The title of the post is like this: "Amazing Psalms, Classics Can Be Handed Down." "When I clicked in, I saw that it was the poem I wrote in class yesterday. There are countless follow-up posts, and the number of clicks is already crazy, including many comments from Internet celebrities and real people.

"Today, when I happened to browse a post on the Internet, I came across a post with a very arrogant title. I clicked on the post with contempt, and there was a psalm on it. After reading it casually, I read it again and again very solemnly, and finally I couldn't go against my own heart, so I copied it down with a pilgrimage mood and felt it carefully. I admire the mysterious author very much, and I hate to be a lackey for my subordinates. The following are some of my superficial views on the poem, and I have written my feelings, please refer to and correct them. ”

"The poem is written with a melancholy journey and is cleverly conceived. The beginning sentence "move the boat to moor Yanzhu" points to the topic, and writes that the boat is docked at the small sandbar in the river to prepare for accommodation. The second sentence, "The sunset is sad and new", describes the poet's mood at this moment. The word "new" makes people feel that the poet originally had endless old sorrows, and today he is anchored here, and he has a stronger new sorrow. Then the author described to us a vivid sunset scenery by the river: the vast wilderness, the sky is low, as if to envelop everything; In the clear river water, there is only a bright moon, rippling on the side of the boat. In this vast wilderness and the water of the river, only the bright moon comes to accompany the lonely wandering word. The bright moon gave him solace and added more new sorrows. When I was reading, I felt as if I had appeared on the riverside, in the wilderness, surrounded by only the bright moon, and a sense of melancholy filled my chest, and I was very intoxicated. ”

This is the exclamation of Cui Ming, a famous Internet mouth, and as soon as this post came out, it was even more crazy to discuss. I'm going to turn into a lackey, so don't hurry up and watch.

And the appearance of another heavyweight has pushed the post to a peak. The same is an exclamation.

"Moving the boat to the smoke, the sunset is new. The wild sky is low and the trees are low, and Jiang Qingyue is close to people. This poem depicts the river scenery to convey the homesickness of the guests. The poet naturally absorbs the objects in the eyes that are suitable for expressing the loneliness and wandering feeling of the journey, and uses the technique of white drawing, and writes lightly in ink, but conveys real affection. ”

Through the detailed description of the scenery, this poem reveals the special connection of objective things, and at the same time expresses its own unique feelings. The poet first described the misty Jiangbian Zhouzhu in the twilight, and pointed out the time and place of staying on the Jiande River at night. Then, more specifically describe the scenery of the river and the sky seen on the moored boat. Write the long-term view first, and then write the close-up view, which is clearly hierarchical. The two sentences of "the wild sky and low trees, Jiang Qingyue is close to people" are very wonderful scenes. Because the field is empty and the field of vision is wide, it creates the illusion that the far sky is lower than the near tree, because the river water is clear, the moon shadow floats in the river, and the person is on the boat, and the river and the moon seem to be closer to the person. This kind of scenery that can only be understood and cannot be expressed, the poet depicts it meticulously and realistically in only ten words. Without keen observation and expressive power of white drawing, it would be impossible to depict the changes in the relationship between the sky and the trees, the moon and people caused by the wilderness and the clear river. ”

From the perspective of lyricism through scenes, the poet not only generally blends into the scene, but also reveals the homesickness to be expressed through the scenery in layers and layer by layer. When travelers encounter autumn, they are most likely to be touched by melancholy, which is the first layer; This first layer of poets does not have a positive expression, but is revealed from "wilderness" and "Jiangqing". In the twilight, the boat is parked in Jiangzhu, because of the twilight and new sorrows, this is the second layer. The wilderness creates the feeling of being far away, making travelers feel that the hometown is thousands of miles away and the return journey is far away; And because of the wilderness, all the sounds are lonely, which makes the traveler feel lonely and desolate, which is the third layer. Because the river water is clear, Yijue Mingyue is close to people, and when you see the bright moon, you miss your hometown, which is the fourth layer. The poet describes the scenery from far and near, but conveys his own feelings of detention and sorrow from light to thick, from shallow to deep. From the point of view of chapter structure, in order to write a quatrain well, it must be restrained at the end of the sentence to create a complete artistic conception, and it cannot make people feel that there is a beginning and no end after reading. But this poem is very special, it ends with three or four sentences in pairs, but puts the turning point at the end of the second sentence. The poet cleverly used the three words "guest sorrow new" to point out the theme, like the finishing touch to point out the poem, and the three or four sentences are just set off with the scenery of these three words. In this way, by the third and fourth lines of the couplet, the meaning of the poem is clearly and completely. ”

"The author's masterful artistic construction. The words are really a model for my generation, and when I hope to have an exchange, Zhou Zeguang is not very honored. ”

This is the comment of Mr. Zhou Zeguang, a generation of people in the Shenzhou Empire, no, it is an analysis. Zhou Zeguang's treasure of the Chinese poetry altar does not explain.

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I read some of the reviews and found that they were all positive. And so respectful and respectful.

Lin Feng couldn't help but sigh: "A classic is a classic, no matter how it spreads in that time and space, it can't stop its light. However, there are really a lot of masters in this world, and this review is definitely not inferior to everyone's comments on the earth. The person who posted the post didn't reveal me, but he should know me, who could it be? ”

Lin Feng shook his head, "Forget it, let's break the bucket first." ”

Lin Feng didn't look at the background data first, but directly opened the DW text software to start coding words. That attentive demeanor is so charming, if a girl sees it at this time, she should fall in love with him. Attentive men are the most charming.

Finally, with the last few strokes, the two large chapters are completed. It's a lot faster than yesterday. After logging in to the Chuangdian background and uploading the chapters, Lin Feng took a look at the overall data, the total clicks were 20, the members clicked 9, ***1, and the collection was also 1, dismal data. Lin Feng had no emotions in this regard, and was very calm.

It's normal for newcomers to have bad results in new books, not to mention the entire online literature circle, that is, in the creation of a point, the novel is also vast, an ordinary newcomer wants to attract the attention of readers just after one or two chapters, unless a chapter is 10,000 words, and then keep changing.

Without daily accumulation and a little bit of effort, how can there be the glory of success. No one can achieve it overnight, only hard work, and give full play to 100% of their talent is success, and they will succeed, which is success.

Therefore, Lin Feng just uploaded it silently, did not go to the forum to advertise, nor did he go to the group to pull sponsorship, he was waiting, waiting for the website editor to review and sign the contract. When the time comes to really advertise, it's still a big advertisement. Lin Feng was very confident.

After finishing the upload of the chapter, Lin Feng looked at the time and went to bed not early. The day after tomorrow is Saturday, so go to bed later and save more manuscripts.

As for the essay about youth assigned by the teacher, it is one of the trivia matters that has long ended.

When I woke up, the rising sun sprinkled on the bed and floor through the curtains, covering everything with a veil of light, which was very beautiful.

According to the habit, after completing many affairs, including eating, Lin Feng began the day's trip.

Class, class. The teacher came and went, the textbook changed this and that, and the time schedule seemed to have become faster.

In the Chinese class, Zhang Yong took a special look at Lin Feng's composition, but the result was very disappointed. Because the composition is very bland, although it is not bad, it is still far from the classics, which disappointed Zhang Yong, who was originally looking forward to it. Because of this, Lin Feng had a very peaceful day on this day, although because of the poems, he became popular and attracted the attention of his classmates. However, students, even high school students, do not understand the meaning of that psalm, which means that there is a modern person who is shoulder to shoulder with everyone, and ancient poetry is not in decline after all. So the turmoil caused is not very big, of course it refers to this school in this class. So Lin Feng enjoyed this purity very much.

In addition, Mr. Zhang Yong also quietly apologized to him, the post was sent by him, but the poem has already told everyone not to reveal Lin Feng's news. Lin Feng is also more assured, a peaceful life can be lived for a while, and since he has chosen this path, he always has to pay. As for Zhang Yong's invitation to discuss, Lin Feng only declined in euphemistic language. I'm very busy.

However, there is still one that has not escaped, so the tranquility of this day is still a little flawed.