Putting away his messy thoughts, Li Zexuan began to read the news seriously.

Of course, it is undeniable that the title of Li Yu's news has achieved very well, compared with the later dynasties, the Tang Dynasty's folk customs are more open, and the people like to listen to these love stories of men and women, talented and beautiful women, Li Yu can attract people to continue to read with this title.

After a while, Li Zexuan finished reading the first news, he nodded, and then shook his head again, Li Yu originally came to see Li Zexuan nodded, and he was happy, but Li Zexuan shook his head again, and the smile on Li Yu's face that had not yet bloomed suddenly froze.

"Uh, boss, what do you think? Why do you nod your head and shake your head? ”

Li Yu asked out loud.

Li Zexuan glanced at Li Yu and said, "I nodded, I think the title of your news is very good, and the content is not bad!" ”

"Not bad? Then the owner just thinks I can write better about this content? ”

Li Yu immediately found out the crux of the problem from the two adjectives used by Li Zexuan.

"Hey, smart!"

Li Zexuan sighed, and then explained: "It is undeniable that the story you chose Xiao Yu'er is very attractive, and it is quite clear before and after, but in my opinion, this is not enough." ”

When Li Yu heard this, he cast a curious look at Li Zexuan, Li Zexuan smiled, and walked towards the pavilion with Li Yu, saying as he walked:

"Hehe, Xiaoyuer, don't be unconvinced, there is a reason why I say this, first of all, your whole news article gives people a feeling of being overlooked, your description of the event is very general, very broad and boring, which directly leads to the lack of substitution in your whole story. If you have a good subject matter, but you don't describe a complete story with full of emotions of the characters, the reader will only taste like chewing wax when you read it. ”

Li Yu leaned on the stone table, lowered his head and muttered depressedly, "Is it so bad?" ”

Li Zexuan sat down and chuckled: "It's not almost, the reason why I told you so much today is also for your own good, of course, more precisely, I want you to make more money, do you still want to hear it?" ”

"I want to hear it, I want to hear it! Boss, speak quickly! ”

Hearing the money, Li Yu instantly became interested, and the depression that had just been hit by Li Zexuan was also swept away.

"Hehe, you girl!"

Li Zexuan smiled and said: "On your subject, let me write it, I can write at least thirty or forty thousand words, and I can publish five or six issues in the newspaper in a row, you see, the rich man Mo Wujian and the peasant girl Shu Yinglian met this paragraph, you can describe Shu Yinglian at home at the time, was bullied by the village bully, how desperate and helpless her heart was, and how shocked Mo Wuxian was when she saw Shu Yinglian's peerless face.

Of course, the most important thing is that the part where Mo Wujian stepped forward to save Shu Yinglian must be described in detail, how can you finish such an important scene in two sentences? The foreshadowing in front of you is all for the sake of pretending to be slapped in the face here, ahh

Also, Mo Wuji's father, when Mo Yunshan objected to his son's relationship with Shu Yinglian, Mo Wuji's contradictions, self-blame and helplessness at that time, why didn't you write it? Shu Yinglian couldn't be with her beloved, and jumped into the river in anger, why don't you put yourself in Shu Yinglian's shoes and think about Shu Yinglian's despair, reluctance, and tragedy at that time? This is the place that can poke the reader's tears the most! You've got to describe it well.

Also, after Mo Wujian learned that his beloved jumped into the river, his loneliness, sadness, anger, and finally grief, his heart was like ashes, he went to the temple, cut his hair and became a monk, this place, you also have to focus on rendering, these are all words, they are all money! As a journalist, if you don't know how to write a word, phew, if you don't know how to write about something, then you won't make much money........"

Li Zexuan was there gushing to Li Yu about how to fill the news with water, how to write one news as five news, this thing completely forgot that he was the boss of "Datang Daily", Li Yu really did this, but it was his own money that was pitted.

Li Yu was on the side, she was dumbfounded, she really wanted to kneel for Li Zexuan, how could the boss personally teach employees how to find ways to pit the boss's money! Also, the "irrigation" that Li Zexuan gave her, ahh

"Ahem!"

At this time, there was a light cough next to him, it turned out to be Ma Zhou, he just came out to breathe, but he didn't expect to meet Li Zexuan who was "teaching" Li Yu, the more he listened, the more he felt that something was wrong, and hurriedly interrupted.

"Eh, Brother Ma, are you here?"

Li Zexuan looked at Ma Zhou's expression, and knew that he had heard what he had just said, and his expression was a little embarrassed for a while.

"Hello Uncle Ma~!"

Li Yu remembered what Li Zexuan had told her before, "Usually if you have something, your Uncle Ma can still give you a response", she stepped forward and shouted sweetly.

"Damn~! When did Lao Tzu become an uncle? Yesterday you were still calling me a horse steward! ”

Ma Zhougang took two steps, and when he heard Li Yu's words, he suddenly stumbled, if it weren't for Li Zexuan's quick reaction and raising his hand, it is estimated that he would have fallen into a dog to chew.

"What's wrong? Isn't the little girl called wrong? Brother Ma, why did you react so much? ”

Li Zexuan teased with a wicked smile.

Ma Zhou was speechless, what else could he say, he could only secretly scold Li Zexuan in his heart for teaching bad children, he was sure that this must have been taught to Li Yu by Li Zexuan.

"Is there anything important that the lord came here today?"

Ma Zhou calmed down and asked.

"Well, don't worry, wait until I finish reading Xiaoyuer's news, I haven't read one more! Oh, Brother Ma, you came just in time, you can also take a look at how Xiaoyu'er's news is written! ”

Li Zexuan handed the article he had just finished reading "A rich prodigal, but escaped into the empty door for his lover" to Ma Zhou, and he picked up another piece of news and began to read it.

Ma Zhou had no choice but to be patient, sat down, and began to watch the news.

",! This little girl is doing something! ”

Li Zexuan almost screamed when he saw the second news headline, without him, this headline was too exciting, so he saw that it read: "A woman was in the wild, and ......her clothes were stolen by a man."

Li Zexuan touched his nose, it seems that Li Yu is going to carry out the title party to the end, hey, I don't know if it's a blessing or a curse.

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Thank you for being so proud, half a heart, fate and luck, the world is cold, I love you alone, fake you (brother is back again!) Tips!

Thank you fate, luck, Wang Zhijian、........、 Fake You Variant, Zhenzhen, there is always a monthly pass that Diao Min wants to harm me!

(End of chapter)