There are more than 50,000 words, and Liu Hong can barely sit on the throne, so I will talk to you about my feelings.

From Liu Hong's waking up to escaping from Weiyang Palace, he witnessed the history of 'the Son of Heaven is here, where does the foot come from', I personally think that this paragraph is handled quite well, and it basically restores the historical facts.

After Liu Hong escaped from the palace, he decided to regain the throne out of a desire to survive, but in a hurry, he had no other way but to learn from Zhou Bo's practices in history and plot against the Northern Army; And by showing his toughness in front of the people of Chang'an and the soldiers of the Northern Army, he returned to the palace smoothly, and I feel pretty good about this paragraph.

Then came the first Chang Dynasty, Liu Hong used both soft and hard, splashed and rolled, and even made bad moves, confirming Xiahou Ying's crime; And the initial differentiation of the courtiers, I don't think this paragraph is perfect, but it has been revised many times, and it can't be written better, so it can only be like this first, and then slowly hone the pen power.

After Wang Ling's 'teacher table' and palace banquet, the first small plot came to an end.

I think the overall rhythm is quite qualified, and the long broken lines that should be buried are also buried, and the buried is good from the feedback, no one has seen it yet, and it has gradually entered the state, I don't know how everyone feels.

In terms of character building, I am still a little young, I hope you can be patient, I will slowly hone my skills and get better and better; Personally, I think that the better role created at the moment is Wang Ling, and the others are somewhat blunt, and I will slowly hone my pen skills.

In the past ten days, I haven't actually been writing, the book started to be written in early July, and was published in early August, leaving 1780,000 manuscripts. Until today, the big guys have successfully lifted me up, and I can also look forward to the first order of 100+ after the shelves.

Thank you very much for arranging a recommendation for me so early.

Because of everyone's praise and success, I was actually a little disappointed with this slightly lower starting line. But it doesn't matter, the mentality is very stable, and the level will be stable in the future.

At the end of the revision phase, I asked my friends out tonight to relax and treat myself, or to take a long vacation with my friends—for a long time after that, I should have closed my door and focused on writing.

Tomorrow, I will wake up with a hangover with Liu Hong and continue to lead everyone on a tour of Hanting.

Stay tuned.

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Slipped away, drank it. (Manual Funny)