44. Keep up the good work (medium)
Knowing where the problem was, Gu Yifang didn't have so many worries and entanglements in his heart, and he threw himself into his work, and soon it was time to get off work.
After getting off work, all the way leisurely, looking at the scenery outside the window, she suddenly thought, compared with the previous two sentences, the sense of the picture with the word "far crossing" is weakened a lot, silently thought for a while, and immediately had two alternatives in her heart, one is "across the sea", the other is "across the sea", and when she got off the car, she had already finalized the use of the word "crossing the sea".
With the scenery shown in the two sentences, it may be more appropriate to use words such as "crossing the sea" with a more specific sense of image, and it may be more appropriate to follow the text road, but it is really difficult to change the word "Yurong" again, she knows that using these two words is not quite consistent with an emotion she wants to express, but if you use words such as "now" and "today", there is less melancholy that people don't know after a hundred years.
When I got home, I thought I would think of insomnia, but I opened my eyes in a daze and realized that it was the next day, but my mind was still blank, until I stepped into the office and turned on the computer, and when I re-typed the verses, a word "looking at the present" popped up in my mind for no reason.
Finally completed the task at the last moment, after Gu Yifang handed over the poem, she was relieved, she thought that the change may not be very good, but this change is already the closest to the voice she wants to express, if you want to change it again, it should not be possible.
"Qingyang, you come." After lunch, Gu Yifang didn't wait for An Jiaqi's private chat, but waited for a dialogue group, which was An Jiaqila's temporary dialogue group, and she pulled Gu Yifang and Shao Qingyang in.
βοΌβ Shao Qingyang's avatar lit up and put a question mark.
An Jiaqi pasted the poem that Gu Fang had changed: "Nine-fold clouds and brocade Tang Palace rain, music and dance fly freely, crossing the sea and Fusang is not hate, I hope who remembers the old family today." Then he typed a line and asked, "Is this change complete?" β
Shao Qingyang gave an ellipsis line: "......" seems to be silent.
Within a few seconds, An Jiaqi typed a sentence in the temporary dialogue group: "I didn't change it, your student Gu Yifang changed it himself." β
"......" was followed by a string of ellipses, it seems that most of them were Shao Qingyang asking An Jiaqi in a private chat if she changed it, but An Jiaqi answered Shao Qingyang in front of the three of them.
"I said it could be improved." An Jiaqi's unrelenting temperament is really more of a headache than Zijin, Zijin's reluctance is often her own shouting over there, An Jiaqi's reluctance is simply the feeling of holding a sword on someone else's neck.
Shao Qingyang posted a smile and said, "It's a good change." β
An Jiaqi said: "It's good, I was almost killed by you." β
"......" Shao Qingyang is another string of ellipses, but this time he followed the sentence: "One party is writing for the first time." β
An Jiaqi replied: "What? If you don't tell her that there is a problem, if she can be better, there is no way to be better, and if she can't be better, there is no chance to recognize her own shortcomings. β
"Your teacher spoils you too much." After An Jiaqi finished training Shao Qingyang, the spearhead pointed at Gu Fang again, "You have to pay attention to yourself in the future." β
Although the way and attitude were aggressive, Gu Fang admitted that An Jiaqi was not wrong, so she typed: "Well, thank you Jiaqi for correcting." β
"Well, it's nothing, I'm down." An Jiaqi came and went like the wind, and the avatar dimmed in an instant, leaving Shao Qingyang and Gu Yifang, who were looking at each otherβif they were sitting face to face, the two of them would definitely have such expressions.
"One side, I'm sorry, Xiaoqi is such a straight person, she has no malicious intent." Shao Qingyang explained, "It's the first time you can write like this, I'm really surprised, so I posted it in the group of Dongli Society, and she saw ......, Xiaoqi is a little persistent in poetry, don't take it to heart." β
"Teacher Shao......" Gu Yifang watched Shao Qingyang keep explaining in the dialogue group, and couldn't help but remind: "This is the ...... of the dialogue group, and Jiaqi can also see it." β
So the dialogue group fell into silence completely, Gu Fang couldn't help but hold his forehead, prop himself on the table and laugh, this Teacher Shao is really simple and cute.
"You're not angry, are you?" Soon, Shao Qingyang had a private chat.
"No, there's nothing to be angry about." Gu Yifang has long been accustomed to Aunt Gu's unreasonable and unruly aggressiveness, and An Jiaqi is so reasonable, polite and polite aggressive, but she feels that it is quite useful, not to mention that it is indeed beneficial, so there is really nothing to be angry about, "I should also thank her." β
"That's good." Shao Qingyang posted a sighing expression, "I'm afraid you'll give up." β
Gu Yifang was in front of the screen, lowered his head and shook his head with a smile, and then typed the line and said: "Please rest assured, Mr. Shao, I will not give up the National Style Society, nor will I give up writing poetry." β
Shao Qingyang replied with a smile in his default expression and said, "That's good, there is a class in the afternoon, let's go down first, and talk back." β
"Well, let's talk about it." In just a few words of dialogue, Gu Yifang was in a good mood for some reason, and at the same time, he recalled Shao Qingyang's affectionate name to An Jiaqi, and there was a strange curiosity in his heart.
"National style Spring Festival Gala?" After getting off work, on the bus, Gu Yifang and Zhang Jiawei chatted on the phone again.
Zhang Jiawei said: "Yes, haven't you read the post in the past two days?" The management team of the national wind bar has made an announcement, and this matter has finally come to a conclusion. β
"I'm ......, I haven't paid attention to it when I'm busy with work these days, and I'll go to the Internet cafΓ© after dinner for a while." Gu Fang told a little lie, but the corners of his mouth couldn't help but smile, and there was an indescribable happiness in his heart.
"Well, look at it yourself, I think this result is pretty good, by the way, my cherry blossom national style map has also been drawn, Q version, wait for me to come back and show you." Zhang Jiawei's voice was bright and uplifting, which made Gu Yifang curious.
When he got home, he saw that the door was open, and there were voices talking loudly, mixed with exaggerated laughter, Gu Fang couldn't help frowning, and stepped into the house, only to see Gu's mother's small bedroom and living room, there were two people sitting on the sofa coffee table, one old and one young.
"Mom......" Gu Yifang's joyful mood suddenly disappeared, she had only heard a few words, and she already knew that these two people were here to sell insurance.
"Fang Fang, call someone quickly, this is Mother Chen, this is ...... Call my brother ......" Gu's mother pointed to the shirt, and the young man with a shiny face hesitated.
The young man turned around and said, "Auntie, you are too polite, just call me Xiao Wang." β
"Hahaha." The person who was called Chen's mother laughed exaggeratedly and said: "Aidi, you are really joking, where is there still a brother now, you are really true." β
ββ¦β¦γβ Gu Yifang's face was full of displeasure, so he simply shut up.
Seeing her like this, Gu's mother couldn't help but say to the smiling face of Mother Chen: "She's like this, the more she lives, the more she goes back, now she really doesn't understand any politeness, and she refuses to scream when she sees people." β
Chen's mother laughed again: "It's okay, the little girl is shy, look at how delicate your daughter is, it's really beautiful." β
Gu's mother said: "Where is it good-looking, our children, the most ugly is her, and she is always lifeless, I really feel sad." β
Chen's mother said: "Nonsense, I think the little girl is very good, isn't it, Xiao Wang." β
Xiao Wang, who was full of oil, hurriedly responded: "Yes, yes, it's better for the little girl to be quiet." β
Chen's mother immediately answered: "Your little girl is so honest, you should help her plan, this insurance is really quite cost-effective, what are the benefits, I told you just now, and if you participate now, we also organize a day trip around the area, and your daughter is older and working, you should also enjoy the blessings." β
Chen's mother was clever and clever, Gu Fang only felt depressed when she heard it, but she couldn't refute it on the spot, and finally Xiao Wang and Chen's mother made a look and said, "Teacher Chen, you see that the time is not early." β
"Ouch, yes, look at me, I'm sorry to disturb you for dinner, I'm sorry, we're leaving, I'm sorry." Chen's mother was busy putting away the materials and preparing to leave.
"You're in such a hurry, do you want to have dinner together?" Gu's mother's enthusiasm made Gu Fang feel full of dark clouds.
The two of them naturally refused, and after a while, they walked cleanly, leaving only two empty glasses on the coffee table.