Those who are really familiar with Li Feiyu know how seriously he reads comics, and it is enough to find the mistakes of comics once, and if he is interested, he will directly find out all the shortcomings.

And now after reading it three times, the fourth time is the beginning to find shortcomings, which is enough to say a lot of things.

Now you can see that Li Feiyu's whole eyes are about to pop out, and his eyes are even brighter, which is obviously the rhythm of interest, and it is also very interested.

"Phew,This comic is really a challenge.,Want to find the shortcomings.,It's time to test my skills.,But this newcomer comic is demonic.,But hehe.,I'm still able to find the shortcomings.,It's just that I can't hold it just now.,Now let's see my full strength!"

Li Feiyu was very pleased, but when he looked at it again this time, his face was extremely solemn, looking at a painting was a long time, no less than the time spent creating a comic, this is also the senior vipers of the Feiyang Forum, what makes people admire, they really treat the comics with potential with a pious attitude, and this cartoon obviously makes Li Feiyu extremely excited, he wants to take a good look at it and find out all the faults!

"The name "Yan Huanglong Group" seems to have heard of it, but no matter what, I still let me find it, well, this first point, the painting style is very mature, the protagonist is extremely eye-catching, very aura, but in this way, the brilliance of some important characters is somewhat lacking, and the whole has caused a slight sense of disobedience, if it goes on for a long time. It will cause a big disobedience, which is the first disadvantage! ”

"Whew, it's really challenging. But I like it! ”

Li Feiyu, identified the first shortcoming, it had already taken him more than forty minutes, plus the previous words, it was more than two hours, obviously this is extremely surprising, after all, in general. Even if you look at it seriously, it can't take so long!

"The second drawback, the handling of the lines. Some subtle places, such as the protagonist's nose and the layout of the protagonist's facial features, have slight flaws. The overall effect of this flaw is not there. But it has an impact on the protagonist's aura.,The lines are slightly stiffer.,It's not in line with the identity of the protagonist.,It's also a little bit out of its due characteristics! ”

"Third ......"

"Fourth ......"

Li Feiyu became more and more excited, and the finding of a shortcoming made him feel as if he had won the lottery, and he was excited to throw himself into the ground, at this time Li Feiyu. But he frowned: "It seems that these are the shortcomings, and I can't find them anymore." But how is this possible?,Generally speaking,Internationally renowned manga masters can't reach this point.,It's a few comics such as Dragon Ball, which are now well received.,Although it has a master-level,Even more than a reputation.,But there are at least ten shortcomings.,But this comic.,It's actually only four.,How is it possible?,Is it that I'm ignoring something? ”

Forthwith; Li Feiyu looked at it carefully, with an extremely critical gaze, but an hour later, he still only identified these four shortcomings, and it was difficult to find them again.

"It's not scientific!"

Li Feiyu frowned, but after casually glancing at the time on the computer, he exclaimed: "Damn, it's actually past one o'clock in the morning, I actually read a cartoon for ten hours, that's it, and it's just picking out four shortcomings, this is simply a bit insulting to me Li Feiyu's combat effectiveness, no, I'm going to continue to look for it!" ”

But maybe it's the strength that has reached this point, or maybe this cartoon has indeed reached the level of an international master, so that Li Feiyu actually has no idea where to start, and after a long time, he made it to the chair in a decadent way: "This is impossible, this is impossible...... But! ”

Immediately, Li Feiyu became excited again: "If this comic is really a newcomer, then Yan Huangguo is undoubtedly a new star in comics, this is a major event in the entire comic industry!" ”

"No, I can't find it, it's not necessarily that others can't, I'll get rid of my senior brother tomorrow, this guy is a senior viper, his vision is much more powerful than mine, and he is also a street cartoonist, this is not comparable to ordinary comic book authors, so be it, I'll do it after I get up early tomorrow and go to work!"

At that moment, Li Feiyu immediately copied and pasted the comments in his saved zài document into the comments, and then glanced at it, only the floor occupied by the author, and the floor of his own comments, frowned and said: "The popularity of the forum has decreased a lot these days, and even the poisonous snake is not very enthusiastic, if it was before, there was such a comic, and now the number of comments has already exceeded ten, and now there are no other replies, alas! ”

Li Feiyu sighed, but he didn't think about it anymore, and only thought about finding his senior brother tomorrow.

At this time, Li Feiyu's post had just been published, and Fei Yu, one of the administrators, found out, and he was also extremely worried about the Feiyang Forum these days, after all, the impact of the Diwo Forum on them was too great, which made him extremely worried.

"Well, it seems that someone commented, Li Feiyu's kid?"

As he spoke, Fei Yu clicked into the comment post, and Fei Yang's extremely professional poisonous snakes, he clicked to follow, and if there was any latest news, he could know it immediately, so he soon entered the comment post.

"Four shortcomings, no more? This doesn't look like Li Feiyu's style! ”

Fei Yu's eyes showed surprise: "Could it be that even Li Feiyu has lost confidence in the forum and is a little disappointed in the identity of the poisonous snake?" ”

"No, it can't be, well, then look at this comic!"

While speaking, Fei Yu was pulled back to the main building of the post, and then he looked at it, like Li Feiyu, he was also extremely persistent in the comics, for the comment post, as long as he wanted to read it, then he would definitely read it seriously, and then make a poisonous snake comment according to whether he liked it or not.

Of course, when commenting, he will change into a vest, after all, he is one of the three administrators of Feiyang, and if the deity goes into battle, it will inevitably be criticized.

"The writing is extremely good, for what you want, the tone of the narrative is very clear, this author is not ordinary!"

nodded, and then Fei Yu looked directly at the comics, and at first glance, it gave him a feeling of amazement.

"This, how is this possible, is this comic approved by a top master who went into battle, is there a new work from that master, but ......"

Fei Yu didn't have the heart to think about it all of a sudden, because the comics had already attracted his attention, starting from the appearance of the protagonist, to the second act, the third act, one by one, the comics all gave him an amazing feeling, and the attraction to him was also increasing.

is different from Li Feiyu, who is just a master of commenting, Feiyu himself is also a cartoonist, although he is not very famous, but he is no longer a small cartoon author, but a cartoonist who can be fixed in the magazine serialization, with a small reputation, naturally he also knows the creation of comics, a little progress, it is extremely difficult, a cartoon, basically can show the skills of this cartoonist.

Obviously, Fei Yu doesn't think that this comic can be drawn by a newcomer, without the ability to grasp the comic, without a strong confidence in himself, he can't do it at all, and this style of painting is too mature, and the attraction is too great.

"Perfect!"

After reading it, Fei Yu couldn't help but admire, and muttered to himself: "Since the comics were sent to our Feiyang, then we Feiyang will definitely come according to the characteristics, Viper, that's for sure, although this is the best comic I've seen so far, it can be called perfect, surpassing the top masters, but there are definitely still shortcomings, Li Feiyu found four shortcomings, it seems that he didn't do his best!" ”

A spark flashed in Fei Yu's eyes, first of all, he directly used the administrator privileges to add refinement to the top of this comic, highlight the settings, and at the same time, after hesitating for a while, he directly gave a radio message, this is to exit the administrator account, and enter his vest account, the vest is called Yumo, this is his special trumpet, and the people in the forum are generally clear.

"Now let me challenge the difficulty, Li Feiyu finds four, then see if I can find five, I don't know which country's top master broke through, and actually created such comics, and the most important thing is that someone leaked it!"

Fei Yu knew that his previous operation was a great suspicion of adventure, but after all, the forum was only neutral, as long as others dared to upload, then before the official announcement, they naturally didn't have to deal with it, on the contrary, they could publicize it.

"Huh, maybe this will be an opportunity for Feiyang to rise, Feiyang's characteristics, has always been our belief, this time let's Feiyang use poisonous snakes, challenge this perfect work, presumably the real masters, will not be narrow-minded, or even ......"

After thinking of this, his eyes flashed with light, and he directly copied the comics, and then made an astonishing decision - disconnect the Internet!

Obviously, he wanted to be undisturbed all night and make comments, Fei Yu obviously took out a posture to challenge, and the spark of faith in his heart flickered, obviously being able to challenge the cartoonist who surpassed the top masters in his mind, and it was also an honor for him.

Although it is a verbal challenge, not a comic skill competition!

"Whew!"

The first time, just like Li Feiyu, he was completely attracted to the comics, but his customer service was very fast, and it was difficult for him to enter the state of review, little by little, analyzing the first scene of the comics...... (To be continued......)