Operator-Yongmei"
When Li Chencan's poem was displayed in front of everyone's eyes with his full picture, many of the previous feelings about this poem had completely disappeared unconsciously.
Because, Li Chencan's poem completely exceeded their imagination......
Li Chencan's poem is not the same as Lu Guang's, not only because his own is a word rather than a poem, but also because the two are not the same at all.
Lu Guang's poem mainly writes a sense of picture, and then gradually rises from the sense of picture, as well as some feelings of plum blossoms.
However, Li Chencan's poem has gone further in many places, whether it is in describing the scenery or describing a feeling of plum blossoms, it is a further step.
When everyone carefully tastes Li Chencan's poem, they will be able to feel more and more the feelings in this poem, which is very rich, and after so many years of understanding of ancient poetry, the feeling will gradually sublimate, bringing amazement and love for this poem.
"The wind and rain send spring back, and the snow welcomes spring. It is already a cliff with a hundred feet of ice, and there are still flowers and branches.
Pretty doesn't compete for spring, only reports spring. When the mountains were full of flowers, she laughed in the bushes. ”
The words of Li Chencan that are displayed in front of everyone are such a song with the same name as Lu You's "Fortune Operator. Yongmei", this poem is far more than Lu Guang's seven-character quatrain, whether in terms of structure, or in terms of concept, or in terms of diction.
The first wind and snow send spring back, and the snow welcomes spring to ...... These two sentences alone have brought many different feelings to everyone, in these two sentences. You can feel a strange feeling.
Of course, when they see the name of Li Chencan's poem, they will think of Lu You's poem "Fortune Operator. Yongmei", and unconsciously made a comparison between the two poems.
Just at the beginning. The structure of the two is completely different, and the meaning they want to express is completely different.
Li Chencan's "Fortune Operator. The beginning sentence of "Yongmei" is like a strong pen, showing a mind and courage that are obviously different from Lu You. "Wind and rain" and "flying snow" point out the changes of the four seasons and the change of time, and "Spring Return" and "Spring Arrival" focus on the movement of things, which not only creates a sense of time flow for the whole text, but also prepares for the vicissitudes of life for the plum in the snow below. The words are upright and high-spirited...... This is very in line with everyone's consistent feeling about Li Chencan's poetry, that is, a real domineering. This kind of domineering is not accomplished by deliberately creating poetry, but is an internal, something in the bones.
In Lu You's song "Fortune Operator. In "Yongmei", the initial feeling was different from this. The era of Lu You. After all, the poems he wrote were at a low point in his life. Moreover, Lu You and Chairman Mao are not in the same position, and the feelings in many places are naturally different, which also causes the difference in the poetry of the two.
And then there's even more......
The sentence "It is already a cliff with ice" describes the harsh living environment of plum blossoms in the cold winter, so that people can almost feel the cramped smell conveyed by the cold environment, but it is in the pressing environment and sinister atmosphere. The plum blossoms are "still pretty". The plum blossoms are blooming beautifully on this ice-condensed, cliff-like cliff, a "pretty" word. It not only depicts the gorgeous form of plum blossoms, but also shows the spiritual temperament of plum blossoms and heroes in flowers, so the feeling of plum blossoms is completely sublimated in such an instant......
The sublimation here is not the same as Lu Guang's sublimation, and the sublimation here is many times more clever than his...... It is easier for people to accept, and I feel that the plum blossom written by Li Chencan is completely on paper!
The plum blossoms written by Li Chencan are full of pride, the ice cannot damage its bones, the flying snow cannot hide its beauty, and the danger cannot destroy its ambition, which is not the same type as the plum blossom image of "lonely and ownerless" and "sad alone at dusk" in Lu You's pen.
Moreover, when you see this, you will also be able to be a little ashamed...... Because some people will think that Li Chencan is using flowers as a metaphor for people, and using the feeling of flowers to imply himself...... Did he replace what he was facing now with plum blossoms?
Is he also implying that he is on that kind of cliff right now?
Indeed, after coming to Yenching University, Li Chencan was quickly criticized by this guy Lu Guang, I guess that's what he thinks in his heart...... Thinking about it like this, everyone is really a little ashamed.
But the next Li Chencan was not immersed in the realm of completely describing plum blossoms.
Pretty doesn't compete for spring, only report spring!
This feeling once again sublimates the spirit of the plum blossom, it always blooms alone in the severe cold, in the ice and snow, the cliff and the ice bloom alone, but even if it is such a plum blossom, it does not deliberately compete with other words......
When they saw this, many people had a fever on their faces, at least Lu Guang and their gang were like that...... Because they have more and more a feeling that Li Chencan's poem is writing about them......
The feeling of this poem makes them all written......
It was at this time that Li Chencan still did not compete for spring in the cold environment...... Therefore, when he was questioned like this, he had to ask everyone if they agreed with him to participate in such a fight......
When the mountains are full of flowers, she laughs in the bushes......
The end of the last poem is almost the finishing touch, pointing out all the good things in the whole poem.
Spring is coming, and the cliff is finally full of flowers, and it is gorgeous. Plum blossoms also ushered in a brilliant spring with their own sincerity. But the plum blossoms, which turned out to be unique and proud, did not have the slightest jealousy, but were very pleased to be peacefully hidden in the splendid spring. The three words of "laughter in the bush" make everyone feel that the joy of sharing spring between plum blossoms and mountain flowers is written with a expressive pen, especially the word "laughter", which writes the charm of plum blossoms - both humble and unrefined, and open-minded and generous......
As a result, the spiritual height of the word was instantly sublimated......
The most important thing is that when everyone saw this, they replaced themselves again, and Li Chencan was talking about them, saying that he was in this situation now, and he would only laugh in the bushes......
This is completely subverted by the feeling that the plum blossoms in Lu You's poem are jealous of the group, but this kind of subversion of famous poets is usually scolded by many people, and it is basically difficult for him to really complete the great subversion...... However, in the current situation, Li Chencan completely described this feeling that is completely different from Lu You's poems, and this feeling also makes everyone feel that he is very open-minded......
"Sure enough, it's Li Chencan, and sure enough, it's Li Chencan, who wrote 'Xiongguan Mandao is as true as iron, and now it's stepping forward from the beginning', his lyrics...... It's really amazing! Basically, I have nothing to say! If I were Lu Guang, I would never think that I would be able to win in front of such a poem. ”
From Li Chencan's poems, it is easy to see that he is open-minded and open-minded...... Look at the current Yongmei even more so...... Li Chencan's spiritual temperament has been integrated into his bones, so what he writes can often include such spirit......"
"Before, I thought that Lu Guang's "Yongmei" was already a pretty good poem, but now that I look at it, that "Yongmei" is in Li Chencan's "Fortune Operator. Yongmei" is still dwarfed in front of it...... Li Chencan is really a natural asset, this song "Fortune Operator. Yongmei" will also become a classic! ”
…… At this moment, the faces of several people in the front row of the student union can be found in their astonishment and surprise, because they are indeed surprised by Li Chencan's poem "Fortune Operator. Yongmei" was stunned, I didn't expect this song to be written so well, Lu Guang's was completely exploded!
At this time, even Professor Zhou's face was a little shocked, such an old pedant, after seeing this kind of good poem written by Li Chencan, naturally saw the joy of hunting, and immediately began to ask Li Chencan: "Chencan, how did you come up with this poem?" How did you come up with the idea of using the same title as Lu You, but instead of him? ”
Everyone's eyes were focused on Li Chencan's face, Li Chencan smiled slightly, and said to Professor Zhou, who asked the question: "I think of this idea occasionally...... I just think that maybe I can interpret plum blossoms from another angle, and I don't necessarily have to use the perspective of Lu You...... So I tried to write like this......"
"Very good, very good! It's really good! Professor Zhou directly said three very good, and then said to Li Chencan: "This poem definitely has the power to become a classic...... You've also written "Loushan Pass", "Waves and Sands", and "Farewell" before, right...... Well, that's good! Do your best! ”
Hearing Professor Zhou's words, everyone didn't say anything, they also knew that Lu Guang had lost to Li Chencan, but after all, it was only they who knew Lu Dao...... However, judging from the current situation, although Professor Zhou did not say a word about Lu Guang's loss to Li Chencan...... But the kind of praise he gave to Li Chencan between the lines...... A lot of things are already quite clear.
This also proves that Professor Zhou has recognized the advantages of Li Chencan's poem, and even uses two heavy words in the classics to illustrate it......
In fact, these are all taken for granted, another time and space, after modern times, there are still not many people who have basically attained in ancient style poetry, Chairman Mao is definitely one of the best, and there is a momentum and bearing in his chest, which is the strongest catalyst for his poems to become good poems and good words, so of course his works can't be wrong. (To be continued......)