Volume 2 Summary!
It took more than a month, and the second volume of the lone wolf chasing the phoenix chapter was finally over, because of the change of the outline, to be honest, the middle of the second volume was a bit messy.
From the beginning of writing Xiaodu Dudu, it was a volume of exactly 200,000 words, and the deviation would not exceed 5,000 words, but as a result, this volume was written with 250,000 words, and the main reason was Gongsun Ming's problem.
Originally, Hu Yanjie's fake envoy team entered Beijing, which was a plot to investigate the case, and then Gongsun Ming ran out and said that Xu Buling was aware of everything, and he was forced to pretend to be forced like several plots in the first volume, forming an early climax, but it turned out that this method was unpleasant, and then it was changed.
The price of changing it is very high, and it moves the whole body with a hair, fills the plot of Renyi Hall with the plot of Little Peach Blossom, and then moves the climax to Yingchun Building.
Because there was no foreshadowing, the plot of Yingchun Lou was not very good, and Fu Bao directly carried the black pot, and then disappeared directly for thirty chapters before he eased up.
Because the second volume belongs to the connection between the previous and the next, it was relatively bland, and the climax was not pulled up in the early stage, and the result was that the whole volume looked like it was all daily, although the daily was okay, but it just happened to be on the shelf, and it was also naked to the shelf, and the heart of chasing it was ...... Alas......
The second volume is summed up in one sentence, that is, 'Xu Buling found clues from the case library to follow, locked his eyes on the imperial city, but found nothing, and then Zhongli Chuchu provided an unexpected news, thus detoxifying'.
The key to this volume lies in the news that Zhongli Chuchu, and from this point on, the protagonist goes his own way out of the predetermined track.
In the eyes of the layout, Xu Buling is in a state of checkmate, and there is no way out at all, and it is believed to be the case so far.
But the unexpected news sent by Zhongli Chuchu widened the information gap, allowing Xu Buling not to go down the road booked by the layout, but to run to the queen mother's ......
If a chess player doesn't know where his chess pieces are, the result can be imagined.
I'll leave that for the third volume.
Then there are the controversial points of the second volume.
Let's not talk about Yingchun Building, there is no problem with handling it, but the plot arrangement is not good, which makes Fu Bao carry a big cauldron.
And then the little peach blossoms. Little Peach Blossom may not appear until the later stage, after all, it takes time to grow up, and when the time comes, it will probably be: 'Holding an iron gun and carrying an ingot; A favor must be repaid, and a blood revenge must be avenged. Such a ruthless character.
The second thing is to go to the inner house alone, there is no problem in killing Jia Yi for the first time, and it is indeed a bit too reckless to run to the emperor for the second time, but it is only a temptation in the past, with the meaning of luck, and ...... Some storylines must be more unreasonable, if they are reasonable, they will not see the queen mother, which is more reasonable than seeing the princess taking a wild bath in the wilderness.
After the New Year, there is basically no big plot, the arrangement of the characters and the like, there is a reason why Ning Qingye has no sense of existence, because the later pages are relatively long, and each heroine (including Zhu Manzhi, Song Yufu) and so on basically has a big plot, so I won't go into detail here.
At the end of the 'decisive battle at the top of Taiji', to be honest, I really want to write 'the night of the full moon, the top of the Forbidden City, a sword from the west, flying immortals outside the sky', but it's a pity that the level of Gu Long is too high, it must not be comparable, but it can be regarded as a small wish.
There is also 'the two Manchu and Korean civil and military forces pay attention to a small competition, which is a bit of a child's play'.
This should be explained, to paraphrase the explanation of a book friend: my country's table tennis is the first in the world, and the top ones are all the national teams. Just like one day, a person ran to the Bird's Nest, in front of the whole country, he wore three and won the first place, and said "That's it?" Obviously, it can't be called child's play.
According to the setting, Dayue is martial arts for all the people, and he has many heroes in the Central Plains, but he was suddenly hit by a barbarian, and he wore three under the emperor's nose, and the emperor personally presented the award.
If this is all treated as a child's play by the emperor, harmony is just to marry a daughter, and the tribute is just to give a little silver, so much silver, women are everywhere, and there is no shortage of this point, if you don't fight the military expenses, maybe you can build a garden for Lafayette, how auspicious.
The focus of this competition is not in the competition, to put it bluntly, it is a breath, as the saying goes, 'an inch of mountains and rivers and an inch of blood', no matter how small things are in front of the country, they cannot be trampled on.
There is also the Queen Mother's teaching, 'The eldest husband should be born when he is born, and he should die when he dies,'.
It is incumbent upon the eldest husband to sacrifice his life for the country when he should die, and to live when he can't die by gritting his teeth and enduring humiliation. There is no need to give examples, and there are so many heroic ancestors in ancient times, and there is no need to give examples.
The Queen Mother taught Xu Buling like this, asking him to take his eyes off the 'incurable' Lock Dragon Gu and pay attention to some things that the vassal king should pay attention to, which is no problem.
Take a step back, 'if you should live, you will live, and when you die, you will die' is together, Xu Buling's murderer was not found, and the revenge was not avenged, it should not be gritting his teeth and enduring humiliation and living, how can it be understood that the Queen Mother let Xu Buling die.
As for why the Queen Mother saved Xu Buling, I won't go into detail about this, anyway, if you change someone to fight the Taiji Palace, the Queen Mother will definitely not save it, and some things will be boring to write.
The third volume of the Angry Sea Dragon Slaying Chapter is the end of the Chang'an volume, I don't know how many words there are, but it is estimated that 200,000 words will not be completed.
That's all for now, and the rest is left for the next volume summary.
In order to continue the chapter today, all of them were sent out, and there was not a drop left.
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