Chapter 511: Kangkang's Composition
Chapter 511
Zhang Cuilian felt that Kangkang's whole person had changed a lot since he came back from traveling. When you are strong, taller, and darker, the whole person has become different.
Before leaving, Zhang Cuilian gave him a notebook. Let Kang Kang record everything he saw and heard along the way, and he could still do it at the beginning. After a few days, I don't have the mood and energy, and I always feel that this is a homework imposed on me.
After returning, Zhang Cuilian washed out the photos in the camera. Kang Kang excitedly snatched the photos and talked about the daily itinerary, Zhang Cuilian had a plan and said: "Son, you said it really well." Mom still envy you. But you'll forget these things when you grow up, so why don't you make a travelogue? ”
Kang Kang asked curiously, "What travelogue?" ”
Zhang Cuilian said with a smile: "You see that there are many adventures abroad, and what they say does not exist, and the world imagined by the author is not fun at all." We have photos in hand, and you can write down all the interesting stories about you and your grandpa along the way. Grandma and Grandpa can also help you reminisce, record the hotel you stayed in at that time and the route you traveled. Looking back, my mother showed the editor of the publishing house if she could benefit everyone with a travel guide! ”
Not to mention children, even Xie Jun and his family feel that it is very meaningful. There is no need for Zhang Cuilian to say more, just make a decision and let Kang Kang write it right away, and they will add it on the side.
Kang Kang didn't feel distressed anymore, so he took the photos washed out of the camera. According to everyone's itinerary, they will describe what they have seen and heard along the way and interesting things.
Children's language skills are limited, and they don't know how to say many words they want to express. asked his grandmother An Rong to buy him a dictionary, and An Rong felt sorry for this eldest grandson and directly bought a full set of "Cihai" for him.
Kang Kang described the magnificence of the Great Wall, the majesty of the Forbidden City, the scenery of the Summer Palace and the authentic Beijing snacks in great detail. He also wrote about the prosperity of the metropolis of Shanghai, the beautiful scenery of the West Lake in Hangzhou, and the delicate Jiangnan town.
It is said that the motherland is beautiful, Kang Kang wrote in his travelogue: "I used to think that the whole world was no different from home, the sun was scorching in summer and snow was flying all over in winter. When I went out, I realized that the outside world was colorful. The customs are different in every place, and the food is different in every place. ”
Zhang Cuilian looked at the text written by Kang Kang, and couldn't help but shake her head and smile: "What a snack, I have eaten so many things along the way, and I really haven't fallen behind." ”
When writing, Zhang Cuilian was also guiding beside her. The article can be written as he pleases, which is the freedom of the author. But you still have to pay attention to the method, and you can't write whatever comes to mind.
"You described it very well, and the Beijing section is very well written. But mom gives you a suggestion to introduce it in different categories. For example, the first part introduces what you have seen and heard in Beijing and the famous attractions you have visited. Writing about the Forbidden City, let's talk about the Forbidden City, and there is a digression here that talks about rickshaws and courtyards. You can list this piece separately and fill it in when you are in the old Beijing style. Behind it is the old Beijing snacks, so it is not strange for others to look at each other. ”
Kang Kang nodded again and again, he admired his mother very much in terms of writing. No matter how good the Chinese teacher in the school is, it is not as good as his mother. His mother is a writer who has published several books, and she is a member of some writers' association. Even his homeroom teacher said that he was very talented in writing and followed his mother.
Zhang Cuilian didn't want Kang Kang to write a long story about a travelogue, but asked him to exercise his writing and remember what he went out for this time.
At the same time, I also want to understand the child's thoughts through words, and it is said that words are the author's inner confession. If you want to understand a person's heart, you have to look for it in his words.
In the article at Tsinghua University, Zhang Cuilian saw what Xie Jun and Dong Lihua said. They laughed and said that Kang Kang is a tiger father without a dog, and he wants to make contributions in the future.
Zhang Cuilian didn't take it seriously, and the bold words under the touch of love were like brotherhood on the wine table. It's all hot-headed, and it doesn't have to be sincere.
In addition, children's ideas are ever-changing, and Kang Kang sometimes wants to be a train driver, which feels particularly majestic. Sometimes I want to be a chef and I think I can cook food at any restaurant. When I was swimming, I felt like I could be a world champion, and when I was beaten, I had to be a boxer.
But in this article, Kang Kang is standing at the gate of Tsinghua University and there is a photo of the unnamed lake in Peking University. He did not describe what he saw and heard at these two most famous universities in China, but devoted a considerable amount of time to expressing his regret that he did not enter the military academy.
He said he had heard that there was also a National Defense University in Beijing, which was the best military school in China. There are a lot of aircraft, artillery, tanks, anti-aircraft missiles, and the students in them will be commanders in the future. He said that he was a little sorry that he couldn't see it, even if he was turned away, he could take a look at the door.
But he imagined that it must be very majestic inside, just like when his grandfather took him to see the raising of the national flag. Like those handsome uncles of the unsealed army, they are carrying steel guns with the national flag.
Zhang Cuilian covered her mouth and snickered, it turned out to be when the national flag was raised. Kang Kang is more excited than his grandfather, he thinks that no matter how beautiful the Forbidden City is, it is also a house. It's not as exciting as in front of the door, when the national flag is raised.
Of course, Kangkang, the little guy, still can't say that he is excited, he said that he is like he has been electrified. It was crispy and numb, a little like crying and a little unable to cry.
The following articles are much more relaxed and cheerful, and Kang Kang did not forget to complain while describing it. This is also because of the differences in local cultures, Kang Kang is a child and he can't understand it yet.
When describing Hangzhou: "It's all liars on TV, I thought there was really Bai Suzhen under Leifeng Tower." Is West Lake really a lake? It feels as big as the sea, and you can't finish walking. The broken bridge is not broken at all, why is it called a broken bridge? There is also Su Di, which is said to have been repaired by a person named Su Shi. Isn't Su Shi a poet? Why build bridges if you don't write poems? Is Hangzhou going to flood too? ”
When he was writing about Shanghai, Kang Kang was even more bored: "Why is Shanghai so hot, much hotter than the Northeast." It turns out that sweat can be turned into salt, and every day I feel like I'm going to melt away. I really want that bow and arrow to shoot down the sun in Shanghai. Then I am a descendant, and I am truly a blessing to mankind! ”
"This town called Zhouzhuang is really beautiful, but it is also very small. The portions of meals here are also small, and I don't understand why. During the meal, my grandmother said that she wanted a piece of rice. Auntie said that the rice here is all in pots, and grandma said that let's have a pot. It turned out to be a little bit, and the three of us ate two pots of rice. Ay! The people here are so stingy. I don't understand why the plates here are so small! ”
Zhang Cuilian looked forward and backwards, and only felt that children were really childlike.
The food in Jiangnan is exquisite, and you can eat a lot of variety if the portion is small. Northeast cuisine is a large portion, and one dish is enough for three people. Where is the opportunity for you to order so much?
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