Huang Qi's face was gloomy, his eyes were a little hideous, if he allowed it at this time, he would have stepped forward to find Rong Tianyuan desperately.

However, for this Huang Qi's eyes and expression, Rong Tianyuan turned a blind eye and heard it, although this expression was terrifying, it was not very scary, as a soldier from the army, if he could be frightened by this look, then he was afraid that he would live in vain.

"Hehe, I can't answer it now, but I just need to give me a cup of tea, and I can naturally taste what is wrong in Miss Zhongyuan's poem and give my opinion." Huang Qi smiled angrily:

"As for you, a person who doesn't understand poetry and doesn't know anything about it, still dares to speak wildly, saying that as long as I can stump you, I still have the ability, it's really funny, you can't even taste this poem, what qualifications do you have to let me come up with the question? Who is qualified to guide me? ”

"Hahaha......" Hearing Huang Qi's words, Rong Tianyuan couldn't help but laugh twice, and sneered: "Funny? I'm funny, it's funny. I said that I am only a shallow learner, and I don't understand poetry, that is, I really don't use poetry? I'm just talking. ”

"If a man says, 'You are my son and I am your father,' will you believe that? It's really a retard, and I don't know how I got to where I am now. ”

As soon as Rong Tianyuan's words came out, everyone sitting here couldn't help but shake their heads a little and wanted to laugh, they didn't expect Rong Tianyuan to be such an interesting person, this is a very ordinary person, they look completely different, and people can't help but look at it twice.

However, although the words are very vulgar, they are very reasonable, after all, what others say, you believe it, just like what people just said, "You are my son, I am your father", it can't really be.

However, they also didn't understand why Huang Qi jumped out and humiliated Rong Tianyuan like this.

"You ......" Rong Tianyuan's words directly made Huang Qi infarcted, pointing at the former and unable to say a word for a long time, and finally had to flick his sleeves heavily and said: "Hmph, I don't want to say so much to you, a martial artist, since you say this, it means that you can do it, then you can do it now." ”

"Yo, just angry? Hehe, but don't provoke me, play the agitation method in front of me, but it's a very childish behavior, if you can't kill the enemy at that time, but if you lose 800 yourself, then it will be more than worth the loss. ”

Rong Tianyuan said this. The style of painting suddenly changed, and looking at Yuan Yushi's expression towards Huang Qi, he said with a gentle smile:

"However, I didn't want such trouble, but now it's like this, then I'll give you some advice, it's nothing, but wait a minute, if there's anything wrong, I hope Miss Yuan will forgive me."

First scolded and humiliated Huang Qi without giving face, and as he changed his painting style, he looked at the harmless appearance of the whole person and animals, as if what happened just now had nothing to do with him.

When Yuan Yushi heard Rong Tianyuan's words, she was slightly stunned, she didn't know that this person just said that she couldn't do it, and she looked unwilling, why she was suddenly willing to come and give her some guidance. But after thinking about it slightly, you can understand that this should be the reason why Huang Qi faced him just now.

But since people are willing to come out and give advice, that's the best, no matter what they say is right or not, it's also a good thing to listen to opinions.

Yuan Yushi nodded slightly and said, "Okay, since Gongzi Rong wants to give advice, even if you can give advice, I can just listen quietly." ”

I didn't care about what Rong Tianyuan said was wrong, since others wanted to point out, then we had to accept it with an open mind, instead of hating others because of what others said too much, even if others said something wrong, just treat it as if I didn't hear it.

This Yuan Yushi agreed, and the rest of the people around looked at Rong Tianyuan in unison, wanting to see what he said. Even Xia Wanyi, Xia Yuxuan, Xia Ziang and others all looked at it with curiosity.

I saw Rong Tianyuan take two steps slightly and said: "If it is really according to the level of this kind of poetry, the poems made by Miss Yuan, in general, are also very good, but if they are the works of the gods, they are still very different, I believe this, Miss Yuan, Wanyi, Yuxuan and others should be able to taste it." ”

Speaking of which, look at these people. And these people all nodded in unison, indicating that it was just as Rong Tianyuan said.

"Light yarn smoke willow warbler language, incense scattered flowers one by one. The West Lake is connected to the Sugong embankment, a willow and a peach. Rong Tianyuan was chanting softly, the poem that Yuan Yu had just done, nodded and said:

"Let's put aside some of this poem, just look at what we want to express, it can be said to be very good, and it is also appropriate for the situation, but if you want to taste it deeply, you can find that some of the words in this poem are wrong."

"For example, this "light yarn green smoke warbler", this "light yarn" I think is Miss Yuan's description of this hazy mist, and what does this "green smoke" refer to? Does it refer to the green smoke of the houses, or the hazy mist? If it refers to fog, isn't it a contradiction here? So here, Miss Wangyuan will explain that what you are referring to. ”

Hearing Rong Tianyuan's question, Yuan Yushi smiled and explained: "Hehe, Rong Gongzi, the green smoke here refers to the water vapor in the West Lake water, and this water vapor is so similar to smoke, I want to use green smoke to describe it, it is the best." If Rong Gongzi doesn't believe it, you can come forward and take a look at the water vapor on the surface of the water. ”

When everyone heard Yuan Yu's poem's words, they all went to the shore to take a look, and it was really as Yuan Yu's poem said.

However, Rong Tianyuan didn't look at it, he heard Yuan Yushi explain, since he believed his words, and there was water vapor in the fog water, this one was a physical reason, how could he not know.

"I see, okay, this is known, then let's talk about the next sentence." Rong Tianyuan nodded slightly and said:

"Your second sentence is "the fragrance of scattered flowers from person to person", "fragrance of flowers" is the fragrance of flowers, "scattered flowers" is the petals that fall in the wind, and "by people" should be pedestrians coming and going on this Su Causeway, but the word "by you" here is very problematic. ”

"The word 'chase', but to explain its meaning, it is the meaning of chasing, driving, and how can this pedestrian describe it in this sense, do you say yes, Miss Yuan." When Rong Tianyuan said this, he looked at Yuan Yushi with a rhetorical expression.

"Ah......" Hearing Rong Tianyuan pick out the wrong words in his poem, he was slightly surprised, especially when he heard his explanation, his face was even more blushing, obviously he was a little embarrassed about this matter. However, he still nodded slightly, looked at Rong Tianyuan with a look of inquiry, and said, "Then I don't know Mr. Rong, what word should I change the word 'chase' to?" ”

Yuan Yushi was not called by Gongzi Gongzi at this time, but directly changed his name, calling Rong Tianyuan Mr., the word Mr. refers to the teacher here, and this Yuan Yushi also regarded Rong Tianyuan as his own teacher at this time. After all, people are guiding you at this time and correcting your mistakes for you, and what's the harm in calling a teacher, as long as you can learn knowledge, you can call anyone a teacher.

The surrounding Xia Wanyi, Xia Yuxuan, Qin Huaiyue and others all listened carefully to Rong Tianyuan's explanation, and even Huang Qi, who had just made Rong Tianyuan a bargain, listened quietly, but his expression was interesting and disdainful.

"Hehe, what to change, there are a lot of changes, it depends on what words Miss Yuan thinks of instead, I won't say anything more." However, Rong Tianyuan didn't care at all about Yuan Yushi calling himself Mr., and he didn't answer for Yuan Yushi, but continued:

"Let's continue to the next sentence, this 'West Lake Liantian Sugong Dike,' you are referring to Sugong Dike, but you use Sugong Dike again, isn't this a repeated contradiction? If it is changed to 'West Lake Su Causeway Six Bridges', isn't it slightly better? Say you are or not, Miss Yuan. ”

Rong Tianyuan asked again, Yuan Yushi nodded directly, and did not say anything.

Rong Tianyuan glanced at everyone and said: "This last sentence is still a good sentence, the one in front can form a good echo, and I also thought of a good poem based on Miss Yuan's words, I hope you can help me taste it." ”

"The thick smoke of the willows and the Tibetan warbler speak, and the fragrance scatters the wind and flowers chase the horseshoe. West Lake scenery six bridges, a willow and a peach. ”

Shameless, extremely shameless, shameless, invincible!!

This poem was written by a sage in his world, how did it suddenly become his work, and it became his Rong Tianyuan's verses?

However, in this world, there is no such poem, and it is not an exaggeration to say that it was written by him.

"Pop ......"

"Hiss......"

When Rong Tianyuan said that he was going to make a poem too, some people were curious, some people didn't think about it, and some just wanted to know.

When Rong Tianyuan's voice fell, there was an eerie silence all around, and everyone opened their mouths wide, took a breath in unison, and looked at Rong Tianyuan in disbelief. Especially Yuan Yu's poem, because of the poem that Rong Tianyuan chanted, some words and sentences are in her poems, and after Rong Tianyuan's modification, it is completely heaven and earth when it comes out of her mouth.

Now who is better and which is stronger, at this time it is also clear.

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